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Old 07-09-2019, 05:25 AM   #1
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I want to read something that causes psychedelic effects
Mind bending, altering my perspective of the u-and-eye-verse
Pluck the divine strings of change, release the frequency from which we came
A person: a vehicle in which sound moves through
Is it true
Am eye hue-man?
Depends on the view
Cause my blue and your blue can never be disproved
Mood: how I feel when I’m in tuned with the universal melody
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That consume logic
Defy reason
Yet give meaning to life
I’ve been meaning to write
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2. Reject fear
3. All things are possible
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5. Your subconscious is Gospel
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Things couldn’t be clearer
Vampiric reflections are not a thing
Just a social construct...like racism
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Respected it
Mother Earth is not your trash bin
Protect it
Her...
Oh, you know what I mean
Fuck it....
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Old 07-13-2019, 09:19 PM   #2
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Old 07-14-2019, 08:19 AM   #3
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Sorry can't quote as I'm on my pathetic phone...Thoght your probably first 8 lines were dope, You have this awesome ability to use words with imagery that really resonates fam...Your intellect is second to none...

Really apologize for not bein' able to highlight parts I wanted ;/

God bless...

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Old 07-18-2019, 07:00 PM   #4
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damn I liked your word selection and loved the imagery and the whole omniscient feeling of this piece. I'll definitely be looking for more of your word. dope stuff man.
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Old 07-20-2019, 03:37 PM   #5
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wtf, this is hella dope.. liked it alot man
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Isn’t this old?

I think I fed this already.
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not sure if you meant for it to be but that was last part was gangsta as fuck man lulz
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Isn’t this old?

I think I fed this already.
Yes, sir. You did.

Thank you for the read/feed ppls. It’s much appreciated.
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