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Old 02-19-2018, 03:46 PM   #1
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Old 02-19-2018, 04:33 PM   #2
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Old 02-19-2018, 06:16 PM   #3
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Old 02-22-2018, 05:12 PM   #4
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right...

even if you show dy none of ya previous battles at the nbl were even worth reading
whack newbs like you talk trash they aint ill its just they first time competing
you can say ya punches connect and that you got tons of skill
but he talk so much shit his whackness resembles weakness similar to mike millz
ya lines are all forced and ya wordplay is weak in all honesty
you lost the idea of what a true battle is guess you have to study ya properties
for real though these junior cats who be rapping trying to make a name on the site
and instead of spitting shit like gunbars vets on the site already got ya wanna prey for ya life
and how you going fix ya self up nice you aint even flip one bar in ya verse
you see im a true champ at netcees way ya text carreer ending and going out in a blur
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Old 02-22-2018, 07:20 PM   #5
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I'm talking Triggernometry, the smoke from the barrel like Whitney On Pipe
Or the blade under the boot catch a goofy sliding like Disney On Ice
I prefer the mac of course...No apple, but the seeds falling out his cap of Course
For another body D Baitin, so its only death aint no going back an Fourth
Run the ranks, this what endurance do...hope your life has Insurance Too
You let your peers pressure you, but nothing you do we Influenced Too
If the snub out..no sub out, like I'm outside playing Local Hoops
Two Ninas, they interact with one another...that's a Social Group
Long range, aim at the exact target...an Get Precision
Me, Myself & Irene Cover, temple divided from the middle..i made a Split Decision!
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Old 02-23-2018, 10:26 AM   #6
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Tripple had no punchlines.

Dynamicz - disney on ice was cool, social group is ok i guess

Dynamicz wins for having punchlines and wordplay and all the things that constitute a battle verse.
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Old 02-23-2018, 10:39 AM   #7
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No brainer here. 2 tripple's drop was dogshit

Vote Dynamicz... goofy sliding, d baiting coulda been something but u messed it up.
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Old 02-23-2018, 05:42 PM   #8
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2triple

even if you show dy none of ya previous battles at the nbl were even worth reading
whack newbs like you talk trash they aint ill its just they first time competing
too simple of a hit basic

you can say ya punches connect and that you got tons of skill
but he talk so much shit his whackness resembles weakness similar to mike millz
too wordy

ya lines are all forced and ya wordplay is weak in all honesty
you lost the idea of what a true battle is guess you have to study ya properties
not bad

for real though these junior cats who be rapping trying to make a name on the site
and instead of spitting shit like gunbars vets on the site already got ya wanna prey for ya life
again wordy af

and how you going fix ya self up nice you aint even flip one bar in ya verse
you see im a true champ at netcees way ya text carreer ending and going out in a blur
nah

Dynamicz

I'm talking Triggernometry, the smoke from the barrel like Whitney On Pipe
Or the blade under the boot catch a goofy sliding like Disney On Ice
pretty dope here creative hit nice metaphore

I prefer the mac of course...No apple, but the seeds falling out his cap of Course
For another body D Baitin, so its only death aint no going back an Fourth
had potential wording hurt u here

Run the ranks, this what endurance do...hope your life has Insurance Too
You let your peers pressure you, but nothing you do we Influenced Too
nah

If the snub out..no sub out, like I'm outside playing Local Hoops
Two Ninas, they interact with one another...that's a Social Group
fucking dope

Long range, aim at the exact target...an Get Precision
Me, Myself & Irene Cover, temple divided from the middle..i made a Split Decision!
nah wording butchered

V/Dynamicz overall more consistent had creativity and even misses were better
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Old 02-23-2018, 05:58 PM   #9
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Dynamicz wins with opener

How can u battle and not have punchlines?!
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Old 02-24-2018, 11:22 PM   #10
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nothin vs..

If the snub out..no sub out, like I'm outside playing Local Hoops
Two Ninas, they interact with one another...that's a Social Group
I'm talking Triggernometry, the smoke from the barrel like Whitney On Pipe
Or the blade under the boot catch a goofy sliding like Disney On Ice

^ fuckin dope. that disney on ice was a haymaker.. overkill in this one. trip u gonna have to learn how to form punches

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Old 02-25-2018, 12:55 AM   #11
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I got namicz here handily, trip didn't have much of anything but properties was his best I guess.

Namicz has a good direct style but just needs to fine tune the little shit to ready the next tier. Some of his concepts could habe been executed better, not that they had to be here. I really liked social groups but it could habe been tied in better. Disney on ice was your best, it did a good job of taking a very visual thing and running off those flips, which I love to do. The rest was ight but these 2 stuck out a lot for me and won it convincingly

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Old 02-25-2018, 08:04 PM   #12
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2trip= Your just saying stuff dude. There is a science to this. There was nothing here dude



dynam - opener had an okay idea, needed better wording, second bar again you had the concept n the flip just needs tweaking. Wasn't feeling the rest. Social group was worded cool just a bit too basic.

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Old 02-25-2018, 08:44 PM   #13
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2trip you knoe my advice i said in bl last week

Vote dynamix. Opener was all i needed.
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2Trip had nothing. Honestly you’re not gonna elevate if you keep writing like this. You need to study and figure out how to form an actual punchline. What you’re writing are just basic disses. You need to incorporate wit and creativity or you’ll never get better.

Dynamicz won off the opener. Disney on Ice was FIRE. You had a couple more decent ones after that but it didn’t matter, you took this battle clearly.

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