02-08-2018, 04:06 PM | #1 |
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prairie prairie
i was obsessed. no- a feeling remorse and nostalgia
stretches of gold over algae. prairie turf interwoven to coast bezeled beach. denizen dosage. felt closer to home juniper fire, i never understood why i’d cry when alone something about … fingertip tingle. hands nestled over a looming horizon open field just for me, dusks pyre was just another surprise take you to tango to feel the revolver in your dress like a fire in duress, in denial of what’s left crested wheatgrass. nibble on the straw and just think how irrevocably stunning, in french, how do you say pour me a drink? verse-moi un verre. sunsets fill in oblivion, storm in a teacup now pour me a lion. i want to hear a roar when the steam runs now stare into silence. tick-tock. just give me a second moment of quiet. russian roulette, soldiers are dying we all saw it coming, how do they say it was an issue of days? of course; a matter of time, discontinue answers left unobtained delicate heartship, melancholy quenches the hollow vanguard in the shadow, he only says hello in the shade yearning acceptance -chicken soup in the thermos chai seed tai chi. only read a book when it rains what is your purpose – he who barely looks in the eye hello, miss I’m sorry to interrupt you but i’m- pupil dilation, iris diameter entropy wavelet psychosomatic belly dive into the stasis denim delight, dandelion prairie design chewing on straw, crinkling grime grimacing smile i return to this place and try to mimic a scene no return on ideas, we’re stuck living a dream |
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02-09-2018, 05:40 PM | #3 |
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I like reading these pieces that string words together that correlate with each other and gets my mind just going thru different thought processes. This was a provocative read. The first two stanzas drew the picture and the last section of the finishing paint touch. Good stuff, sir.
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02-10-2018, 01:19 AM | #4 |
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"we all saw it coming, how do they say it was an issue of days?
of course; a matter of time" i see ya there. lol russian roulette line that preceded this was also fucking excellent be back later this weekend
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02-11-2018, 08:35 PM | #5 |
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'pupil dilation, iris diameter entropy wavelet
psychosomatic belly dive into the stasis denim delight, dandelion prairie design chewing on straw, crinkling grime grimacing smile' The way you arrange your stream of thought by stringing words of quite different (at times even opposing) values together is highly intriguing. There's some beauty between the lines. I'm also quite fond of the few alliterations you employed, further elevating the read for me. 'Juniper fire' was fantastic as well. |
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03-04-2018, 10:02 PM | #7 |
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this was pretty.
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07-05-2018, 01:00 AM | #8 |
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if i had any skill i'd write something cloning your style for people's amusement. But I don't think i have the skill.
but i'd have to do one for dead man too. sunsets fill in oblivion, storm in a teacup now pour me a lion. i want to hear a roar when the steam runs really? pupil dilation, iris diameter entropy wavelet what does this mean? You're just stringing words together bro Sorry I'm just reading some older pieces on this OM section and I came upon this...it's like your style on steroids. I just don't get it I'm sorry. denim delight, dandelion prairie design WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY LOL |
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