Boss Linguist

[CopyPat]

Sink in my cot, pajamas, drinking an Arnold Palmer. Thinkin about ya momma and my dink is Barack Obama. (all Schicked there’s not a..visible hair on it). I’m a tall drink of water, you a single drop aquatic. I’m all things Nevada, spittin all exotic. The All England. Proper-Form English talker. Boss linguist, often bored with you yawners. I’m autistic, off the board as an author. It’s called sickness, call support from the doctor. Ya’ll bitches just politicians in office, it’s all business, always sit on my caucus. Copy brimming with confidence cause I’m bringin the hottest shit. The single most competent constantly killing these consonants. Positively nukin ya neurons. Vomiting, I’m pukin out neutrons. All mc’s minute when they do songs. Ecology: I’m huger than Groupon. My quality through the roof and I’m too gone, like astrology when I shoot for a new star. I’m hardly what you usually view dog, commodity, my product is juice raw. Stronger than the shot of a foosball professional when I’m all up in ya follicles, goofball.. I’m stressin you. Hair fallin out on some old grey persistence. Dare call me out, get ya Rogaine subscription. My whole brain is sickness, ya whole face is missin(shout to wise ways, I’m bout to rhyme strange) when I flow straight emissions, like propane conditions. The O.J. of Simpsons, when I penetrate a squirter; I don’t pay attention and just get away with murder. I elevated further than the state of Colorado, the renegade with verses: I just make it hard to follow.

[breathless]

Damn man... Old grey persistence/Rogaine prescriptions... Ridiculous!
The single most competent constantly killing these consonants.
Positively nukin ya neurons. Vomiting, I’m pukin out neutrons

Diggin the alliterations, a lot of times it sounds corny but you pulled it off flawless
I'm not much for the freeverse style, but this was so packed with rhyme that still had a readable stop and go flow that it worked... Very impressive dude

[Objective]

Ye, I kinda agree with Breathless. Thought it was cool and had interesting rhymeschemes going. I'm not a fan of the paragraph-style tho', but that doesn't really matter when it comes down to it.

It's a swag n flow verse, you say a lot without really saying anything, yet you prove you know your shit so you accomplished what you came here to do. That's the beauty with pieces like this, but personally I prefer a concept of some sort. Every now and then I think it's cool to read stuff like this and I got to hand it to you; shit's very thorough and I enjoyed the read from start to finnish and that's something I respect. Think this shit would sound mad wicked on track tho'.

Boss linguist, often bored with you yawners.
I’m autistic, off the board as an author.
It’s called sickness, call support from the doctor.
Ya’ll bitches just politicians in office,
it’s all business, always sit on my caucus.
^ Dopeness, same thing goes for the grey presistence/rogaine emisions, straight emissions/propane conditions/OJ of Simpsons etc.

After reading this and thinking about my own shit I think you and me are at the exact opposite spectrum of writtens. I focus a lot more on content and the concept of the piece as a whole rather than syllables and multis etc., whereas you focus more on rhymeschemes and getting a clear message across while proving your ground, basicly the technical aspects of writing. We approach stuff differently and honestly; I think we got something to learn from eachother if we want to add more to our bag of tricks. Going to read more of your shit later on. Keep it up!

[Dove Dozer]

Dope verse pat

[dead man]

The single most competent constantly killing these consonants. Positively nukin ya neurons. Vomiting, I’m pukin out neutrons. All mc’s minute when they do songs. Ecology: I’m huger than Groupon

this was my personal favorite section. this was moreso along the lines of your comfort zone but you always bring that effortless type of energy to it. like you think in rhyme and this is simply you speaking. you don't post much at all outside of OM so that even further reinforces that sort of dynamic..

i think you could balance this with a mix of introspection and have something not only dope rhyme and rhythm-wise but also something more emotive. something with potency and lasting effect. but thats just a thought.

be easy man, thanks



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[BWHAHA]

@PancakeBrah he uses the ":" well here, not only black can do it.

black even quoted it. lolololol.

dis was really cool. I've been watching you and darth hit it out, keep it up, he's very competent.

[BWHAHA]

This is also like an italian-afficionado cigar Pauly D stick your head out, backwards, with a baseball bat tucked between your Hanes Boxers type.

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by BWHAHA

@PancakeBrah he uses the ":" well here, not only black can do it.

black even quoted it. lolololol.

dis was really cool. I've been watching you and darth hit it out, keep it up, he's very competent.

When did I say only black can do it well? I'm confused.

[BWHAHA]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

When did I say only black can do it well? I'm confused.

you didn't.

[PancakeBrah]

Ok. Glad that's cleared up.

[Vulgar]

The O.J. of Simpsons, when I penetrate a squirter; I don’t pay attention and just get away with murder.
^Cool!