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Aero vs Wanderer[OPEN]
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@Aero vs @Wanderer Last edited by Inno; 06-27-2019 at 07:39 AM. |
06-21-2019, 04:57 AM | #2 |
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06-25-2019, 10:22 AM | #3 |
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06-26-2019, 03:38 AM | #4 |
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it. No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search |
06-27-2019, 03:59 AM | #5 |
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Wanderer vs Sinacog.
Sinacog wins 3-0. Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse? LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline... like a Sincaog verse That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!"
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06-28-2019, 01:47 AM | #6 |
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Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup Meh Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement* Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment* Ok Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces Wording off Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it.* No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet* No & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit* Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets* Decent seen it though Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search Cool Seen the nose to ear flip before but was ok the stop and search was new to me...other than that I didn't like too much...just ok That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle Ok STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse Decentish She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" Nah I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap* Cool Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!" Lol Almost was a flop verse here with that blueprints line but the last two again was the best here nothing much else to show for it...dead horse was decent I guess flowed better throughout...better final 2 bars...better consistency...vote...aero |
06-28-2019, 04:12 PM | #7 |
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup I thought this was cool. Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment This was cool. Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces Lol, this was cool. Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it. No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet This was cool. Nice. & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets LOL! Nice. Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search This was cool. Aero - That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle Lmao, this was cool. STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse This was cool. She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" I thought this was cool. I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap Nice one here. Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!" Lmao, this was cool. Overall - Cool battle, I have Aero winning.. |
06-29-2019, 12:51 AM | #8 |
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & searc vs hat's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!" damnnnnnnnnnnn. i read this three time I thought Wanderer was gonna take it at first, 2nd time I read it, aero edged it and third time,Aero took it. overall giving this aero due to a more consistent verse |
06-29-2019, 02:57 AM | #9 |
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This was some good punches from both.
Aero had much stronger multis And that closer was dope. I agree the blue print line wasn't so great. But it followed the scheme. Everything except the first bar followed that scheme. The first bar is a good personal towards previous battle but Idk the suicide door was ok. Wanderer man. There was a lot of good shit in here. Just a few little errors here and there, some multis or wording could've been stronger but the punches were there. The open set up could've been better. The polish line and still seeing the faces I liked. Just something about the way you approach it that isn't as smooth as your opponent. His multi schemes being a little longer makes it feel more structured. I've literally looked back and forth quite a few times. This is gonna look like such a weird explained vote. Probably toughest vote I've had since returning. favorite bar vs favorite bar. The furniture line from wanderer. Seeing your reflection in polished furniture or making a face shaped dent in a dusty dresser. I personally liked this. From aero the closer had a lot of elements. Wednesday being a reference, the camel talking lips. Great delivery on it. You know what? It wouldn't be right for the drop wanderer had to not get one vote. I feel like weakest punch of the battle was the blueprint line. Suicide door maybe not so high on the list either So I'm gonna go against the rest Vote - Wanderer Respect to you both
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06-29-2019, 05:34 AM | #10 |
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Wand -- idk man, read bland to me. Opener I didn't get. Not looking up/ sports bar. I kinda liked the wording of your closer 'stop & search' but meh the creativity/connection wasnt there. Secrets was OKAY to me.
Aero -- opener was cool flip, alright magic wand was cool closer not bad, did enough to win better wording, more harsh/relevant concepts. executed better too.. dead horse & blueprints missed but not enough to make it closer anyway V -- Aero Last edited by Saint; 06-29-2019 at 05:37 AM. |
06-29-2019, 08:18 AM | #11 | |
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup this is ok, modern reference but the post concept is as old as time Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment eh there could've been a better sting on this, im just not crazy about the wording Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces the concept here is cool but I do think it could've been utilized better Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it. No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet this was a bit simple, but kinda funny so I like it. & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets I swear I've seen or heard this before, but whatever. It's alright Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search I think this could've been worded better, but the overall concept was strong enough to carry the bar. It's solid *edit to include Aero's first 2 lines*: Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse? LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline...like a Sincaog verse Quote:
That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle solid opener. It's a bit shy of a haymaker, but it's a good bar STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse naw, you just called your dick a horse. not even equating it to a horse's dick, but the actual horse itself. you out here with seabiscuit dick bruh? She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" kinda simple but funny I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap this is lowkey fire Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!" naw, kinda funny but you can do better I think the most obvious difference between the 2 is that I prefer aero's wording. I think his bars have more of a sting on them even when he's just being simple and/or comical. Magic hat was botb for me v/ aero aka a schlong named secretariat Last edited by Answer; 06-29-2019 at 09:51 AM. |
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06-29-2019, 10:39 AM | #12 |
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U look good & then fall off. Inconsistency make me wanna curl up
Repeated failure between posts this bitch a Thai defender in the Women’s World Cup mmm decent, I think it could’ve been better if executed differently Fuck trash talk. One jab from me all it take to make a statement Ain’t gotta push ur buttons, just make straight contact... It’s a modern day payment again, clever concept but the execution was underwhelming Break into ur dirty crib, throw u into furniture & trash ur homely purchases Ain’t keep his house well polished... but u can still see his face in most the surfaces better, I liked this Cant spend a dime on a bitch. U must be trollin so stop it. No cash on me? I just ‘take the plastic out.’ You get the inflatable doll out ur closet ok lol & if there’s info ya boys won’t reveal it. Ur a rat so lips never speak shit Snubbed .44 to ur cheek. Get the nose to ur ear like I was whispering secrets phew, fire here Camped up high with police issue glocks. That’s true, no cop alert Few flashes from the roof halt u by the side of the road. It’s a routine stop & search hmm ok Vs Sinacog wins 3-0. Yooooooouuuuuu lost to Sinacog, NIGGGGA, a Sinacog verse? LOL I don't even neeeed to write a punchline... like a Sincaog verse lol loved this That's a lot to unravel, troll votes led to an improbable scandal Your bar on suicide doors should've included tying a knot to a handle alright pretty cool STOP asking your girl if I'm bigger, & don't believe if she says yours She jerks me limp & keeps going, you both are beating a dead horse fuckin dead She took my call as you cuddled her, that's what your bitch is about I asked was I intruding she mumbled "Get a gun. I'll send blueprints of the house" lol nice I entered about an hour later, glock & the vibrator to glisten her cat It's no magic Wand, I pulled the Rabbit out after waving the stick at your cap ok Wednesdays it's dick in her vaj, keeps quiet but her pussy lips are saying it My place, your crib. Even at work I got her camel yelling "Guess what day it is??!!" gone. Hell no Cool battle here, wanderer had some cool stuff but a lot of lines were underwhelming. Aero had a nice funny verse and gets it. Vote Aero |
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rabbit bar was funny and closer was cool from aero and the reason he won
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