Dead Wrong

CopyPat · 02-13-2018, 02:29 AM

There’s several different levels to text origins: more or less
Spewin rap devices, handle business, sampling records in em
Channeling Eminem, for fandom, angry, just savage
But I don’t get into that, I kicked the habit
I just speak you to death with sentences that leak through your head
And I never treat you unless the fuckin, speech looks fresh
I got a 9 in my pocket, I’m lyin
I got a rhyme in my noggin, and baby I'm just dyin to drop it
I’m ready for words, you’re ready for words
I got a bevy of terms for any faggot that said he was learned
My verse is as clever as yours, yeah you met me before
I just kick like martial artists when I get in the door
Smarter than ever before, I lay a set on the board
With my knowledge spread on the text messages, read on my wall
Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story
Let up a second, get up the courage, then I’m ready to record
I rep songs

sral · 02-13-2018, 05:00 AM

LOL I've done this before, I use it more as a flexercise than anything else just to get to scheming. It helps shake the rust off. I don't know if "martial artist/Marshall artist" was intentional but I'm kind enough to give you the benefit of the doubt that it was fully intentional. Only because I like you though. :)

@MMLP may enjoy seeing this and trying to rap it out loud

Keep that pen moving!

Geno · 02-13-2018, 07:06 AM

Fucking @CopyPat!!! I hopr u stick around a while bruh. This OM has had a little rebirth as of late with the influx of new dope writers. Its fucking greatnto see a copy post. This shit was dope. I havnt chexked the dates to see if its old or new but its dope either way. Fun flex. I think Geno needs to go on one of his collab sprees. Like i usednto back in the day. If your around then we need to flex. As i will with 10 other writers here.

Fucking syllable.playnis nasty as usual. Of course i aee its a verse paying homagento old and brilliant eminem. Awesome.

Shiw me a sign that ur still here. Holla at me Vua PM!

Vulgar · 02-16-2018, 08:05 PM

Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story

^my fave fragment. Your mind was working in this brief keystyle.

whatup Copy. How's Canada?

ROETHLISBERGER · 02-16-2018, 11:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CopyPat

I just speak you to death with sentences that leak through your head
And I never treat you unless the fuckin, speech looks fresh
I got a 9 in my pocket, I’m lyin
I got a rhyme in my noggin, and baby I'm just dyin to drop it
I’m ready for words, you’re ready for words
I

So good. First line in the quote made the whole damn piece, for me.

The allusions to god tier poprap songs while simultaneously going scheme heavy was a cool motif.

02-13-2018, 02:29 AM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	Dead Wrong There’s several different levels to text origins: more or less Spewin rap devices, handle business, sampling records in em Channeling Eminem, for fandom, angry, just savage But I don’t get into that, I kicked the habit I just speak you to death with sentences that leak through your head And I never treat you unless the fuckin, speech looks fresh I got a 9 in my pocket, I’m lyin I got a rhyme in my noggin, and baby I'm just dyin to drop it I’m ready for words, you’re ready for words I got a bevy of terms for any faggot that said he was learned My verse is as clever as yours, yeah you met me before I just kick like martial artists when I get in the door Smarter than ever before, I lay a set on the board With my knowledge spread on the text messages, read on my wall Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story Let up a second, get up the courage, then I’m ready to record I rep songs __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

02-13-2018, 05:00 AM	#2
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,251 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899391	LOL I've done this before, I use it more as a flexercise than anything else just to get to scheming. It helps shake the rust off. I don't know if "martial artist/Marshall artist" was intentional but I'm kind enough to give you the benefit of the doubt that it was fully intentional. Only because I like you though. :) @MMLP may enjoy seeing this and trying to rap it out loud Keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

02-13-2018, 07:06 AM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,324 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Fucking @CopyPat!!! I hopr u stick around a while bruh. This OM has had a little rebirth as of late with the influx of new dope writers. Its fucking greatnto see a copy post. This shit was dope. I havnt chexked the dates to see if its old or new but its dope either way. Fun flex. I think Geno needs to go on one of his collab sprees. Like i usednto back in the day. If your around then we need to flex. As i will with 10 other writers here. Fucking syllable.playnis nasty as usual. Of course i aee its a verse paying homagento old and brilliant eminem. Awesome. Shiw me a sign that ur still here. Holla at me Vua PM! __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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02-16-2018, 08:05 PM	#4
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Read all my feelings, read all my glories, get a new story ^my fave fragment. Your mind was working in this brief keystyle. whatup Copy. How's Canada?