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Old 06-12-2015, 07:52 PM   #1581
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uh huh. Now we're Really Rapping. which in turn inspires Audience to be Really Clapping.
Filled With Madness and self-Assuredness,and Talent. i kin tell you right away 2 particular authorsWho-'re-ahead'a-the Curve-in-This.
or maybe i should have said it like This. i can tell you right away two particular authors who are ahead 'v the curve in this.
ever since
i learned to spit,
i try not to dick-ride,
those who Diss Mine.
oh look at That line,
and Then look at this line..
what the hell is stopping me from doing this Six more Times? !
Yo, i peer into the mind of those who kin spit more rhymes.
i advise,
myself that Some are connected en some r just in metric.
as a youngster?- i listened to hendrix.
dylan was a better lyricist but Jimi made the song Better.
i guess-that's-why-i-constantly pester
and obviously occasionally drop a "test verse"
cuz some day i'm gonna strut around[,]like i "been heard".
^how didju Say-that-line-First?
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Old 06-12-2015, 08:19 PM   #1582
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Hey J.. This whole week iz ben Cra zay.. well, not particularly.. not2much iz ben atta the ordinar e.. i jus said that because it was a cool rhyme n this site is net cees.. boy... i'm glad someone Else finds this a breeze.. n i can't evin follow tht up with the word "fabreeze"\becuz i already used it on youtube\fer sheez.
Smile for the camera. say cheese... an ennertainer iz all i Ever Rilly Wanted ta Be..
or maybe i should've said it like This: an entertainer. is all i ever. really wanted to be.
Yes i Think That Works For Me; and i surely hope,it works for thee.
i'm truly the worst emcee,that you ever will,Might See.
fuck man. i don' even know where this is going.
basically i just wanted to say wow,i'm not the only one that writes alot.. i usually do it from the same house but some times i do it from a different writing-spot.
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Old 06-13-2015, 12:55 AM   #1583
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penis slut whore hoe cunt
peanut butter toast crunch
dreamy mother; pho lunch
evenings rumble, after dark
shadow park. This plateau, heart.
I'm a wacko, shark.
Airing your bitch Muff out more than that ass hole lars
lungs covered in tobacco scars
It's a battle though..
ever wonder how you'll go? Will it be all natural?
Will it be admirable? They gonna build a tall statue?
Name planets after you. Galaxy stew
This fantasy loop. This dream...
If you would have told me at sixteen....
in 10 years... would I have lived differently?
all this spent energy trying to forget memories
guess we're all sick, individually
lyrics that leave you Leaning
double drop, see through ceiling
I need cool healing
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Old 06-13-2015, 01:07 PM   #1584
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(alright)i'm gonna try n save face n keep it lowercase otherwise be(known as)a known disgrace
as a result,
of my poems of haste. when i write?
it's like a candy-shop. but i'm rapping
with a handicap
so i.b. come d fensive like'n alleycat.
,imagine that-
-this site. is Riddled. with legends.
I just post the silliest sessions&still i get better.
a lyrical master. still I perceive the mission as a
high degree of diffi culty ann i,
find the things i did b fore this en it,
isn't even closest- even though you can't read these freakin post-its.

Heh-heh,

if i was jussa-
little bit more me ticulous or
-my-
flow was a little more viscous. i'd
..i mean,
If I was just a little bit more meticulous or my flow was a little more viscous.I'd,
switch-it-up n pivot n give it to my critics. 'n
spit it so much sicker-
a free spirit.
i post 96 percent of my lyrics
on the innernet. so i give away my business-
-this is
analogous to christmas,
cuz i'm gifted

i even had a daydream fantasy about @Vulgar Posting my very own Picture
all Mine on the open mic but i'd probly ignore it and jus tell u what my Day was like..
..en i'm arriddy Backta Capitals it's whack&asinine.
still writing on this site. toodles
gotta go,but i might be back,after 9
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Old 06-14-2015, 02:44 AM   #1585
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I send souls their casket for acting backwards
get eaten for a mistake, appetizing 'fat' words
I make your skin sizzle because I'm so typical
add pain to the ridicule laugh at belittled you..
that's the fickle truth, 'disappear' like Wizards do
a fork tongue ready for whenever dinners through
Down the lane, dribble through & hit the 2
Pick a hoop, sit & screw over this vicious brew
Bring the halos the wings and the mission too
a side of salsa the mediocrity of ya fitness crew
getting you hyped & pumped..this isn't you
Just dropping in and staying original -_-
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Old 06-14-2015, 08:13 PM   #1586
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My basis on hatred is fueled by the idiocy creepin'
like 'face it' their mistaken by the limits we seein'
erasin' the changes & givin' their minutes a reason..
to fall back, call that secondary when the words hit
this is calmbat, all that relaxation suits me perfect
underneath the surface. you worthless as a person
the tearjerkin', the submergin' of your insides hurtin'
I love it & dub it while you mix the translation
got me feelin' Bill Murray in this recycled damnation
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Old 06-15-2015, 03:47 AM   #1587
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... i've learned the virtues of ambition. And Patience. can't be waitin' on your next pursuit. you have ta make it.
honey if there's somethin u wanna sayy
Than Say it. my mind. is no longer. a hundred miles an hour-I can Take it.
my emotions. no longer. strip me naked.
Oh-- this is stasis.
i'm gonna get through work tomorrow. i've covered all my bases.
hidden all my aces, stripped away my complacence- just a human Though- chasing elation. my next pursuit could be my,annihilation-- slipping backwards
sick with cancer. back in the dark. and pissed. that i snuffed out my lantern.
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Old 06-15-2015, 04:03 PM   #1588
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I'm a voice by choice a noise to avoid
tell your boys I'm void & worst annoyed
Conan Doyle your plots are foiled
skin will boil then get left to spoil..
I enjoyed the toys & the gift of gab
Well oiled mortal coil, mix & match
I'm kicking back feeling coy on roids
my strength immense but I choose to flex
come catch a glimpse of my head & wrist
I can already tell your feelin' this
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Sipping a coffee cup, word to dead man
Thinking my thoughts and stuff, word to dead man
Murder death camps are my raps to wack posers
It’s back to back homers, just action packed explosions
Imagine Pat Hogan brother tearing my shirt off
With manly ass lyrics while you carry your purse off
Aquarium verse: all the lyrics are pure water
Canadian style with American burst fire
You couldn’t get with any new fly shit unless you married the first pilot
And there was my first try at a punch line or something
Embarrass your verse, giant tough guy. you fronting..
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Let me bear my fangs, grab my fork, yo buddah
pass the pork, my terror reigns over HAM support
or whatever your radio jam records, New Era safe
Mad Hatter manners whore, basically 'switch position'
I kept the ticker kickin', handin' out Ether mixtures...
witness the barrage of God in the rocket launch
get my Kobe on whenever I decide to throw the pokeball
bangin' soccer mom's while their Mazda's rock..
your like 'homey nahhhh' it's mashed potato in her perogi y'all
salt & pepper, but I'm rolling naughty by nature
I make hobby's off anger, aim at your bucks, Milwaukee's endangered
I make rhymes off impulse imagine if time was a factor
cosigning disaster & raising the bunnies with a desire for laughter
fuzzy wuzzy does he judge me cuz he's ugly?
plus he's jumpy once he punches Pugsly over rugby
nonsense isn't progress in concepts but it's logic
martians in orbit with fresh breath that's the next topic
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I'm in the cockpit, the kamikazes nauseous..
In his subconscious I know he wants to vomit
Being ill is all he wanted while moving boxes
so obnoxious! FUCK YOU he told his bosses
never counting his losses or lack of responses
suck a sausage..you want a problem?
Suck a sausage..you talkin to prominence
dominant robotics translating the matrix to your monitors
monitoring the Apocalypse and watching roaches acknowledge dick
pondered it in a pond & shit, still waters that run deep
oceans sprung leaks as my tongue creeps where life is unleashed
you dumb freak. you want seeds or the front seat?
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and yeah. things happened i was high. whatever.
..whatever. it was balmy Weather.
and the speakers are in center. from the "bass,
queen in the mix".
baby Anne-
scratch upthe Disk-
radi-ant-
This what we-mean by crazy jams
outta this world like ali ens
sharpen,my mind,and all my crayons!
i kinsee the future- with all my plans
isn't it grand? jus gotta drummer4the Brand New Band
we come. from all. across. the land
ta rock. the fans.
yeah- in the stands.
yo. and i'm gonna hand.
the mic. to someone else in the band.
man.
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I was in the backroom playing Pac Man
enjoying the May weather like Pac Man
this the courtesy call, time to pack man!
damage done, another health pack, man..
I switched games for the topics sake
do the Fat Joe, lean back & rock away
you a thinker but just a THOT today
at the marketplace calling soccer plays
tryna trace my thoughts to game..
til' I switch the controller like Solid Snake
I move around like I got obnoxious weight
eat embryo's like I really want to flex
find yourself where flying saucers crept
til' you break the stratosphere with a loss of breath
this that douch material when you not so fresh
why waste lines? obviously I haven't lost it yet.
been bored since I found this wall of text
wait...what?
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You want to step in my arena I'll maim then clean ya
leaving you fucked over like its my aim to cheat ya
got a nice 12 gauge with stainless features
that will send you off quicker than aimless teachers
let me regain my ether put it in your face to eat ya
I'll be your ghost writer homey just say the word
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scenic routes. road soda. flashbulb memories.
drench the past in sad serenity, categorically
embatter common sense until the context left
kills our concept of what it meant to wax rhetorically.
let transcendtalism be your guide,
the ash upon your breath captured the autumn's sense,
the dysthymia you workshopped out of your prose,
before learned to bravado and glow
like the coughing vibrato of pollen in throat
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Yea but....where's that mag at @Dr Dog @Split @Split8
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to my credit rhyming's always been my method
...it's just2bad the process is a headache

is this my Outlet?
well if That's-the-case-i'm-really-glad-i-Found-it.
because insomnia-- which i have bouts of
and self-doubt-- which i have a lot of!,
look. i can't even finish this sentence- i'm not someone you can count on.

i think god is given me more than my Fair Share, of these allotments.
"oh pharaohs why don't youjuss stop it."

is@buddha done with the TOURNAMENT?\i haven't Heard From him.
just kidding. i know what's going on. I saved a verse fer him.
ya know usually I just "slap it" on the website. but i didn't wanna distract'im from'is text-writing.
..plus it was kinda ridiculous. the middle part hadsome creative rhymes,
but i ended up rambling about the shooter in south-carolina.

Listened to a young white boy rap today.
God. it was drivel
but i must admit?- he knew howta spit it..
i kinda wanna Ask him ta Teach-me-a-little.
i could teach him how to write,how to edit,n how to stump other people with the sleekest'v riddles.

well i suppose this is where i ask for opinions
and then ignore them.
when i was exposedta the witty repartee of jane eyre
i thought it was boring.
how am i supposedta win a poetry contest?-- when it's snowing,i jus' say "it's snowing".

in one of my older verses here it appears i had a flash-back from world war 1
although this statement is true, the main objective was to curl more tongues...
maybe i was on some walt whitman shit. that nigga could rap. talkin' bout hosin' guts outta cockpits. and All that crap.
anyway i Think that was him.

(@everyone)drink your god damn gin
you're no better than anyone.
in this Game there is no such thing as a win
just self-improvement. a social circle.
most mothers would call it an unhealthy "movement".

isn't it funny how i didn't rhyme that stanza properly?
i thought it was funny- because it the beginning- i said the opposite.

on this corny journey i'm Slowly Learning to use periods Properly..
'n dashes for That matter.
think it'll help me Rap better!

oh you think i've Emptied The Tank.huh?!
you have No Idea, Bruh.

okay "serious" fer a second:
i got a good idea
fer a momentous verse.
but as a pharaoh you know i'm cursed.
thinkin' of muddying-it-up&battling myself'till i've had Enough

"it's gonna be great man. it's gonna be great."
"no
it's gonna be Pain."

^that was me battling myself. as if- i had to explain.

well long story short i'll keep you posted on my process.
depending on which direction i Go it's like a function of time
and by That?,
i mean the progress.

i mean. it's like. if i "do me". it might be funny,but it might be sucky.
but if i do the Thing- like involving all the finishing Touches
i couldn't rush it.
and if i Did?
n it worked?- it Would be luckY.
...i guess what i'm saying is i need a rut-to-be stuck in.
because "real shit" gets hijacked
BY That i mean it's tantamount to my MIND-being-on-Crack.
.Fine.
i'm Leaving,but-i'll be Back.

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daddy was so frugal
he didn' wanna pay for mommy's funeral
let alone gimme some gas money ta drive2er tombstone

and after all my levity
you might think this was a joke
please think of this mistake when you remember me


my shrink couldn't quite relate
to blacking out on shrooms.
i told him "let's snort oxy, get no sleep, drink vitamin c, and then take some right here, in this very room.
shortly thereafter
hadta find another doctor
and had to do it,
fairly Soon. i been a Sucker this june.

you likely already know-i'm the shit. then why em i sitting Here-in-this-room?
i think i should quit.
i lied about self-doubt
it's just finding out what my self's about
and whether i care More-about-my-health?or more about my pot
...i am normal. am i not?

SURE people younger than me on facebook can understand satire.
oh wait. maybe not. maybe THAT^was satire.. &it backfired.

(well.)back to my metaphorical crack lighter.
my 18-month metamorphosis,hasn't exactly been inspiring.
'ts like "On&off","Turn&cough",and every once in a while,practice the rhyming-thing.
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last grad class final is Thursday so shortly thereafter

think it's gonna be bimonthly after this though, activity is still slow & I think it's just because of the summer
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Its not slow while I'm here. but it is as far as feedback
that's why I kind of quit giving it. better believe that.
Either way good luck on the Final @Dr Dog
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