01-28-2018, 11:53 PM | #1 |
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Alvin Karpis @Habitat Last edited by For Battling; 01-29-2018 at 12:05 AM. |
01-29-2018, 09:48 AM | #2 |
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01-29-2018, 04:37 PM | #3 |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy
The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six u ain't original.. ur styles a mix from all the old vets n such sure, you take the novel approach.. when ya lines are stretched as fuck u ain't crazy.. ur an old faggot who should quit only pussies think ur schizocarp.. real dudes want this aging fruit to split u said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish 10 @Alvin Karpis
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01-30-2018, 09:04 PM | #4 |
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Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy
That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox |
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01-31-2018, 11:00 AM | #6 |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy
The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die Dope open Hab! if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six Nice! I said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish This was coo! —- Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories Funny opener! Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox This was dope! This was a nice battle here, Both overall did they thing here, I’m going to have to go with Alvin by a tad bit. Lol that Hellofresh line was actually funny! I just picked each lines that stood out to me the most from both ends. Nice punches from both ends, creativity could have been better but dope battle Vote: Alvin |
01-31-2018, 03:30 PM | #7 |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die Nice flip good wordplay u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six Lol nice wordplay again u ain't original.. ur styles a mix from all the old vets n such sure, you take the novel approach.. when ya lines are stretched as fuck Seen this flip done before 0 u ain't crazy.. ur an old faggot who should quit only pussies think ur schizocarp.. real dudes want this aging fruit to split Wordplay was cool but i wasnt really digging the display of finish u said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish Lol good wordplay Karp Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memoriesfat wife Get the personal i just felt the finisher lacked impact Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average Lol That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let Nah wasnt feeling this flip You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there Wasnt feeling how u flipped Nice wordplay and personal last bar Well fresh was creative according to his use of wordimg. Karp landed a couple personals but was inconsistent in some Areas. V/Fresh for better creativity |
01-31-2018, 10:32 PM | #8 |
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Felt Habitat edged it for me here with the verse that started stronger, however it did kind of falter a bit at the end to me. Feel like wording was your main issue here, as I can point to one bar in particular where the concept was clever, but the wordplay you used didn't work grammatically both ways, which kind of put a damper on the punch.
Alvin had the more consistent verse, but it was consistent in the way that it was just average to me. No real ups or downs to it, but there wasn't anything that separated him from his opponent. Few bars just didn't really bring any impact, in my opinion, like the Super Bowl bar. Just was kind of a weak concept. MVGT : Habitat |
02-01-2018, 06:09 PM | #9 |
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Habitat.. the bullet point n clancy punches were solid.
Karp.. the hellofresh punch was dope but aside from that I just didnt feel like u put much thought into the concepts u had n I kno u can execute so rlly just seemed like u got lazy in this one man. V/ hab |
02-02-2018, 01:17 PM | #10 |
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Bullet point is kinda cool Rainbow Six had to connect a lot of dots, just ok. novel approach doesn't connect for me WTF is a scyzokarp? closer is overcooked. Vs Karpis Opener is simple but effective. Tat wp isn't doing it for me. I don't get the lit/let line HelloFresh ain't my cup of tea. I don't get the reference in the closer. Bullet Point was the lotb. Vote -- Habitat
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02-02-2018, 06:55 PM | #11 |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy
The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die nice u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six ok u ain't original.. ur styles a mix from all the old vets n such sure, you take the novel approach.. when ya lines are stretched as fuck nah u ain't crazy.. ur an old faggot who should quit only pussies think ur schizocarp.. real dudes want this aging fruit to split bro what lmao no u said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish nah I didn’t like this at all man vs Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories just decent Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average i thought this was pretty good That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let gone, this is a good personal tbh but you gotta know what he’s referring to You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there nah Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox wasnt feelin this This was a close battle. I feel like habitat had 1 more miss than Alvin. Obviously this is going down to preference and for me I feel that habitat forced too much wordplay, his misses were miiiiiiisses, but his opener LOTB. Alvin came with a more personal approach, his misses weren’t good at all but he got it here. Vote Alvin Karpis |
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That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memoriesfat wife Good Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average Funny That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let Haa You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there Not familiar Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox Eh V karp |
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opener was worded well, it hit rainbow 6 was lol schizocarp was cool novel approach was an inaccurate personal & closer was executed poorly vs Alvin opener was simple but effective tattoo was OK lit/let joint was nice hellofresh was coo didnt like ur closer alvin got this off consistency v/karp |
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Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories -too simple for my tastes unless its a personal Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average -not bad That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let -Lol, good flip on that You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there - seen it alot tbh Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox - decent closer vs Hab: ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die - good wording on a somewhat played concept u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six -cool, i dug it u ain't original.. ur styles a mix from all the old vets n such sure, you take the novel approach.. when ya lines are stretched as fuck - bah u ain't crazy.. ur an old faggot who should quit only pussies think ur schizocarp.. real dudes want this aging fruit to split - very original....obscure but worked well u said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish eh nice wp, odd exec This a toss up. Guess vote -Karp for less missed Last edited by Saint; 02-03-2018 at 03:06 PM. |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy
The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die Nice u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six Cool u ain't original.. ur styles a mix from all the old vets n such sure, you take the novel approach.. when ya lines are stretched as fuck Ehh u ain't crazy.. ur an old faggot who should quit only pussies think ur schizocarp.. real dudes want this aging fruit to split I fuck w/this u said ur girl smell like Apples, that her pussy was like "autumn bliss" I picture the american Piscine.. except ur jason biggs n she's a pile of rotten fish Ok s 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories Cool Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average Nice That weak rep, This canuck says he gets all the freaks wet Superbowl weekend you bout to get Lit huh? oh shit wait I mean Let Lol dope You’re unapproachable and more than a square... If a chick ever says HelloFresh, they can’t cook and ordered from there Ok Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox Ehh Nice battle, got it 4-4 1 miss a piece but overall felt karp landed more personals which seemed to be more effective and had more impact.. close and can see it going either way but I got karp edging this one.. vote ak |
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02-05-2018, 08:46 AM | #18 |
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ur a Symbol of scum baggery and faggotry, s'why ima hurt this guy
The Bullet Point at ur head... I've got a list of reasons why u deserve to die u roll with faggots.. when ur crew fightin', the reason's gay as shit if his Clancy any action it's the colourful variety.. call em the rainbow six vs. Des 7-0 in votes?? lol he sonned you and now you have an enemy That old man whooping yo ass had to bring back some childhood memories Everybody talking about how many tats they have, what’s so savage Is RB said they have a Tattoo.. n he forces wp and is below average Old man Des walked all over you, Powerful? this flukes not Des didn’t even need a Kanan his hand and you still ended up like Jukebox Some really good lines in this one. I got Karp edging it and was more consistent, Hab shot himself in the foot with those really played lines like novel and some forced shit. Rainbow 6 was probs LOTB. V/ Karp
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I liked Hab more here. Dug the creativity. I don't mind the wordplay once it's done well and it was. KARP had humour but I think Hab edged it out. His opener was nice. Clancy was too. Enjoyed the Kanan shit from KARP. But yeah vote Hab.
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02-05-2018, 01:28 PM | #20 |
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Alvin Karpis Wins 8-6
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