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Old 07-25-2019, 11:29 PM   #1
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Hard to describe, everything ive seen and survived
Im only 35, and i cant believe im alive
Never had the sort of parents from a normal equation
Im a fuckin' loser now, and that formula's basic
Cause my alcoholic fathers either drunk or hes stoned
Got my ass whooped with every single belt buckle he owned
Punishing blows", made me feel fucking dissowned
Anger built up in my soul
Hatred just wants to explode
Raising my brother myself, deaf but he saw everything
He elevated early, i miss him
Hes read ive been spittin
But he will never hear the words if he listens
And that hurts from a distant, sort of personal image
We suffer from several sorts of burdens, with differances
Now my family is more insignificant
Since ive grown up, good riddance
Its been a miserable 6 or so years
Ive witnessed more fears manifest
And the tears that ive wept, over death
Over your headstone ive kept
so that nobody knows that ive let go
Its death over dishonor, click-clack!, so lets go be honorable
Never have you ever known me to be bluffing
Ive blown the stuffing out of everything ive ever touched
And sent my love with a bullet and fragments of brains
Scattered accrossed the unbalanced terrain
And ive showered in pain, more than my share of times
Its paralyzed me to the world im in..
I wanna come with you, and lets be reborn again
Im sort of a mess, and im finished enduring this wreck...


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Old 08-12-2019, 11:54 PM   #2
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liked this a lot. take care.
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Old 08-14-2019, 01:16 AM   #3
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This was nice man...Your multie game is really on point here, obv emotion wise it's dope.I don't really have a favorite section as I liked it as a whole...Good shit G.

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