01-22-2018, 02:49 PM | #1 |
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Krucial 13 vs. Strikta - STRIKTA WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Krucial Th1rt3en @Strikta Last edited by For Battling; 01-22-2018 at 05:34 PM. |
01-26-2018, 10:30 PM | #2 |
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I been nice lately, but staying outta trouble's so easy it hurts Now if I'm up to no good, I'm staring close at my monitor reading ya verse Poor bitch u'll never get better - words that broke this boy's heart.. ..Get mad Face it, only time ya change into a machine is at ya local coinstar U look like a mess, strung out on meth & dope, slammin' & sniffin' Drugs just didn't take a toll on ur body, it snapped a pic & mailed u a ticket Rather fuck whores w/ a hat than get BJs by ya girl who sucks for fun I'll roll w/ the safety over the top like I'm playing some Cover 1 |
01-26-2018, 11:42 PM | #3 |
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im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact,
im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat. your bars are trash, step it up, until then-this practice, your Wordplay wouldnt be outside the box if u had children's fridge magnets. your tooo easy, i can beat u with something light against your hardest, catch bodies with text/tecs, dropping throw aways on you since your garbage. wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time, ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time. Last edited by Krucial Th1rt3en; 01-28-2018 at 04:17 AM. Reason: shortened verse |
01-27-2018, 07:06 AM | #4 |
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Anywho. A dragon/draggin wp in 2018? Ok if u say so. That was ya second best line. Fridge line was solid. But then u did the text/tech. First we are not retarded. U don’t have to point out the wordplay. Also it’s a verse not a couplet party.
Strikt. Opener was lazy. Coin star and toll were good enough to get u the win Vote Strikt
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01-27-2018, 07:30 AM | #5 |
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Vote: Strikta - coin & toll were cool.
No big misses, opener was passable. Wording was good. Krucial- fridge line was good. metal could been done different, needed revision. Liked the MK reference except dragon wp. Didnt like your last 3. Wording/concept.
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@Krucial Th1rt3en you need to edit out lines to match what your opponent dropped
If you don’t match it’s a DQ Last edited by For Battling; 01-27-2018 at 09:37 AM. |
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01-27-2018, 07:39 PM | #8 |
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ill- Coinstar and toll were nice. opener and closer were meh
13-As other have stated your concepts/plays are very dated and done. You really have something going like a personal to get away with them and certain ones like as above stated are just corny now. Its hard to know from site to site what been done before but if its some90's wordplay you should already know. Keeping grinding though you can form punchlines you got some mechanics down just need a bit more originality/creativity. vote ill |
01-27-2018, 08:32 PM | #9 |
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krucial, I actually liked your draggin thru the fiya bar, the only issue is that it's played.sex doll line was okish. I like the magnet line. next 2 i didn't care for. pootie tang strap line was played but not too bad of a line.
you def look like u have a gd grips on things. ur biggest issue is lookin ta figure out what's played & vice versa. in all honesty, that will come w.time. if u care enough to, i think readin some verses in the archives might help w.that some. in all honesty, so much shit has been ran through so u can come w. a concept you think is fresh & there will be atleast 1 muthafucka tell you that its played so its def hard. messaging people might help w.that. Boa Constrikta verse was pretty dope. i didn't like the first line but its pretty much like the no showing as muthafucka hasn't lost a step. coinstar & toll on body went hard, lol. mvgt- @Strikta |
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im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact, im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat. Good but my dragon line was better your bars are trash, step it up, until then-this practice, your Wordplay wouldnt be outside the box if u had children's fridge magnets. Nice your tooo easy, i can beat u with something light against your hardest, catch bodies with text/tecs, dropping throw aways on you since your garbage. Bro wtf fuck strikta this shit nice wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time, ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time. Good because that nigga tried to play you with those lazy ass lines V krucial |
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01-28-2018, 08:33 AM | #11 |
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Strick killed it even rusty
Coin star and toll were hilarious and hit hard Other dude looked like he did a bedtime punch???? No, just no V/strik |
01-28-2018, 08:50 AM | #12 |
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Strik dropped oldschool here and I enjoyed it. Up to no good and taking a toll were like the old RM style of flipping cliches and making them fresh. I fucked with it. Kru needs to take the advice he's been given and sharpen up. Lose the techs lines. Be more creative. Harsher wording. If it's gunbars that's fine -- make them harsh.
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01-28-2018, 09:04 AM | #13 |
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I been nice lately, but staying outta trouble's so easy it hurts Now if I'm up to no good, I'm staring close at my monitor reading ya verse Poor bitch u'll never get better - words that broke this boy's heart.. ..Get mad Face it, only time ya change into a machine is at ya local coinstar U look like a mess, strung out on meth & dope, slammin' & sniffin' Drugs just didn't take a toll on ur body, it snapped a pic & mailed u a ticket this was very dope... you should battle more often... as fire as it was that toll line was kinda hypocritical yo... im flaming u this bad, bcuz i love to resort to contact, im dragon u thru the fire like the logo of Mortal Kombat. wit these Caps i pill heads, its med time, ill put his lights out early, this Strict' bed time. I think you have a lot of potential. I like your wording but your stuff is kinda outdated. I think you will be a beast if you keep at it for a month or too. Vote- Strikta. He had fresher lines and was more consistent. Bye...
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