09-18-2018, 12:14 AM | #1 |
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Round 2: 1. Jabari Black vs 9. Plot - JB WINS
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09-22-2018, 02:45 AM | #2 |
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09-22-2018, 06:47 AM | #3 |
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You’re out of extensions homie. I’ll grant you this one though since it’s me but get you bar on as soon as possible. @Plot
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09-22-2018, 02:35 PM | #4 |
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Gunbarz lol.
You aint got diss ability Jab, coz when I get retarded the steel becomes a disgrace A Stuttering problem? Nah, but this stupid bastard will just keep repeating in your face. Last edited by Plot; 09-22-2018 at 02:40 PM. |
09-22-2018, 07:26 PM | #5 |
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Catch him slipping at a red light! Soon as I creep up this wimp fucked/
Revolver lift up...you’ll see a barrel spinning in traffic like a cement truck/ |
09-23-2018, 06:07 AM | #6 |
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I got Jab here
liked Plot’s idea for real just happened to like Jabs that bit more conceptually and wording wise |
09-23-2018, 07:45 AM | #7 |
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Think they both put some good twists on gun bars here so that's cool wasn't a landslide skill wise but think JB got it here, better wording which allowed me to picture what he was saying better, so yeah got JB
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09-23-2018, 08:58 AM | #8 |
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I’m going plot because while I’ll take gun bars seriously, not ones involving a revolver in 2018
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09-23-2018, 09:16 AM | #9 |
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I like both
Since it’s only one bar I feel I gotta grade ten harsher And plot was vague He didn’t really set the bar up in the 2 lines He had to tell us it was a gun bar in the intro portion Jb was More concise V black
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09-24-2018, 09:43 AM | #10 |
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I thought this was close both being gun bar attack lines.
JB's was kind of a reach. The barrel doesn't spin on a revolver. The cylinder does. So wording right there kind of hurt the bar for me, all though many wouldn't know that and I knew what you where you were TRYING to go with this - I did enjoy the imagery your bar provided. Plot's setup had a lot going on, I think he could've cleaned that up a bit to help his concept have more of an impact. This is mad close but I think from a technical aspect and enjoyment factor Jab will get my vote here barely. v/Jabari Black |
09-24-2018, 10:15 AM | #11 |
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Dope read fellas, I got JB here with a hot gunbar. Plot was cool too, I honestly think you should've led with ur opener and finished different but either way good 1-2 fellas.
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09-24-2018, 10:23 AM | #12 |
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Digging Plot here more
Both were cool just thought Plot brought it more |
09-24-2018, 10:50 AM | #13 |
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09-24-2018, 11:41 AM | #14 |
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Dope on both ends...
I got JB here tho with the cement truck joint, creative! Plot shit was nice to as well, but overall I just think Jabari line hit a lil tougher. Good shit to both V-JB
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09-25-2018, 06:02 PM | #15 |
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JB wins 6-2
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