ELITE 8: Killing Spree vs Jabari Black JB WINS

[bleak]

Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due FRIDAY August 3rd! and will be open until Sunday.
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Extensions are 24 hours


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Minimum of 8, maximum of 20
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:
1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

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@Killing Spree @Jabari Black

[Kill Spree]

Here... 10-12?

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

Here... 10-12?

Check. Let’s do 12.

[Kill Spree]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Check. Let’s do 12.

Yup

[Jabari Black]

12 ready to go @Killing Spree

[Jabari Black]

Don’t even bother showing my nigga....

The 9 tucked! You’ll catch a shell when I’m blammin mine/
If I ride up...I’ll put KS on the pole like a Welcome to Kansas sign/
Think sleep paralysis! I’ll let something sit on ya chest once the arm drawn/
I creep n matics lift. A chest shot put his heart on his shirt like Comme des Garçon/
No lick of talent, but you calling out Bleak...damn near bitchin bout it/
Fuck a battle...yall fatasses need to spotlight a fitness challenge/
What you gone do, bitch? Stick to this fruit on some fondu shit/
Or the can on top ya head....then it kick off the ya dome like a King Fu trick/
Scope wit a long zoom. Even from distance I can harm you/
Fuck Josh Allen....you can catch one 90 yards away from this arm too/
Peep my violent streak. I’ll let matics fly til this bastard die/
It’s Greek mythology....Styx’ll send you to the afterlife/

[Kill Spree]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Y’all got me....this I Nick’s gun bar account

Lets marinate this quick..... http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ght=nick+James





Bruh....
Gang pull up cos I put cash on a body..Then Gatlins smokin
Bullet Holes all through Money shirt..All they did was Blast the Broke kid
FGT! Knuck enlightened us how ur lifes shallow
'Shien' literally pushed U off the deep end right into this sites Shadow
FGT! No 'Antidote' can save U! DUde is dull
Body chopped up wen I go 'Sicko Mode'..Travis scott could sing @ ur funeral
FGT! U champin is blowin smoke, 1 swing & the wack is done
Fake gun bars from Black & Mild hits..Its nothin to punch ur chest till lungs collapse
FGT!... U look up to me! I'll squash this guy for once
theres no Impact from Jabbar's once hes out cold from one Giant punch
U'll be remembered for nuthin but a sloppy fake
Nxt time ur mentioned W/Sticks on ur head piece? it'll be cos we forgot ur grave

@bleak I'll vote tomorrow

[Twodrop]

The 9 tucked! You’ll catch a shell when I’m blammin mine/
If I ride up...I’ll put KS on the pole like a Welcome to Kansas sign/
cool opener
Think sleep paralysis! I’ll let something sit on ya chest once the arm drawn/
I creep n matics lift. A chest shot put his heart on his shirt like Comme des Garçon/
wasn't familar w/ the ref, this is nice tho
No lick of talent, but you calling out Bleak...damn near bitchin bout it/
Fuck a battle...yall fatasses need to spotlight a fitness challenge/
light
What you gone do, bitch? Stick to this fruit on some fondu shit/
Or the can on top ya head....then it kick off the ya dome like a King Fu trick/
lol dope
Scope wit a long zoom. Even from distance I can harm you/
Fuck Josh Allen....you can catch one 90 yards away from this arm too/
niice
Peep my violent streak. I’ll let matics fly til this bastard die/
It’s Greek mythology....Styx’ll send you to the afterlife/
pretty cool stick flip, good closer

Gang pull up cos I put cash on a body..Then Gatlins smokin
Bullet Holes all through Money shirt..All they did was Blast the Broke kid
ok
FGT! Knuck enlightened us how ur lifes shallow
'Shien' literally pushed U off the deep end right into this sites Shadow
didn't get this one, is Shien supposed to be Shein? A jewish thing? I think I'm missing something
FGT! No 'Antidote' can save U! DUde is dull
Body chopped up wen I go 'Sicko Mode'..Travis scott could sing @ ur funeral
coo
FGT! U champin is blowin smoke, 1 swing & the wack is done
Fake gun bars from Black & Mild hits..Its nothin to punch ur chest till lungs collapse
did this rhyme? thought it had potential, but then...
FGT!... U look up to me! I'll squash this guy for once
theres no Impact from Jabbar's once hes out cold from one Giant punch
fk w/ it
U'll be remembered for nuthin but a sloppy fake
Nxt time ur mentioned W/Sticks on ur head piece? it'll be cos we forgot ur grave
cool closer

Cool battle. KS had a couple misses, JB was overall more consistent, clever and his punches just stung a bit harder. Props to both for showing, GL going forward.

v/ JB

[Kill Spree]

@bleak it’s suppose to say collapse a lung if you can edit it. If not no worries

[For Battling]

The 9 tucked! You’ll catch a shell when I’m blammin mine/
If I ride up...I’ll put KS on the pole like a Welcome to Kansas sign/
alright this is creative but not too hard hitting
Think sleep paralysis! I’ll let something sit on ya chest once the arm drawn/
I creep n matics lift. A chest shot put his heart on his shirt like Comme des Garçon/
loved the first line, solid finish on the second one. Overall pretty good line
No lick of talent, but you calling out Bleak...damn near bitchin bout it/
Fuck a battle...yall fatasses need to spotlight a fitness challenge/
nah not feelin this, Spree isn’t really far from what I remember
What you gone do, bitch? Stick to this fruit on some fondu shit/
Or the can on top ya head....then it kick off the ya dome like a King Fu trick/
Nice
Scope wit a long zoom. Even from distance I can harm you/
Fuck Josh Allen....you can catch one 90 yards away from this arm too/
shitttt this is fire
Peep my violent streak. I’ll let matics fly til this bastard die/
It’s Greek mythology....Styx’ll send you to the afterlife/
ok here, creative concept but not too harsh


Vs


Bruh....
Gang pull up cos I put cash on a body..Then Gatlins smokin
Bullet Holes all through Money shirt..All they did was Blast the Broke kid
ha this is cool
FGT! Knuck enlightened us how ur lifes shallow
'Shien' literally pushed U off the deep end right into this sites Shadow
i don’t get this at all tbh man
FGT! No 'Antidote' can save U! DUde is dull
Body chopped up wen I go 'Sicko Mode'..Travis scott could sing @ ur funeral
alright not bad, you’re lucky I listened to this album already or else I’d have no idea what you meant. The bar was pretty cool but the album was pants
FGT! U champin is blowin smoke, 1 swing & the wack is done
Fake gun bars from Black & Mild hits..Its nothin to punch ur chest collapse a lung
i dig this, good concept and it was done good too, don’t worry I edited the ending for you out of love
FGT!... U look up to me! I'll squash this guy for once
theres no Impact from Jabbar's once hes out cold from one Giant punch
ehhh decent at best
U'll be remembered for nuthin but a sloppy fake
Nxt time ur mentioned W/Sticks on ur head piece? it'll be cos we forgot ur grave
decent again here


Good battle here. Both had some good shit and both had only 1 clear miss imo. Jabari had the nicer hits whereas spree had a few decent ones compared to Jabari’s goods. Close battle can go either way but I have JB with the stronger hits.


Vote Jabari Black

[Blue Bayou]

The 9 tucked! You’ll catch a shell when I’m blammin mine/
If I ride up...I’ll put KS on the pole like a Welcome to Kansas sign/
okay, pretty solid nameplay open
Think sleep paralysis! I’ll let something sit on ya chest once the arm drawn/
I creep n matics lift. A chest shot put his heart on his shirt like Comme des Garçon/
looked it up... pretty cool, set-up was niice
No lick of talent, but you calling out Bleak...damn near bitchin bout it/
Fuck a battle...yall fatasses need to spotlight a fitness challenge/
lol, chuckle worthy.. this was ight
What you gone do, bitch? Stick to this fruit on some fondu shit/
Or the can on top ya head....then it kick off the ya dome like a King Fu trick/
niiiice, dope concept
Scope wit a long zoom. Even from distance I can harm you/
Fuck Josh Allen....you can catch one 90 yards away from this arm too/
haha, dig it
Peep my violent streak. I’ll let matics fly til this bastard die/
It’s Greek mythology....Styx’ll send you to the afterlife/
cool flip here, bit redundant at this point tho with another stick bar

Vs


Bruh....
Gang pull up cos I put cash on a body..Then Gatlins smokin
Bullet Holes all through Money shirt..All they did was Blast the Broke kid
cool, good open
FGT! Knuck enlightened us how ur lifes shallow
'Shien' literally pushed U off the deep end right into this sites Shadow
hmmm, even after looking this up I'm missing the concept here
FGT! No 'Antidote' can save U! DUde is dull
Body chopped up wen I go 'Sicko Mode'..Travis scott could sing @ ur funeral
pretty coo
FGT! U champin is blowin smoke, 1 swing & the wack is done
Fake gun bars from Black & Mild hits..Its nothin to punch ur chest collapse a lung
awesome concept, tie in in the setup was cool but I think the final punch needed better wording .. still, dope idea
FGT!... U look up to me! I'll squash this guy for once
theres no Impact from Jabbar's once hes out cold from one Giant punch
hmm, okayish nameplay..
U'll be remembered for nuthin but a sloppy fake
Nxt time ur mentioned W/Sticks on ur head piece? it'll be cos we forgot ur grave
cool closer and concept


Pretty dope battle guys.... KS one of the better & most consistent drops ive seen from you, loved the Black & Mild concept but I think Jabari's standouts were stronger and he was more consistent with a few less okayish bars... Kung Fu trick was niiiiice, props to both

Vote - JB

[BodySnatcher]

The 9 tucked! You’ll catch a shell when I’m blammin mine/
If I ride up...I’ll put KS on the pole like a Welcome to Kansas sign/
fresh concept
Think sleep paralysis! I’ll let something sit on ya chest once the arm drawn/
I creep n matics lift. A chest shot put his heart on his shirt like Comme des Garçon/
cool line, googled
No lick of talent, but you calling out Bleak...damn near bitchin bout it/
Fuck a battle...yall fatasses need to spotlight a fitness challenge/
lolol
What you gone do, bitch? Stick to this fruit on some fondu shit/
Or the can on top ya head....then it kick off the ya dome like a King Fu trick/
good imagery
Scope wit a long zoom. Even from distance I can harm you/
Fuck Josh Allen....you can catch one 90 yards away from this arm too/
word
Peep my violent streak. I’ll let matics fly til this bastard die/
It’s Greek mythology....Styx’ll send you to the afterlife/
nice




Bruh....
Gang pull up cos I put cash on a body..Then Gatlins smokin
Bullet Holes all through Money shirt..All they did was Blast the Broke kid
lol
FGT! Knuck enlightened us how ur lifes shallow
'Shien' literally pushed U off the deep end right into this sites Shadow
nah
FGT! No 'Antidote' can save U! DUde is dull
Body chopped up wen I go 'Sicko Mode'..Travis scott could sing @ ur funeral
ehhhh not bad, like current event angle
FGT! U champin is blowin smoke, 1 swing & the wack is done
Fake gun bars from Black & Mild hits..Its nothin to punch ur chest till lungs collapse
this cool right here
FGT!... U look up to me! I'll squash this guy for once
theres no Impact from Jabbar's once hes out cold from one Giant punch
ehhh
U'll be remembered for nuthin but a sloppy fake
Nxt time ur mentioned W/Sticks on ur head piece? it'll be cos we forgot ur grave
i like this



damn baby shit soft tagger was right again. v. JB