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"The Re-Up"
A cool customer breathes a sigh of relief as he finds the # for his higher release,
In a pocket, in the side of his jeans, a washing machine has made the numbers on this piece of paper hiero to read 555 5559???? Sharpie in green with a graffiti artists nonchalant mystique Humidified on high dry till the numbers seeped through the target receipt and looked like the mark of the beast: 666-6666... Tide foamin coatin his mouthpiece, all his tartary teeth, Hes smiling brightly at me - blinding me from gleams of bargain brand bleach The smell of laundry makes me think of green pastures, the blue skyís the retarded retreats Lil bo peeps rolling up downy sheets - disregarded the sheep Coke in white clouds drift apart from the dreams Iím shooting the breezeí drawing blood color of the Heart when it bleeds My Nerves jumpingí like trampolines through the Cartilage seams My track-ridden skin is weak. No elasticity. Stretch mark stitches....see? Rolls up my sleeve....... I am a Fein. recharging Until I am redeemed, I reek.., remarkably cant recall being clean. 8 balls in my sneaks, marshmallow on the balls of my feet, Like Smores reforming from heat, throw on another log - somebody sawing the tree 2-time felon hearing the courts readjourn will be brief Witnesses reanimating my reality being sworn in to speak The sketch artist draws me revolting as can be Gateway drugs Iím speaking from the wall behind the screen "In recent memory, has reefa been a necessity, part of your nausea regime? We found Acid reflux in your esophagus - gauzed up by the D's All the furniture rearranged - coffee beans frothing steam... Refrigerator door - open a Jar, bean stalks on a lean..." Caution! The fog from the leafs causes a serene revolving Miserere.. Repeated life sentence we resolve sinner sinning sprees like reward beneficiaries Living in the Lawn like honey I shrunk the kids - dwarf the imagery Going to war with a blades of grass, cutting the head off a centipede Hiding like a recluse reappearing confused in a spinners seize The bank wouldn't reapprove me cause my bong cost was in the G's Readjustment on the mortgage forged - double-crossing T's Reinforcing me to believe I have no remorse.., "Rehabilitation wouldnít reform this creep.." "We recorded your tweets about the O.Z's and reported it to the New York police You was on a RE-UP and your reception was stormy and staticy the result of the category four in the East You refastened your seat belt and floored your accord through a jeep" Reflexes redirected by the reflection pouring the beam "They say you reap what you sow; I just hope you don't knit the draws in the Bing The judge is reasonable just no rebuttals - back and forths aint his thing" Youíre a born again Christian, rebaptized in the faucet of spring Youíre reapplying yourself, pursuing your gardening degree "Please reconsider locking me behind bars where the light is hardly seen" The rose in the concretes suffering from harvest THC Stressed out grey hair starting to recede Rebellious nature isnít ideal conditions for the tallest of the breeds Relinquish knowing my regrowth will garner in your greed Youíll rejuvenate in another form, refreshed, farmer sprawling seeds... Rejoice while the Sun beads sweat you gone' taste the salt and heave Recasting shadows,a culprit, a thief, watering the vault of weed I never thought of histories repercussions I was only warned they repeat I donít remember how many times I measured and remeasured reassured of the peak Solitaire is a nightmare, tanning under UV rays like resorts on the beach Remarrying, rewinding my honeymoon in my cerebral cortex for weeks Redilberate while I reconstruct photosynthesis so my pores could breathe Call a recess so I can resuscitate myself unhinge my jaws and wheeze Ejected out the car seat...A reject; I got no rapport on the street They want redemption for the night I listened to redemption crossed the intersection absorbing the beat Angry mob reception outside the courthouse roars in the streets The victims recovery relived in the sting of the vocal cord scream I wish we could rekindle the moment and abort this disease Rebuild, unfortunately, the chances of you rebounding are the worst in the league Your reemergence is meek, I wanna reimburse you... patience is a virtue, believe I'm gunna find the one who referred you to the merciless me Reverse the verdict I'm not reaffirming my plea Iím burning for eternity if religion serves me correctly I revert from my knees The almighty returning predetermined to succeed Relocate me carefully - their rehearsing my murder -guns out their curtains they'll squeeze Finding a vein for my vaccination was murder as they reinserted the needl..... I regurgitated crack rocks Ones I was saving to refurbish my queen Replenish my team - shield them from all the repellent debris I regret running that red light - repenting from speed The judge readdressing me with resentment, sovereign Removing me - now renown for the death of a jostle teen In a docile retreat I recount where I had refound the key I see workers in reassembly lines putting in air bags honking the horn with the proudest of beeps I see me relapsing behind the wheel Kapow! ! ím asleep Theyíre trying to revive you- a vow they would keep A republican, about to retire - white house out of reach Doused in gasoline bound by defeat city council reassigned to a crouch in a seat You renewed the laws on drugs, refined them down to a sleet Then a snowplow reburied your regime under a thousand pounds for free The whole region was a remote click away from boosting the economy, Pushing packs of LOUD shout and scream They couldn't resist that shit. It restricted their blood vessels like submarines without machines It reminded me of your car going up in flames no fountains leak could drown the heat. I wish my breaks were safe and sound not sleek I wish it were repairable; I feel terrible like your body in the ICU for whats now been weeks Allow me to reiterate my innocence from the white horse - Remount the beast Straight jacket - off white like 1950's wedding gowns in keep ím off white, my nostrils haven't seen the milky cream since the cows been beefed My pupils eclipse into a round opaque looking around astounded as the out of towners meet and ground their teeth I am responsible for the laboratory crowned with reefs All the drugs in my system can be retraced to the second hand smoked In my house when I was three How do I respond to cross questioning - No one vouching for me? Crossing genetics, locked into my couch while I breed Witness in the stand is clowning me pouting it's cheeks They can't restrain me I'm 2 wild pow! Pow! pow! I've been sneaked... The officers blare "FREEZE!" I hit the ground like a tree My judge refuses insanity; brows furrow in the crowd like the brownest of leafs "Any last requests? Would you like to pay your last respects now? Or be at peace?" Wheres the reset button when you need it - controller down - this just a dream Yes your honor, revoke my license... this life is replaceable I need to reproduce my seed so my time on earth will be re traceable Recruit every aching ounce of energy into everything relateable Until none of my information is retainable Retractable sun roof shedding light on us in the recreational I'm reluctant to make a move, until I see my resemblance, some poisonous plant, replete with baneful juice The man who study the Re-up keeps the green stained wound Sweet revenge grows harsh, Purple Haze Perfume -frank
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02-14-2013, 03:52 PM | #2 |
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100 lines
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02-14-2013, 04:41 PM | #3 |
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1) I'm not racist?
2) as you wish man, feed deleted.
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This is insanely epic. Long as fuck.
I did read, and I will feed better over the weekend. Just stopping by for now. Be on the lookout for the open mic fight nights frank (tk2g). Winners receive accomps.
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02-19-2013, 06:10 PM | #6 |
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Cool man, I think you dropped critique on netcees already so don't sweat it
For anyone wondering why it's a 100 lines A nigga know a lot of Re words dat simple
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dude thats a sick drop. im lovin the smart words. Long story, but pretty damn good.
Reverse the verdict I'm not reaffirming my plea Iím burning for eternity if religion serves me correctly I revert from my knees The almighty returning predetermined to succeed Relocate me carefully - their rehearsing my murder -guns out their curtains they'll squeeze Finding a vein for my vaccination was murder as they reinserted the needl..... I regurgitated crack rocks Ones I was saving to refurbish my queen Replenish my team - shield them from all the repellent debris I regret running that red light - repenting from speed The judge readdressing me with resentment, sovereign Removing me - now renown for the death of a jostle teen ^ favorite part man. |
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Thank you sir. I does try.
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Thank you to Pancakebrah for qouting this piece in the tournament magazine.
What made you pick this piece? Afterall I have gazillions. Why didn't you qoute the number line? That was always my fav
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02-15-2014, 12:34 PM | #10 |
rhyme capsule.
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i read this.
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