(1)Bags vs (16)Jilti - BAGS WINS

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NBL Season 9 Playoffs


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[veritas]

Mvgt2 jilti

[jilti]

1-0 jilti

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Ext if ur gonna show. I got like 6.

[jilti]

Penis extender

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by jilti

consecutive claps. gun powder in the air when pistols blast
2 ratchets smoking on the side of School like they were ditching class

U a weirdo. In school they called em lame yo...but if u act hard an go insane bro?
My Larkin let the flame go & leave this BITCH trenchcoat redder than carmen sandiego
Them bars he write all was wack as shit. this a whitewash on that drastic tip.
if he had any idea how fucked he is hed grab the lightbulb & smoke crack w it
An the roast that happened in discussion? Sad to see. Ya grill saggy an disgustin.
Id let the matics get ta dumpin & put the uz to ya FACE ...but that'd be redundant
That mug got me feelin seasick I mean yo...talk about hip hop features on the low
Ya face a blendz tape an imma have Arms spinnin rounds at u till they cut a remix in ya dome
If its beef i keep a loaded pound & I don't gotta speak if I squeeze then it's goin down
I'll have the barrel kickin for a minute straight without the street fighter bonus round



10 @jilti

[jilti]

this snob thinks he too good for us with a deformed ass face
always got his Nose pointed down at us, but he was just born that way
goes without saying ur an old deadbeat, worthless in fact
Father Time caught up to u, while ur daughter still searching for that
herpes & crabs is whats on this niggas xtra-small dick
but when his Stubborns, he still refuse treatment since that mexico trip
can arrange to have niggas change ur lame attitude quick
pull a couple of strings and watch the bitch come out of Bags like a magic trick
automatic leak brains from all sides when i shoot the heat
gonna see clear plasma from every angle like ill-nika's new t.v.

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Bags

Lightbub, redundant & closer.

Pretty good verse, the only real miss was 'remix', which I just wasn't feeling. I would've quoted your opener, but it didn't hit imo, that concept was dope tho.

versus

Originally Posted by jilti

Father time, magic trick & closer.

Cool verse, had two heaters I liked & a decent jab w/ your closer. Your two misses weren't terrible either, but nose concepts are old asf & stub burn/stubborn was forced imo.

Overall I was really entertained by this battle, especially since it was so short, but I have to decide a winner & I'm edging it ever so slightly to BAGS. Jilt's punches landed heavy, but Idk his concepts just seem too familiar, whereas the creativity of Bags concepts are what made his verse good. Maybe I'm wrong, because this joint could legit go either way. That's how I see it tho, but much propers to both.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by Bags

U a weirdo. In school they called em lame yo...but if u act hard an go insane bro?
My Larkin let the flame go & leave this BITCH trenchcoat redder than carmen sandiego

Wow the boy dead already

Them bars he write all was wack as shit. this a whitewash on that drastic tip.
if he had any idea how fucked he is hed grab the lightbulb & smoke crack w it

Yo that's clever as fuck

An the roast that happened in discussion? Sad to see. Ya grill saggy an disgustin.
Id let the matics get ta dumpin & put the uz to ya FACE ...but that'd be redundant

Lmaoo

That mug got me feelin seasick I mean yo...talk about hip hop features on the low
Ya face a blendz tape an imma have Arms spinnin rounds at u till they cut a remix in ya dome

Eh

If its beef i keep a loaded pound & I don't gotta speak if I squeeze then it's goin down
I'll have the barrel kickin for a minute straight without the street fighter bonus round

:O

10 @jilti

Absolute fire. Wording perfect as it gets.

Originally Posted by jilti

this snob thinks he too good for us with a deformed ass face
always got his Nose pointed down at us, but he was just born that way

Lol ok

goes without saying ur an old deadbeat, worthless in fact
Father Time caught up to u, while ur daughter still searching for that

Yikes that's what's up

herpes & crabs is whats on this niggas xtra-small dick
but when his Stubborns, he still refuse treatment since that mexico trip

Okay

can arrange to have niggas change ur lame attitude quick
pull a couple of strings and watch the bitch come out of Bags like a magic trick

I don't think they use a woman in any tricks with a bag? They pull rabbits out of hats tho but he's not a rabbit

automatic leak brains from all sides when i shoot the heat
gonna see clear plasma from every angle like ill-nika's new t.v.

Cool

Cool verse. Some misses. Nothing too heavy other than that father time line which was ether

Bags got it

[Saint]

I have bags here, more consistent. I liked the light bulb and closer, opener and uz was cool, imo. only 1 meh w/ that remix line. good verse.

Jilti's father time was lotb, magic almost worked and closer was ok. didnt care for stubborns, opener I seen variations of over years. Overall, not your strongest I've seen, wording wasnt as polished as normal, but still decent verse. Father time was dope.

vote bags

[Toil]

Bags: light bulb, spinning rounds, closer
Jil: Father Time, magic trick

Decent battle but I got bags progressing

[Aero]

Bags - Uzwas cool. Barrel kicking could've been dope but seemed vague.. The rest didn't really hit for me.

Jilti - Father Time was lulz, stubborn a bit forced but aiiight, closer was nice


Vote - Jilti.

[NYCSPITZ]

U a weirdo. In school they called em lame yo...but if u act hard an go insane bro?
My Larkin let the flame go & leave this BITCH trenchcoat redder than carmen sandiego
ok delivery, meh WP
Them bars he write all was wack as shit. this a whitewash on that drastic tip.
if he had any idea how fucked he is hed grab the lightbulb & smoke crack w it
nice bar
An the roast that happened in discussion? Sad to see. Ya grill saggy an disgustin.
Id let the matics get ta dumpin & put the uz to ya FACE ...but that'd be redundant
nice ooze wp but gunplay setups in bars 1+3 lack of imagination
That mug got me feelin seasick I mean yo...talk about hip hop features on the low
Ya face a blendz tape an imma have Arms spinnin rounds at u till they cut a remix in ya dome
another face diss, it's gay and the wp sounds cheesy this time
If its beef i keep a loaded pound & I don't gotta speak if I squeeze then it's goin down
I'll have the barrel kickin for a minute straight without the street fighter bonus round
I get it but it's the 4th bar including guns in a 5 bar battle. Very played esp from somebody as soft as bags irl who prob never shot a gun


this snob thinks he too good for us with a deformed ass face
always got his Nose pointed down at us, but he was just born that way
lmao nice
goes without saying ur an old deadbeat, worthless in fact
Father Time caught up to u, while ur daughter still searching for that
LOL
herpes & crabs is whats on this niggas xtra-small dick
but when his Stubborns, he still refuse treatment since that mexico trip
not feeling, prob correct about extra small dick tho
can arrange to have niggas change ur lame attitude quick
pull a couple of strings and watch the bitch come out of Bags like a magic trick
cool delivery, nice wp
automatic leak brains from all sides when i shoot the heat
gonna see clear plasma from every angle like ill-nika's new t.v.
Nope

This was close but it was a mediocre battle. Remind me to google search why all this bravado and insecure ego surrounds such glib and played out wit? I got v/ jiliti

[Orc]

Originally Posted by Bags

U a weirdo. In school they called em lame yo...but if u act hard an go insane bro?
My Larkin let the flame go & leave this BITCH trenchcoat redder than carmen sandiego
Ok but connection a bit loose could have tied it in more man
Them bars he write all was wack as shit. this a whitewash on that drastic tip.
if he had any idea how fucked he is hed grab the lightbulb & smoke crack w it
Funny but light
An the roast that happened in discussion? Sad to see. Ya grill saggy an disgustin.
Id let the matics get ta dumpin & put the uz to ya FACE ...but that'd be redundant
Mann this is a light verse for.u
That mug got me feelin seasick I mean yo...talk about hip hop features on the low
Ya face a blendz tape an imma have Arms spinnin rounds at u till they cut a remix in ya dome
Okay here. Better
If its beef i keep a loaded pound & I don't gotta speak if I squeeze then it's goin down
I'll have the barrel kickin for a minute straight without the street fighter bonus round
Yesssss hadoukeenennnennnnnn



10 @jilti

Originally Posted by jilti

this snob thinks he too good for us with a deformed ass face
always got his Nose pointed down at us, but he was just born that way
Connection is too straightforward man
goes without saying ur an old deadbeat, worthless in fact
Father Time caught up to u, while ur daughter still searching for that
Damn that's nice
herpes & crabs is whats on this niggas xtra-small dick
but when his Stubborns, he still refuse treatment since that mexico trip
Bittt of a stretch to me
can arrange to have niggas change ur lame attitude quick
pull a couple of strings and watch the bitch come out of Bags like a magic trick
Can't fuck w a bags np
automatic leak brains from all sides when i shoot the heat
gonna see clear plasma from every angle like ill-nika's new t.v.
Ok l8ght

Man this was a light battle from both . Uninspired. I knw the feel8ng

Bags had the last two butonly the closer was hot and jilti just had the father time line

Bags quote was better

V bags

[MFtastick]

Bags on consistency. Jilti brought the flame to bags but I think bags just edged it. Lightbulb and Father Time shit. Bonkers

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Bags

U a weirdo. In school they called em lame yo...but if u act hard an go insane bro?
My Larkin let the flame go & leave this BITCH trenchcoat redder than carmen sandiego

☆☆☆☆☆

Them bars he write all was wack as shit. this a whitewash on that drastic tip.
if he had any idea how fucked he is hed grab the lightbulb & smoke crack w it

☆☆☆☆☆

An the roast that happened in discussion? Sad to see. Ya grill saggy an disgustin.
Id let the matics get ta dumpin & put the uz to ya FACE ...but that'd be redundant

☆☆☆☆☆

That mug got me feelin seasick I mean yo...talk about hip hop features on the low
Ya face a blendz tape an imma have Arms spinnin rounds at u till they cut a remix in ya dome

☆

If its beef i keep a loaded pound & I don't gotta speak if I squeeze then it's goin down
I'll have the barrel kickin for a minute straight without the street fighter bonus round

☆☆☆☆☆

Originally Posted by jilti

this snob thinks he too good for us with a deformed ass face
always got his Nose pointed down at us, but he was just born that way

☆

goes without saying ur an old deadbeat, worthless in fact
Father Time caught up to u, while ur daughter still searching for that

☆

herpes & crabs is whats on this niggas xtra-small dick
but when his Stubborns, he still refuse treatment since that mexico trip

☆☆

can arrange to have niggas change ur lame attitude quick
pull a couple of strings and watch the bitch come out of Bags like a magic trick

☆

automatic leak brains from all sides when i shoot the heat
gonna see clear plasma from every angle like ill-nika's new t.v.

☆☆☆☆☆

This was a clear mismatch. I haven't voted for Bags in a long time and was looking forward to manipulating my vote to go in his favor regardless of the quality of his verse. But after reading the battle in its entirety I have to say that Jilti just wasn't as fundamentally sound as I remembered him being capable of. His verse felt really lackluster and didn't appeal to me. Bags verse was ridiculously nice. I'd stick my dick in it.

v-Bags