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Old 01-23-2018, 11:48 AM   #1
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Old 01-25-2018, 11:22 AM   #2
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Old 01-25-2018, 11:27 AM   #3
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Old 01-27-2018, 05:57 PM   #4
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Old 01-28-2018, 02:08 PM   #5
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@Orc yo I been hella busy lately...can we extend the battle till next weekend ? I can write something by Thursday...we can do 16 @Destroyer
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@Orc yo I been hella busy lately...can we extend the battle till next weekend ? I can write something by Thursday...we can do 16 @Destroyer
Latest I can do is Tuesday man. This needs to move on by Wednesday. Can you get ten lines in by Tuesday?
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Old 01-28-2018, 02:41 PM   #7
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@Orc aight cool !! Do I dm u the round ?
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@Orc aight cool !! Do I dm u the round ?
You can post it here or dm it to me. Whatever suits you man.
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Aight bet ! 10 lines it is @Destroyer
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Im pass rhyming , this des diss aint just words that sound the same but its a game changer
Im in his crib with tools blazin , room shakin , its not a haymaker
Destroyer aint bearing his foundation shaky while my build ups quake-resistant
What its gon take to listen?maybe a bullet pushed behind the ear like grade retention
The man behind the shotgun , its not a backseat , he plane frontin like 1st class seats
These M16s airing out early like a slim shady track leak
Get jumped off a battery charge im in the hood sparkin shit
This fool targeted, bald heads give em a big push thats good marketing
U dont show no love in these fights this a funeral homez u a coffin owner
I got the heart to deliver the kid knees to his weak body like an organ donor
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Old 01-30-2018, 05:54 PM   #11
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Whoa. What happened here?
Was anyone gonna tell me?
Will edit in 10 later tonight
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u ain’t shit on this site. gassed up, but ur rhymes all fake.
I say fuck class like I just got to college and met a dude with a nitrous tank
my lines like a dab hit, straight to ur chest and heavenly
think u got flames? ERBL got it twisted... u a joint rolled in the 70s
I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame
des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username
aim at the chest, back...des just lets the lead blast
only misclassify was mistaken him for a bitch who was less wack
orc predicted you to win, then we double no-showed and I sighed a bit
the one upset in this battle was me when the shit reopened and I had to write for it
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Im pass rhyming , this des diss aint just words that sound the same but its a game changer
Im in his crib with tools blazin , room shakin , its not a haymaker
Could've made the concept land w/ better execution
Destroyer aint bearing his foundation shaky while my build ups quake-resistant
What its gon take to listen?maybe a bullet pushed behind the ear like grade retention
Again, good idea but your wordings boring, no impact to the punch
The man behind the shotgun , its not a backseat , he plane frontin like 1st class seats
These M16s airing out early like a slim shady track leak
Em 16/M16's been done, plus that's 3 gun plays in a row
Get jumped off a battery charge im in the hood sparkin shit
This fool targeted, bald heads give em a big push thats good marketing
Decent, but another redundant gun bar
U dont show no love in these fights this a funeral homez u a coffin owner
I got the heart to deliver the kid knees to his weak body like an organ donor
Naw kid knee's super played
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u ain’t shit on this site. gassed up, but ur rhymes all fake.
I say fuck class like I just got to college and met a dude with a nitrous tank
Weak opener
my lines like a dab hit, straight to ur chest and heavenly
think u got flames? ERBL got it twisted... u a joint rolled in the 70s
Decent
I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame
des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username
Lol simple, yet effective
aim at the chest, back...des just lets the lead blast
only misclassify was mistaken him for a bitch who was less wack
Clever
orc predicted you to win, then we double no-showed and I sighed a bit
the one upset in this battle was me when the shit reopened and I had to write for it
Dope closer
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Old 01-31-2018, 02:58 AM   #14
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Classick, you had me lost at the beginning but picked up later on.
I didnt like your opener or the following talking about quake resistant.
I thought that was a reeeeally big stretch so it didnt sit well with me...
otherwise...

The man behind the shotgun , its not a backseat , he plane frontin like 1st class seats
These M16s airing out early like a slim shady track leak


I thought the wording to this was pretty cool, keep that up.
the closer was on point to but the bar in between had me on edge.
dope shit.

Destroyer, I thought that opener of yours was pretty funny,
but you start to go in after the first few lines which was worthwhile.

I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame
des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username


for some reason that made me laugh out loud and I dont know why.
regardless your rebuttal was well done.

v/Destroyer, Classick had a few decent lines & stumbled at the start.
thought some of his other concepts were clever but didnt pack much punch.
his opponent on the other hand came correct with some nice set ups.
the execution overall is what wowd me and thats what made my decision easier.
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Classic you had nice concepts in there but all suffered from wording for sharpness directness whatever. None seemed specific to your opponent an was too many gun bars. Best line was probably knees kidney but then that was the most played concept. If you could word them like that one using your fresher creative concepts youd have it nailed.

Destroyer bar his opener was consistent, closer reminded me of orcsin the nbl last week tbh but was still clever and that 70s joint shit and swollen username were so simple an yet really effective

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I got excited because I recognized Classick, but its not the same one :(

lot of played stuff on his end, there were some decent ideas...I expected more from the first 2 lines but the wording killed it.

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think u got flames? ERBL got it twisted... u a joint rolled in the 70s
I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame
des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username


Des got this pretty handedly. I didn't like any of the verse other than these two, but the swollen on one side line was flames. The herbal line was cool too.

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classic, that haymaker line had soooooo much potential. you were close w.it tho, the setup kinda messed it up. same w. grade retention. eminem 16s for a bit, so stay clear of em punches unless its a current event u're flippin.

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swollen line issa hit. closer was fire, lol.

keep it up classic. try not to od it when u get on the big stage. hopefully u learned from it.

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Classick, i liked the concepts of your first 2 lines but the wording made em fall short. I did like the second couplet ' grade retention' concept could of been good. Setups could use smoothing too.

Des - the swollen line, joint was cool, missclassify cool wp but so so flip.

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