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Old 09-07-2015, 01:44 AM   #1781
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I've begun to re-examine artistry, and mesh together parts of me. And recognizing redundant cyclical patterns, is only the start for me. The next step is asking if I have any stamina, or strength, to go along, wit the heart in me.

Because you haven't really done anything if you've done it partially. Ask yourself what's next. Pretend you're asking yourself in which direction r u going with your Text.

And then maybe life's questions are a lot more linear. And then maybe, even when it's not 3AM you'll be full of pep and vinegar.

Give credence to the common phrase about your mind and body being a temple. Treat weekends as another important day in your life. Make them eventful, or Un-eventful, if that's what makes them eventful.

Certain scientists credit the longevity of religions with the fact that death is eventual.
I think it's More than that. I still think it's All a bunch of crap, but I'm peering deep into my sense of self- for a starter kit.

In the scheme of it all (cosmological & geological), you and I mean nothing. The purpose of our life is nothing. But it still felt redeeming, to reassuringly talk to my friend, who said, some day she'd feel happy. And I think my other friend felt a sense of purpose,, when he helped me deal with 'er passing.

My goal, went from writing classics, enchanting masses, and practicing rapping,, to being the same person day in and day out. Yet it hasn't happened. Along with that I found a little pile of dirty authenticity which had fallen out the bottom where the straps connect to my knapsack.

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Old 09-07-2015, 01:54 AM   #1782
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its interesting to learn new things everyday
but not when were treated like animals and put on display
I need to reconsider my destruction of the past
as ive finally begun to underestimate the outcast
and dragging my body along as it submits to its dishonour
im like an ingenius antidote that crawls like an otter
im too overwhelming its like your a pet that im petting
and its too dreary for bettering its my history that im forgetting
whenever these emotions call on my persona
I feel like sipping a corona with my shampagne supernova
shes forever indicted to my conditions of remorse
trying to find the pain and then kill it at the source
its never ending the story that I cant help but finish
and I cant end this viscious circle that's now so significant
if only I could turn back the hands of time
if only I could learn how to deal with the demands of life
bagging dimes woulda been a more supporting actress
but forever sadness has engraved itself inside my callous
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Old 09-07-2015, 02:11 AM   #1783
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bah. it feels like a few months ago i went down the rhyme worm hole. something about finding a Balance between being a manic and picking and choosing the time to be appropriately pedantic.
in school i was taught philosophy and the material composition of ceramics.
and poetry.. maybe i should 've paid attention.
i was too busy being a genius and giving my fucked up head internal lectures.
i was too busy watching coverage of some unimportant presidential election.
i was too busy taking for granted my family, and their extra loving attention.
too busy seeking the next rush of adrenaline
too busy seeking unnecessary medicine
too busy dreaming that i'd someday find evidence
..of why i have these particular outlooks,and sentiments
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Old 09-08-2015, 02:33 AM   #1784
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Oblivion, the directive to follow any light that gathered...
a sign of deliverance that came from the enrapture
when it disappeared the squads rally ended in laughter
wrapping the universe in a blanket of natural disasters
in the depths of galaxies crushed into particle matter
absorbing the source of life through a straw. reclining backwards.
Staff Sergeant Reginald Masters.
The 3rd generation in a line of heartless bastards...
at a commanding height with a broad demanding stature
silence overcame the groups.
the troops were looped in hoopty hoops
all I wanted for Christmas was a loopty loop
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Old 09-09-2015, 02:34 PM   #1785
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im damaging and cant imagine a vanquished fling
but I can twist you round my finger like a ring
its dope when I connect with lung ins
its like a piece of my sleeve way I got cufflings
I gotta respond with this verse postehaste
you couldn't clean ya mouth out even with colgate
wonder why ya gums ache its from me chipping ya tooth
bubble up ya lip and no chewing gum just fishing with hooks
im dope on the mic I gotta stop feeling so accomplished
the best offense I was told was facing your conflicts
I know this verse was sloppy im deterred like a newbie
and my jewels are rubies way I got ya purchasing product like sony
yo im ill on the decks and you could call me a real lyricist
im like an addiction since your having a hard time trying to resist
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Old 09-10-2015, 04:18 PM   #1786
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I'm the gift the rift in time
the split that has further lifted lives
I'm BLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIND
leading the blind...
off the cliff, to become ledge ends
I'm a one way into a dead end
you from the club waking up with bed head
stepping stones that can't step yet..
I'm a fresh breath, you a big mess
whhhhaaaaaaaaaat?
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Old 09-14-2015, 02:10 PM   #1788
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yo im fleshing it out in my true colours
yo yeah bitch working her figure shes all about numbers
dude Im dope when it comes to text and dropping shit
I could piss bricks still aint come up with anything legit
dope is as dope does that's what my mommy told me
its like listening to retro cuz half your albums are oldies
I aint one to diss without having proper introduction first
you like the bombs in the spangled banner about to burst
im dope with rhymes im just trying to set this punch up
ill be parachuting through the sky like the elephant dumbo
you got nothing on me im too ill when I write rhymes
if this was the front page it would be on the new York times
im amazing with spit and im constantly dropping flows
ill be right up under your nose and suck u in like an undertoe
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Old 09-15-2015, 01:51 AM   #1789
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I run alone, you live yours or become a clone
I clutch a bone strike you with this club or stone
what do you call a man with rubber toe?
I don't know but let me get this shit right...I wear...
insanity abandoning anything luscious or vast in me
I'm rambling, battle me...come & get that vasectomy
two side to a story, 50/50 chance, some call it destiny
when the battles inside for me, theres a dent in me..
verbal treasurer, some call me god's messenger...
but I got a complex, so I toy with her as I'm textin' her
tellin' her I have unborn peace I want to be blessin' her
i mean it's such a huge peace, better bring a measurer
sometimes I like to eat bacon but my girl hates pig
I mean she doesn't hate pig, but people like you she hates...dig?
I'm just kidding, kidding like I grew up to be Taye Diggs
getting married needing breathments other insane shit...
lol @ this shit..
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Old 09-16-2015, 08:58 AM   #1790
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im dope trying to figure a way to light this blunt
but im counting the rings like the life inside a tree trunk
or an elephant so many ways of describing this text
I could kick this like an old western but id rather flex
ill put a dent in your tooth now you subject to flute
I thought it was a dope flow but cant please everyone
you think everything revolves around you like the sun
im splitting the world up as if I was the equator
im like something you can write on a piece of paper
like a signature or an autograph one of two ways of signing
but im just tired of writing and this verse still igniting
I wish I could end this but I got no luck like a four leaf clover
so I found nature underneath a rock and told her Im a motor
so she slipped me some oil and I filled up the gas tank
but then filled you with carbon dioxide and you battleship sank
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Old 09-16-2015, 02:22 PM   #1791
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I got her shame walking on a bed of hot coals.
sole-less.
This house is not home. Butt; her throat is (lol).
Mourning shower crying down upon her. Where a hole is
there's a pooling power rising to devour a moment.
Nurture her flowering lotus with a candlestick, focused.
Gone with the wind while she fans the wick. Hopeless.
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Life made me a man with a vagina.
I mean like, I have a penis (slightly above average), but I was created through the biological function of vagina.
And of penis too but I feel as if I wasnt really "me" while occupying a nutsack. My dad's nutsack of course but, he wasnt really my dad then... or now....
In fact my mom was more like my dad then lol, because she had nothing to do with my life at that point... <---- that point right there.
The approximate size of a female germ cell. S'cool (ironic since it's pronounced like "school" but the spelling implies I never went/am gay).

Lives stop when the magnum pops.
Like my parents lives because I was a burdensome accident conceived in the heat of a moment that extended itself into my life-span.
But I've only ever known this in hindsight, which I'm grateful for.

some things are true enough. like my dick being above average. the proof is out there where the truth isn't.
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Old 09-16-2015, 08:07 PM   #1793
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pour the wine & wipe the floor
my videos should be filmed by Michael Moore
7/11 is pretty cool...honestly..I like the store!
hate girls who ain't fight before
I like hoodrats who bite like Mike Tyson..WHORES!
tryna touch a cloud like I AINT BEEN THIS HIGH BEFORE
I like girls who write, or use words like 'adore'
it's so cute, so fucking cute, I HATE THAT TYPE OF LORE
my bedrooms outside but I reeeeeeeeally like indoors...
damn them for housing me in this frightened source of biting force typing more....


wtf am I talking bout lol
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Old 09-16-2015, 10:13 PM   #1794
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Wise like a lycan dwarf swiping paws on some vinyl boards
Using kaleidoscopes as viking swords. I'm absorbed
Into water and can't find the shore, wino corpse
In some tye dye shorts, planking on the High Times Porsche
Praying to Hitler, embracing this winter
Rounding up the icicles and making em dinner
Nvm, stabbing myself, chasing a sliver
Giving showers, golden- flow from clouds above, painting the silver
Lining with blood, send some art to your heart- designer drug
Bodying beats, bury em in all kinds of rugs
Titan thug raising lightning up but that's light-end stuff
Where it gets heavy, you take breathers, I wear it steady
And make ether. Break people for staring reckless
Carry stretchers to battles to foreshadow how they'll leave after
But that's barely practice, I'm that dare that has you..
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@Wise Wiggles, your shit just makes me happy inside. for real
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I'm a muthafuckin' pteradactyl
I like to share some cashews
& stare at statues
a song weird al can sample
expensive footwear
don't compare to sandals
or prepare the shampoo..
you dare to battle?
I'll make you wear your ass fool
quick like preparin' fast food
embarrassin' fat dudes
I'm careless & that's true...
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felt a little greener as i stood where my grass grew
higher than a senior short of meds that are past due
chuggin down a liter of a keg like a vacuum
who'd i really think was gonna get the last laugh, you?
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you weird, like who want to share a bathroom
your farts are like terrorist gas fumes
you prolly have a phillip & terrence tattoo
and shit a little bit when you ah ah ah ahhhchoooo
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Haha, got me chucklin like that's cute
I'm chillin sippin on this pabst blue
Warmin up to solids from that flask juice
And only wake up as long as it's past noon
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What do you know about racism and hatred, favoritism and discrimination, American culture and being raised in it? Got your hand in the air? Cops breaking it, slamming ya face to the pavement and taking you in
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