the family don't ask questions

2tripple0 · 02-15-2018, 06:11 PM

the family don't ask questions
by 2tripple0

theres always a reason before a hit forces itself in
so I roll a blizz and rethink my life since a soldier'll end it on a whim
they'll put an end to beef before it get to that point anymore
so nobody feel like stepping when we aint kids like we was before
i wanna create a life first before i go I haven't thought things out tho
I mean this one young girl fill me with warmth like a cup of joe
but she ain't figured if I can make that real cash when I drop the flow
so I kick it with my boys just thinking even though we tired a shit yo
the street seem like the only life we can live so before you can speak
you gots to know the deal its real right that's why it's so hard to succeed
I'm a true g with an eye for making dudes gasp from what I seen
so even though everyone lay low we still gotta make this cash
see cause maybe we just make this loot and came up a bit too fast
er whatever but sometimes ya enemies know you the best
and they listen to ya shit but my thoughts still don't seem to address
the only ones close to me seem to be just a few true dudes
they throwdown on my lines so i hide them where there aren't any clues
this shit is real I gotta stay deep pull some shit out quick that i can drop
since this rap game aint hard but still nothing get past the block
I gotta rethink my shit cause we can sit here talking about all this shit
but I guess there ain't much out there cause I've already put an end to it
so now I'm leaving a little freestyle for my boys to relate to
if you understood there'd be nothing left out there to explain you...
since i was 14... i been running deep even when there was nothing left to do...

Geno · 02-19-2018, 11:14 PM

Enjoyes this. I think people be sleeping on 2tripps message half the time. Writing is drawn out a lot. This one is a little better as far as the rhyming goes imo. I think trip got some gems in all his verses though if you look for it. Good shit dude. Keep writing

Lyriscologist · 02-21-2018, 01:59 PM

need some improvement, flow was real choppy, shorten up the syllable count per line and focus on condensing them to fit in smooth multis, which you also need to work on.. content was decent, just get the rhymes, multis and structure down and you can elevate reeeal quick, keep it up!

Mr. J · 02-28-2018, 02:01 AM

Hey man...its nice to see you trying. great job buddy!

Eŋg · 03-04-2018, 09:33 PM

2trip the truth tbh

2tripple0 · 04-30-2018, 02:16 PM

Thanks guys thats great feedback brothers

02-15-2018, 06:11 PM	#1
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	the family don't ask questions the family don't ask questions by 2tripple0 theres always a reason before a hit forces itself in so I roll a blizz and rethink my life since a soldier'll end it on a whim they'll put an end to beef before it get to that point anymore so nobody feel like stepping when we aint kids like we was before i wanna create a life first before i go I haven't thought things out tho I mean this one young girl fill me with warmth like a cup of joe but she ain't figured if I can make that real cash when I drop the flow so I kick it with my boys just thinking even though we tired a shit yo the street seem like the only life we can live so before you can speak you gots to know the deal its real right that's why it's so hard to succeed I'm a true g with an eye for making dudes gasp from what I seen so even though everyone lay low we still gotta make this cash see cause maybe we just make this loot and came up a bit too fast er whatever but sometimes ya enemies know you the best and they listen to ya shit but my thoughts still don't seem to address the only ones close to me seem to be just a few true dudes they throwdown on my lines so i hide them where there aren't any clues this shit is real I gotta stay deep pull some shit out quick that i can drop since this rap game aint hard but still nothing get past the block I gotta rethink my shit cause we can sit here talking about all this shit but I guess there ain't much out there cause I've already put an end to it so now I'm leaving a little freestyle for my boys to relate to if you understood there'd be nothing left out there to explain you... since i was 14... i been running deep even when there was nothing left to do... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-19-2018, 11:14 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,324 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Enjoyes this. I think people be sleeping on 2tripps message half the time. Writing is drawn out a lot. This one is a little better as far as the rhyming goes imo. I think trip got some gems in all his verses though if you look for it. Good shit dude. Keep writing __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-28-2018, 02:01 AM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,022 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Hey man...its nice to see you trying. great job buddy! __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

04-30-2018, 02:16 PM	#6
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Thanks guys thats great feedback brothers __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-21-2018, 01:59 PM	#3
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95177	need some improvement, flow was real choppy, shorten up the syllable count per line and focus on condensing them to fit in smooth multis, which you also need to work on.. content was decent, just get the rhymes, multis and structure down and you can elevate reeeal quick, keep it up!

03-04-2018, 09:33 PM	#5
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,145 Rep Power: 0	2trip the truth tbh