01-23-2018, 11:48 AM | #1 |
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ClassickERBL vs Destroyer - DESTROYER WINS
THE WINTER CLASSIC The Premier Text Battling Tournament Rules Due Dates:
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01-25-2018, 11:22 AM | #2 |
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@Destroyer @BROKE LESNAR check ins are due Friday. At that point you'll be replaced
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01-25-2018, 11:27 AM | #3 |
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01-27-2018, 05:57 PM | #4 |
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01-28-2018, 02:11 PM | #6 |
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01-30-2018, 05:30 PM | #10 |
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Im pass rhyming , this des diss aint just words that sound the same but its a game changer
Im in his crib with tools blazin , room shakin , its not a haymaker Destroyer aint bearing his foundation shaky while my build ups quake-resistant What its gon take to listen?maybe a bullet pushed behind the ear like grade retention The man behind the shotgun , its not a backseat , he plane frontin like 1st class seats These M16s airing out early like a slim shady track leak Get jumped off a battery charge im in the hood sparkin shit This fool targeted, bald heads give em a big push thats good marketing U dont show no love in these fights this a funeral homez u a coffin owner I got the heart to deliver the kid knees to his weak body like an organ donor |
01-30-2018, 05:54 PM | #11 |
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Whoa. What happened here?
Was anyone gonna tell me? Will edit in 10 later tonight |
01-30-2018, 09:47 PM | #12 |
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u ain’t shit on this site. gassed up, but ur rhymes all fake.
I say fuck class like I just got to college and met a dude with a nitrous tank my lines like a dab hit, straight to ur chest and heavenly think u got flames? ERBL got it twisted... u a joint rolled in the 70s I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username aim at the chest, back...des just lets the lead blast only misclassify was mistaken him for a bitch who was less wack orc predicted you to win, then we double no-showed and I sighed a bit the one upset in this battle was me when the shit reopened and I had to write for it |
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01-31-2018, 02:58 AM | #14 |
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Classick, you had me lost at the beginning but picked up later on.
I didnt like your opener or the following talking about quake resistant. I thought that was a reeeeally big stretch so it didnt sit well with me... otherwise... The man behind the shotgun , its not a backseat , he plane frontin like 1st class seats These M16s airing out early like a slim shady track leak I thought the wording to this was pretty cool, keep that up. the closer was on point to but the bar in between had me on edge. dope shit. Destroyer, I thought that opener of yours was pretty funny, but you start to go in after the first few lines which was worthwhile. I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username for some reason that made me laugh out loud and I dont know why. regardless your rebuttal was well done. v/Destroyer, Classick had a few decent lines & stumbled at the start. thought some of his other concepts were clever but didnt pack much punch. his opponent on the other hand came correct with some nice set ups. the execution overall is what wowd me and thats what made my decision easier. nice showing from both competitors.
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01-31-2018, 08:55 AM | #15 |
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Classic you had nice concepts in there but all suffered from wording for sharpness directness whatever. None seemed specific to your opponent an was too many gun bars. Best line was probably knees kidney but then that was the most played concept. If you could word them like that one using your fresher creative concepts youd have it nailed.
Destroyer bar his opener was consistent, closer reminded me of orcsin the nbl last week tbh but was still clever and that 70s joint shit and swollen username were so simple an yet really effective Vote des |
01-31-2018, 11:00 AM | #16 |
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I got excited because I recognized Classick, but its not the same one :(
lot of played stuff on his end, there were some decent ideas...I expected more from the first 2 lines but the wording killed it. vs. my lines like a dab hit, straight to ur chest and heavenly think u got flames? ERBL got it twisted... u a joint rolled in the 70s I’ll beat u with my right hand only. Bottom line? this dude’s a lame des will leave u all swollen on one side looking like ur fucking username Des got this pretty handedly. I didn't like any of the verse other than these two, but the swollen on one side line was flames. The herbal line was cool too. V/ Des
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01-31-2018, 05:29 PM | #17 |
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classic, that haymaker line had soooooo much potential. you were close w.it tho, the setup kinda messed it up. same w. grade retention. eminem 16s for a bit, so stay clear of em punches unless its a current event u're flippin.
vs swollen line issa hit. closer was fire, lol. keep it up classic. try not to od it when u get on the big stage. hopefully u learned from it. mvgt- @Destroyer |
01-31-2018, 09:16 PM | #18 |
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Classick, i liked the concepts of your first 2 lines but the wording made em fall short. I did like the second couplet ' grade retention' concept could of been good. Setups could use smoothing too.
Des - the swollen line, joint was cool, missclassify cool wp but so so flip. Vote Des
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