Maximus 2-0 vs Bust 2-1 - MAXIMUS WINS

[Hush]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Maximus @Bust

[Maximus]

10 dude

[Bust]

Cool

[Bust]

U whack n soft,my hits r heavy u ain't half as raw,
So any1 sayin maxilla, is about to witness me crack his jaw,
Gats could pop, but total disrespects how this shit'll see votes
Cos when it comes to humiliation, FUCK GUNZ! I'll pull out my Dick n pistol he soaked
Ur bitch said its sick bein broke, n she ain't raising kids with the lamest looser
So when u fuck her n don't pull out max, she will, aimed to shoot ya,
I haven't applied effort, uve wrote ur ass off n still whack as ever, brother
See idgaf if u could body art, my blade'll give u scars that tats'll never cover
I'll hit u wit plenty jabs, but swear to god I'll get ur gut wit one to make u vomit, fam
not only will that punch crush ur intestines, u can trust u'll see heaven.. That's a promise land
@Maximus

[Maximus]

My ninjas will maim and lacerate you, this noob aint a threat to me
Masked men will split Bust open with blades like surgeons doing mastectomy
I fucked a gorgeous female warden last night, the orgy was fun
I slept with that Garden Bed, you're a poor house-help watering one
You're getting buried, I'll fire shots and leave this kid's dome blown
You'll be dead son, so if we ever see Busta Live is at a Flip Mode show
You'll get disembowelled till ur gut spills, this rook will get smashed quick
I'm ripping out your Appendix & Spine like a torn book with no Backstrip
You're too wack to survive here, I'll make you go home in frustration
Cos as far as winning goes he never Stanza Chants like poem recitation

[iSpaz]

U whack n soft,my hits r heavy u ain't half as raw,
So any1 sayin maxilla, is about to witness me crack his jaw,
\\ ok
Gats could pop, but total disrespects how this shit'll see votes
Cos when it comes to humiliation, FUCK GUNZ! I'll pull out my Dick n pistol he soaked
// nah
Ur bitch said its sick bein broke, n she ain't raising kids with the lamest looser
So when u fuck her n don't pull out max, she will, aimed to shoot ya,
// i liked this
I haven't applied effort, uve wrote ur ass off n still whack as ever, brother
See idgaf if u could body art, my blade'll give u scars that tats'll never cover
// yooo
I'll hit u wit plenty jabs, but swear to god I'll get ur gut wit one to make u vomit, fam
not only will that punch crush ur intestines, u can trust u'll see heaven.. That's a promise land
// nah




My ninjas will maim and lacerate you, this noob aint a threat to me
Masked men will split Bust open with blades like surgeons doing mastectomy
\\ ok
I fucked a gorgeous female warden last night, the orgy was fun
I slept with that Garden Bed, you're a poor house-help watering one
\\ aight guard in
You're getting buried, I'll fire shots and leave this kid's dome blown
You'll be dead son, so if we ever see Busta Live is at a Flip Mode show
// this was cool
You'll get disembowelled till ur gut spills, this rook will get smashed quick
I'm ripping out your Appendix & Spine like a torn book with no Backstrip
// yo dope
You're too wack to survive here, I'll make you go home in frustration
Cos as far as winning goes he never Stanza Chants like poem recitation
// nukka you know this is played, esp comin from RB


aight both had one fire bar. and a couple ok ones. i could see this going either way tbh. i'll have to lean towards max. v/maximus

[Bash]

Maxilla, tats'll never cover

Vs

Back strip, flip mode show

V/Maximus. I have it even in quotes but Maximus' verse was better worded and his misses were much better. Ok read from both

[Amen.]

maxilla was cool
pistol/piss till was ok concept but wordy and mild execution
pull out max had potential - as is fell flat
body art was tough
promise land was wordy but had potential

vs

split bust open was tough
garden bed was off
busta was mild
appendix & spine was nice
stanza chants lol - I dropped pretty much same concept on RB last year and niggas said it was played. seen this concept dropped like 8 times since.

max got the edge tho.

[Junto]

U whack n soft,my hits r heavy u ain't half as raw,
So any1 sayin maxilla, is about to witness me crack his jaw,
one I'd only get in text... not bad though
Gats could pop, but total disrespects how this shit'll see votes
Cos when it comes to humiliation, FUCK GUNZ! I'll pull out my Dick n pistol he soaked
not feelin this at all
Ur bitch said its sick bein broke, n she ain't raising kids with the lamest looser
So when u fuck her n don't pull out max, she will, aimed to shoot ya,
haha solid
I haven't applied effort, uve wrote ur ass off n still whack as ever, brother
See idgaf if u could body art, my blade'll give u scars that tats'll never cover
nice
I'll hit u wit plenty jabs, but swear to god I'll get ur gut wit one to make u vomit, fam
not only will that punch crush ur intestines, u can trust u'll see heaven.. That's a promise land
creative but doesn't hit real hard

vs.

My ninjas will maim and lacerate you, this noob aint a threat to me
Masked men will split Bust open with blades like surgeons doing mastectomy
this is heat
I fucked a gorgeous female warden last night, the orgy was fun
I slept with that Garden Bed, you're a poor house-help watering one
haha I like that... old school feel
You're getting buried, I'll fire shots and leave this kid's dome blown
You'll be dead son, so if we ever see Busta Live is at a Flip Mode show
cool idea, coulda been executed better
You'll get disembowelled till ur gut spills, this rook will get smashed quick
I'm ripping out your Appendix & Spine like a torn book with no Backstrip
dope concept. backstrip threw it off a little for me but still good
You're too wack to survive here, I'll make you go home in frustration
Cos as far as winning goes he never Stanza Chants like poem recitation
mmm... seen stanza a lot but this version was one of the best I seen to be real

Good battle... Pull out max & body art from Bust were good. A cpl cool bars too, one whiff.
Split bust open & garden bed were fire to me. Stanza played & some wording that coulda been better...
but this was a tough verse from Maximus, props. I got him winning comfortably.

V/ Maximus

[ribbit]

Vote/maximus

Doper lines harder punches..I thot bust needed to work on wording and his verse could have used some editing..lines just didn't have the best concepts keep writing my dude

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Bust

U whack n soft,my hits r heavy u ain't half as raw,
So any1 sayin maxilla, is about to witness me crack his jaw,
nah
Gats could pop, but total disrespects how this shit'll see votes
Cos when it comes to humiliation, FUCK GUNZ! I'll pull out my Dick n pistol he soaked
no
Ur bitch said its sick bein broke, n she ain't raising kids with the lamest looser
So when u fuck her n don't pull out max, she will, aimed to shoot ya,
nice
I haven't applied effort, uve wrote ur ass off n still whack as ever, brother
See idgaf if u could body art, my blade'll give u scars that tats'll never cover
actually dope
I'll hit u wit plenty jabs, but swear to god I'll get ur gut wit one to make u vomit, fam
not only will that punch crush ur intestines, u can trust u'll see heaven.. That's a promise land
meh
@Maximus

Vs

Originally Posted by Maximus

My ninjas will maim and lacerate you, this noob aint a threat to me
Masked men will split Bust open with blades like surgeons doing mastectomy
nah
I fucked a gorgeous female warden last night, the orgy was fun
I slept with that Garden Bed, you're a poor house-help watering one
not feeling
You're getting buried, I'll fire shots and leave this kid's dome blown
You'll be dead son, so if we ever see Busta Live is at a Flip Mode show
don't know what flip mode shows are
You'll get disembowelled till ur gut spills, this rook will get smashed quick
I'm ripping out your Appendix & Spine like a torn book with no Backstrip
I guess
You're too wack to survive here, I'll make you go home in frustration
Cos as far as winning goes he never Stanza Chants like poem recitation
dug this actually

V/ Bust - generally a better read, a few harder hitters. Pistol was a massive miss but still did enough, especially with those name plays to win it.

[Ace]

maxilla and land lines were the best of the battle, bust seemed more polished with better wording.. some of max's lines threw me off like the garden line, slept with a female warden? lol it's reachin bro, u dont say shit like that in a live battle.. gl fellas