Saint vs Cred - SAINT WINS BY NS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 3

Due Thursday, July 14th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Saint @Cred

[Saint]

8 right

[Saint]

@Cred sent 8 to sharp

[Saint]

#Gunbarboys!?

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ghlight=Shrimp

Hush an identical twin. aint guns off belts blammin nothing
Only ya'll attached to the hip. u had a Siamese Dream big as Smashing Pumpkins
My man snitch. take the knife u stabbed me in the back with
I'll return it twenty-fold where your Lattice.. it go in & out i'm weaving baskets
Bodies? school policy: hands add the count up like first grade
Animal u caught up; a hook leave skin hanging like back in the days of fur trade
Cred trappin no cap. can't hold any jobs but yo...it's HIS life
Total Recall: you've given notices for 'TWO WEEKS' more than Arnold in disguise
In the disc you altered jokes w/ mod rights. envy fits ya proper
Dog u'd see threads, check tags & wished you could own it that's a window shopper

[Sharp]

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ghlight=Shrimp
I didn't read this closely but I don't think I should have to. I don't know why this is here. To prove you beat Hush?

Hush an identical twin. aint guns off belts blammin nothing
Only ya'll attached to the hip. u had a Siamese Dream big as Smashing Pumpkins
iirc they don't really look alike, just both PR.. I could be wrong. That's an old reference but I think it works. Idk if it needed that thread tho
My man snitch. take the knife u stabbed me in the back with
I'll return it twenty-fold where your Lattice.. it go in & out i'm weaving baskets
this is wp done well. Setup is a little clunky and unless I missed something the back stab draws more attention than setting up Lat
Bodies? school policy: hands add the count up like first grade
Animal u caught up; a hook leave skin hanging like back in the days of fur trade
solid
Cred trappin no cap. can't hold any jobs but yo...it's HIS life
Total Recall: you've given notices for 'TWO WEEKS' more than Arnold in disguise
two weeks, two specific 80s movie references, this one I don't recall entirely but I'm sure I could Google it and understand
In the disc you altered jokes w/ mod rights. envy fits ya proper
Dog u'd see threads, check tags & wished you could own it that's a window shopper
I understand that you're trying to avoid using 'tag' in the setup. That's smart. Setup still reads clunky


Punches are cool, wp is on point, only complaint is that the setups were kinda clunky at times and I don't get why that thread was there... Short expo with it would have gone a long way

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Bodies? school policy: hands add the count up like first grade
Animal u caught up; a hook leave skin hanging like back in the days of fur trade
This is an example of doing too much. Try a simple verse lol. Just give us something we can read and get it right away. Your opening bar we had to do research lol.