Round One: Chat and Prediction

[Adonis]

Rules state: Each vote below the minimum of 3 means you start off round two negative votes

Example... If all battles closed right now and Tyson has cast zero votes, in Round Two he will be already losing by three votes. If he were facing say Witty, who has two votes, Tyson would be down two votes at the begining of battle due to One of Witty's lack of votes negates one of Tyson's



Voting Tally's

Thank you

GodComplex -3
Argh -3
Pinot - 5 Votes you beautiful soul
Mr. J - 4 votes you kind asshole
MMLP -3
Pent uP -3
Cimmerian -3


Needs One More Vote

@Witty
@NYCSPITZ
@PiE

Needs Two More Votes

@Diode
@Vividlyvague


Needs three more votes

@Bags
@Frank
@Soulstice @dead man
@TYSON



If I missed something let me know. I preemptively apologize and will correct asap. Working on mag so I'll be on for a bit

[Cimmerian]

@Adonis , I voted for Pent UP, Pinot Grij, and Razah.

Cimm.

[Adonis]

I ball, you watch from steal bleachers. Witty David, I'm Goliath, but you will never copper feel neither. Like me people did Jesus, you to can get either'd. Be it by meat cleaver or choke hold a la Dennis Siver. I'm the real Notorious, fuck you and your Nations Bitch Leader


That was for @Witty

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Cimmerian

@Adonis , I voted for Pent UP, Pinot Grij, and Razah.

Cimm.

Word, I knew you dropped three, I'm re-checking now but I got you. Much appreciated

[Cimmerian]

Originally Posted by Adonis

Word, I knew you dropped three, I'm re-checking now but I got you. Much appreciated

No worries. Thanks for herding cats.

[TYSON]

Will vote tonight.

[Mr. J]

@Adonis don't stray from the challenge >_0

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

@Adonis don't stray from the challenge >_0

I'm always game broseph

Always writing too whether I post it or not, I am literally a writing junkie

Unfortunately I have to write a mag, this will take up today and tomorrow


But if you write up 10-20 I can match before bed. And I by match I mean like gasoline that ass

[Mr. J]

You have a middle man to choose the topic...

[UnbornBuddha]

I did 4 votes!

And will battles be up by Friday?

[Pharaohs Army]

Bringing this up as a chat item, a perspective from a relatively green topical voter/writer

I've read the @MMLP vs. @PentUp verses a couple times each.

Was about to vote, but I truly don't feel like I can contribute a vote. I am leaning slightly towards one, but...I'm not bein a dick here; it's just not my "thing", but I will keep dipping my foot in the water.

As a man of words I'm having trouble expressing what I wanna express here, let alone attempting to express a "vote explanation", lol.

Obviously some good metaphors in both.. And good rhyming.. Just... too thick. Too heavy..

I guess it's personal stylistic preference.
You guys are too good and rhymie for your own good... i.e. I enjoy super-rhymie stuff, but (TO ME) it seems to work better if it's bragging or violence or humor or battlez... as opposed to a serious topic or story, where one should strive to be concise despite one's instinct to rhymerhymerhyme.
for example MMLP is a dope writer(his verse in AOWL impressed me big-time), but tbh I view his first-round story here as over-rhymed and kinda shitty. Meaning it's superfluous.
and PentUp... too thick bro. Redundant a few times. BUT I MEAN ITS GOOD WRITING, BOTH OF THEM

So yeah I'm 0-6 and don't have too much credibility, but I Hope ya'll in this terny understand what I'm trying to convey here.
Like I said. Dip feets in water. *Back to keying jarbled mania, I guess*. lol.

&thanks to voters-- in my first round vs. Witty-- for the constructive tips and breakdowns. I realize technicality is usually my downfall in anything I do... Few days ago I was taking my verse apart and trying like 5 different ways to display it. Frustrating tbh. Ended up just going with my original format. Basically I'll take L as long as people understand that limitless kinda rhymes with fingertips.
Ironically, in most things I write I put technicality above all else. Which I guess we could say is a big problem, since I often fail@'showing' others. It's been years of a struggle lemme tellya.

I coulda just said I didn't vote so I could "save votes" for ppl who need them.
P.S. @Adonis^ I haven't crunched the numbers but I have a feeling that mathematically voters who are "late to the party" might be left in the cold and could be killed by the voting rule, particuarly if there are a bunch of sweeps. So plz take that into account before you actually punish anyone by the letter of the law.. I understand it's a fine line though-- not voting(lazy) VS. not voting early(and being screwed).

GL all in next rds

[Ghost1]

Lol but u a fagit 5ho

[Pharaohs Army]

everything's about me, bags... so i'll just assume you were addressing me.
what is "5ho?"
F OFF!

[grafx]

voting here soon

[Mr. J]

@Adonis where is that topiiiiiiiiiiccccccccc

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

@Adonis where is that topiiiiiiiiiiccccccccc

Pick one bro. Actually pick a bunch and send them to me for round two topics.


Everyone do this please

@league

[Mr. J]

But.........I don't like doing things I dont need to do...













Fuck

[Pharaohs Army]

Originally Posted by Witty

Looking forward to our battle @Pharaohs Army

nice job man. silky

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

But.........I don't like doing things I dont need to do...










Fuck

Free write me twenty and I'll collab tonight

[Diode]

umm i voted on two already. i only have one left.