01-28-2018, 11:47 PM | #1 |
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @classickERBL @bleak |
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02-02-2018, 04:38 PM | #3 |
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You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks & ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problem She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleeds n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds |
02-03-2018, 02:09 AM | #4 | |
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You’ll be the star of this movie, everybody’ll wanna meet bleak My crews directing outside, shooting ur trailer before the film like a sneak peak Fire Then it’s ur fam, I’m killin’ errrrr last one of u dumb fucks Garbage time.. I’m unloading cans in front of ur house like dump trucks Played but cool & ur girls been sus’ frm the start. If u dnt knw what I mean, u’ve got a problemfat wife She’s a mermaid.. looks good at the top but starts gettin’ fishy at the bottom Heh So if ur a hitter let me see!! I’m slangin’ beamers until he bleedsfat wife n if it ain’t me then it’s the team, bustin’ shells in the dugout like sunflower seeds Okay V zelph |
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02-03-2018, 01:45 PM | #5 |
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opener was dope, nice swag not feeling the rest of the concepts vs Zelph opener was coo next hit, already too many 'like's tho mermaid joint was corny & closer was whack 3 comparison/like bars out of 4? ehhh v/zelph barely |
02-03-2018, 02:00 PM | #6 |
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bleak.. wasnt rlly feelin too much but the closer. closer was decent.. rest of the concepts didnt give u much to work from.
for battlin opener was nice but the mermaid shit was dope. Rlly all u needed in this one FB had one more quote then bleak V/ FB |
02-03-2018, 03:56 PM | #7 |
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Bleak the mia line was dope to me but then u fell off
Lippet. That trailer Line was fuego. Ur misses weren’t as bad as bleaks I got lips
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02-04-2018, 08:55 AM | #8 |
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Bleak had the opener, ideas were there but wording hurt you
Lip was very generic, I expected a personal or two. Mermaid was clever But overall just a better verse with less misses VZelph |
02-04-2018, 10:47 AM | #9 |
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Bleak closer was a funny personal.. but FB's mermaid bar was my favorite. Fuckin' hilarious.
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02-04-2018, 12:43 PM | #10 |
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Bleaks opener was decent. But downhill from there out for me sorry fella. Zelph had opener and dumptruck and seeds but bit of an od on gun bars but meh.
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02-04-2018, 05:57 PM | #11 |
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