07-12-2021, 07:19 PM | #1 |
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Zuch vs Mac - ZUCH WINS
The Summer Classic NO bitingDue: Thursday, 7/15 @ 11:59 PST 24hr ext available but must be requested before verse is due Line Limit: 10-16 lines *can increase if both agree NO swaying NO feeding NO fun Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle May God have mercy on your souls @UPN Zuch @Mac |
07-12-2021, 07:23 PM | #2 |
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16 is cool
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07-12-2021, 07:46 PM | #3 |
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16 is good
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07-15-2021, 07:02 PM | #4 |
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07-16-2021, 06:57 PM | #5 |
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07-17-2021, 12:15 AM | #6 |
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It’s Summer Classic, and Mac you’re an important component
I mean, nothing says “welcome back Zuch” like my favorite warm-up opponent What I do to your body? Well at it’s core isn’t pretty Think Zombieland 2.. this double tap will spread your main parts out to four different cities Brain damage taking huge tolls, go ahead, take a few polls If they say you’re “highly regarded”, it’s a obvious auto-correct played a huge role Hammer will check you out, blood curdled from hittin’ hard I’ll separate the plasma from the genes like you’re paying with different cards Your wife sucks cock, we all saw it so please be keen That bitch be donating the brain quick like it’s crawlin’ with CTE Crowbar on a pursuit of happiness, I’m a fuckin pro believe Shatter your bones and knees.. Density so low, you’ll have to hit up Will Smith for one of those machines Olympics coming up, unload the clip all by myself And for the record, I’ll let the metal go around your neck like you’re Mike Phelps |
07-17-2021, 01:09 AM | #7 |
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yea we get it .. Rudge is a legend, Frac is a god & Blue is the best y'all keep ur asses filthy who knows he's licking next Jaime called the other night, she wanted to get warmer not only she gives me green lights shes also on every corner now u gotta move forward, scared or not - the exit's hard she wasted you & never paid back like uh-oh's credit card word is ur a quick pumper, how u expected ur EX to behave? trust if he's Dull on sex, the kleenex's a Canadian mass grave breakups comes wit conditions, spend on diapers no cash in bets if his gambling relies intuition, that childs growin up in debt aim to ya front door sniping.. slaughter.. then waive once u feel the drops drippin.. you'll know its the heat wave bad timin for actin brave, I got the firepower of a convoy watch Mac drop magazines across your porch like the newspaper boy |
07-17-2021, 09:55 AM | #8 |
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It’s Summer Classic, and Mac you’re an important component
I mean, nothing says “welcome back Zuch” like my favorite warm-up opponent funny What I do to your body? Well at it’s core isn’t pretty Think Zombieland 2.. this double tap will spread your main parts out to four different cities didn't see it, will look it up if the battle is close enough Brain damage taking huge tolls, go ahead, take a few polls If they say you’re “highly regarded”, it’s a obvious auto-correct played a huge role dead Hammer will check you out, blood curdled from hittin’ hard I’ll separate the plasma from the genes like you’re paying with different cards Your wife sucks cock, we all saw it so please be keen That bitch be donating the brain quick like it’s crawlin’ with CTE solid Crowbar on a pursuit of happiness, I’m a fuckin pro believe Shatter your bones and knees.. Density so low, you’ll have to hit up Will Smith for one of those machines that's a reference, wow. Pretty sure it's 'happyness' in the movie title. This is cool but like 10 years late Olympics coming up, unload the clip all by myself And for the record, I’ll let the metal go around your neck like you’re Mike Phelps for the record makes this hit for me yea we get it .. Rudge is a legend, Frac is a god & Blue is the best y'all keep ur asses filthy who knows he's licking next the 'keep your asses filthy' part really distracts me from the punch Jaime called the other night, she wanted to get warmer not only she gives me green lights shes also on every corner okay now u gotta move forward, scared or not - the exit's hard she wasted you & never paid back like uh-oh's credit card dead. @uh-oh get in here. I like the bar because it's just funny, but generally 'xxxx like yyy' style references are the most basic punches word is ur a quick pumper, how u expected ur EX to behave? trust if he's Dull on sex, the kleenex's a Canadian mass grave trying to do too much here breakups comes wit conditions, spend on diapers no cash in bets if his gambling relies intuition, that childs growin up in debt this is a dope idea but the wording is off just enough to be distracting... 'gambling relies in tuition' is confusing aim to ya front door sniping.. slaughter.. then waive once u feel the drops drippin.. you'll know its the heat wave waive? bad timin for actin brave, I got the firepower of a convoy watch Mac drop magazines across your porch like the newspaper boy cool, but again, that style of punch usually leaves a little more to be desired This was a fun read, which I normally don't say about 16 line battles. Good shit guys. I've got Zuch with one more punch I like and better wording. V/zuch |
07-17-2021, 10:49 PM | #9 |
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Idk. I felt Zuch executed his lines better
Mac had a cpl. green light, uh oh were okays, something about the way he worded em took away or fell flat. Brain damage taking huge tolls, go ahead, take a few polls If they say you’re “highly regarded”, it’s a obvious auto-correct played a huge role Hammer will check you out, blood curdled from hittin’ hard I’ll separate the plasma from the genes like you’re paying with different cards Your wife sucks cock, we all saw it so please be keen That bitch be donating the brain quick like it’s crawlin’ with CTE ^^decent to solid section. came off harsher. Phelps line record tie in helped, but I've seen that. Vote Zuch |
07-18-2021, 02:24 AM | #10 |
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Zuch
Opener was nice Highly regarded was LOL The rest wasn’t bad but they were the standouts for me Mac I wanted you to do more with some of your ideas.. green light for example and the closer.. they just came off a little simple . A lot of the verse fell kinda short bro. Seen you drop better Zuch takes this fairly comfortably for me |
07-18-2021, 10:40 AM | #11 |
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Zuch -
Autocorrect leaned me. CTE was solid too. Mac - I love you. V - Zuch
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07-18-2021, 12:23 PM | #12 |
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i never knew Zuch admitted the Rudge shit. Rudge was fire fr. One of the absolute best to add an inherent swagger to his writing. Him, Rad, and Resin did that shit the best back then.
Anyway. Mac had some good ideas, that could've been worded better. Intuition could've been better with a bit better wording. Kinda the same with most of ya verse. Polish that up and u hit another tier. Vote Zuch. Highly regarded was funny. for the record, phelps... cool verse.
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