ZenLand Part II - Page 3

Zen · 06-04-2013, 06:18 PM

Dope feed @namix. You deserve an accomplishment for that feed lol. And yes I'm glad you caught that left in doubt and now he's on the "right" path. Excellent feed. I'll feed your other piece soon ain't got much time lately.

Mr. J · 06-08-2013, 01:01 AM

Verse was pretty slick a nice flow to it as well
you bounced your word usage around to rhyme well
which had this piece oozing with nice mixture of arrogant tendencies
while also turning it into a stronger stand towards the end
a good twist for the whole verse...nice drop my dude keep writing

06-08-2013, 01:01 AM	#42
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,025 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	Verse was pretty slick a nice flow to it as well you bounced your word usage around to rhyme well which had this piece oozing with nice mixture of arrogant tendencies while also turning it into a stronger stand towards the end a good twist for the whole verse...nice drop my dude keep writing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-04-2013, 06:18 PM	#41
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	Dope feed @namix. You deserve an accomplishment for that feed lol. And yes I'm glad you caught that left in doubt and now he's on the "right" path. Excellent feed. I'll feed your other piece soon ain't got much time lately.