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Old 08-08-2019, 09:25 PM   #1
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Default A poem for kids

The sky is blue
Clouds are grey
The Sun is yellow
Stars is twinkling
Light in Daytime
Dark at nighttime
Ice Cold during the winter
Rain in spring time
Cool in Fall time
Hot in the Summer time

Suppose to kids friendly poem
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Old 08-09-2019, 08:30 AM   #2
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I know I've been extremely harsh on you in the past, For that I apologize...Can you please work on your multies?
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Old 08-09-2019, 09:08 AM   #3
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The sky is blue
Clouds are grey
The Sun is yellow
Stars is twinkling
Light in Daytime
Dark at nighttime
Ice Cold during the winter
Rain in spring time
Cool in Fall time
Hot in the Summer time

Suppose to kids friendly poem


This isn’t a poem this is a bunch of descriptions. Don’t post in the open mic anymore.
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Old 08-09-2019, 02:13 PM   #4
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This isn’t a poem this is a bunch of descriptions. Don’t post in the open mic anymore.
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Old 08-09-2019, 03:40 PM   #5
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personally, i would like to see you write a poem for adolescents, and maybe eventually adults if you're up to the task

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