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Old 07-17-2013, 10:46 AM   #81
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Dirty Harry
Gets no bitches...
No pussy and likes it hard, is hisdirty crown
If we in a Hairy situation ..
it's just her excuse for saying his dick is no where to be found

Simon Cowell

Ur bitch on my dick so watch as my CAL-lender book her time to go SKI
I ain't greedy tho...
U can Si-MONday come around ....but forget the rest of the week

Tyler the Creator

Never created classics and the image he made was gay and passive
And atomic failure.. The resemblense of being the biggest faggot

Eric Foreman

Such a gay appeal ur name is surely.. Manly as shit,
When we say eric four men.. It's not his name it's just describing the action he gets.

I know it's horrible
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Old 07-17-2013, 10:47 AM   #82
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@Storyteller knucklehead pretty much already said that's good when he directed people at yours as a benchmark... im sure that's what I read somewhere in this thread anyways
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Old 07-17-2013, 10:49 AM   #83
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Hairy situation wasn't bad.
Simon was forced. Mainly on the si sounding.
Not seeing a nameplay for Tyler.
Foreman wasn't bad. Maybe your best one.
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Old 07-17-2013, 10:51 AM   #84
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Lol just noticed that just wanted to diss atomic lol...
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Old 07-17-2013, 01:44 PM   #85
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Ok then, here's some quick shit @Knucklehead @whoever
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Simon Cowell
still spitting them garbage lines, all of your shit is dumb
everything you drop is bull,si and i'll stick an arrow through you like one

Tyler the Creator
u cant withstand the impact of my hits, i'll cut ur neck with a razor
Its kinda like armageddon, the way im bringing hell to the Creator

Eric Foreman
u think you pen down sick shit?? None of the opinions of this fag matters
dont give a fuck what Eric Wright and its Eazy to leave him dead like that rapper

Dirty Harry
i commit lotta crimes, give cops a hardtime when i pull out the K
cos im an assassin doing Dirty works & my next one's to kill him without a trace
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Old 07-19-2013, 06:07 PM   #86
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Dirty Harry

Ill take this Dirty joke
and put him in flight like de Havilland
I'll make this fags day
when I shoot his ass down like a javelin
treat him like Dirty money
he'll hit the water hard(dH)
but byte it high like a DH register
and land in pieces on some gravel then

Simon Cowell

I cut this guy like a Katina
pull out an eye with a sai
then shotgun blast this fool like Marijuana
with no co
it wont go well when they find ya


Tyler the Creator

I have so much inner chi I'll tire the creator
hell will have no enemies I kill all including the masia


Eric Foreman

This guy is like a inflatable dildo for real do
an air dick would form him its what he conforms to
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Old 07-22-2013, 05:08 PM   #88
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Dirty Harry

Ill take this Dirty joke
and put him in flight like de Havilland
I'll make this fags day
when I shoot his ass down like a javelin
treat him like Dirty money
he'll hit the water hard(dH)
but byte it high like a DH register
and land in pieces on some gravel then
you have two workable ideas right here in 'dirty joke' and 'dirty money'. the 'make my day flip' would be kind of useable in an alias battle, but it's not a nameflip. and DH register is an idea but its not something too commonly known and considering your flip on that wasn't really a punch it really wouldnt be effective

Simon Cowell

I cut this guy like a Katina
pull out an eye with a sai
then shotgun blast this fool like Marijuana
with no co
it wont go well when they find ya
sai/sigh is an alright flip and while its part of his name, its not really being used as anything related to him - its just some associative name integration. thats more of a technical writing thing than just a punchline

Tyler the Creator

I have so much inner chi I'll tire the creator
hell will have no enemies I kill all including the masia
tire the creator is really a flip on tyler the creator. you could flip the parts of the name a little more easily. maybe try something with just 'ty', 'tyler' or 'create/creator'

Eric Foreman

This guy is like a inflatable dildo for real do
an air dick would form him its what he conforms to
eric/air dick isn't a nameplay. it just quasi-rhymes. while your format was a little closer to one thatll give you a real punch. maybe just work with 'air'
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re-read that OP for sure. you should try again and do one bar for each name, improving on your good first ones. try 'dirty joke' for dirty harry, 'sigh' for Simon, something using part of tyler the creator's name, and something with 'air' for eric
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You didn't get back to me so here's 3 quick uns.

Dirty Harry
I don't take - I give; cus unlike you I aint no faggy twat!
So if im in a Hurry..... its just to get the dirt of my back

Tyler the Creator
His concepts are wobbling...his wording is a slur of shit!
at text im a Typist < an we think this when you write bitch

Eric Foreman
I got mad game, bitches love my moves when I attack
Hes got no game yet Foreplay with no experience of that
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NAME CHOICE:
ERIC FOREMAN


Task 1: full name

I’m all torment and above the rim deforming,
Dropping rocks like Jordan, Morphing morphine in (your Eric’s “foreman” )
(house)

Task 2: dissected

I’m a syndicate cell, a Boston bombing as it seems
I’m Forman’ted off moonshine spitting more shit then a Fukushima leak

Task 3: single letter
(or)

I’m hording more fortune than a Wall-Street morgue of sheep’s
While im tormenting Morgan freeman with Death so bitch act accordingly
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Old 08-03-2013, 11:58 AM   #91
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did you just put or as a single letter?
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Old 08-03-2013, 04:08 PM   #92
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I’m hrding mre frtune than a Wall-Street mrgue of sheep’s
While im trmenting Mrgan freeman with Death so bitch act accrdingly

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Word lol

But yeah single letter nameplays are usually like initials. I get a lot of SNL flips, Eric foreman would be E F and you'd be C K
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