WK 1: brokenhal0 vs. Exis - EXIS WINS!!

Incredible · 05-07-2018, 02:43 PM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 11th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@brokenhal0 @Exis

Exis · 05-11-2018, 07:34 AM

Check, wait...what? What is it we rhymin' with?...a pic, topic..?

Incredible · 05-11-2018, 10:21 AM

@Exis this is just a straight up diss battle. Doesn't appear that @brokenhal0 is going to show but yeah.

***Also please do not post in other battles unless it is to vote, thanks.

brokenhal0 · 05-11-2018, 09:04 PM

gimme a few i already wrote it

Exis · 05-12-2018, 12:35 AM

Ayo,

brokenhalO...
Pfft this bloke is anal
If your bloody dope I'm Adolf
I'm so no homo
but watch me fuckin' smoke this a hole,
The only nigga that really likes your shit
is Wise Ways so I'd say
go & ride his dick
You ain't kind of sick, not even slightly faggot
Your just a spineless maggot that really tries to spit
sumthin' fiery bitch
doin' minor damage
What you fuckin' type is average
Your style don't do shit
except give me,
well Netcees
a major fuckin' slight advantage
Throw in the towel nigga,
Deepthroat 'til your mouth be all
saliva vanished.

Exis · 05-12-2018, 02:12 AM

If Twodrop or 2tripple vote on this the shit don't count...

brokenhal0 · 05-12-2018, 02:40 AM

if brokenhal0s couldnt exis....this would not be earth
existential words you spending all your bread on the birds
sentenced to dirt exis ill hit your girl up on the chirp
eat some cheese doodles then stick my fingers up in her skirt
i dont give a fuck if she squirts
my style rough i dont give a fuck if she squirms
never use a rubber it burns as the world turns
you cease to exis your like princess diana
a dead man in a dress

Geno · 05-12-2018, 11:48 AM

Broken halo had the bread bar. Which i thought was dope tbh. The rest seemed misguided with no direction and disnt land

Exis shit wasnt a whole lot better but his shit seemed more direct. I got exis edging this week slightly with a bit more consistency as far as lands goes.

V/exis

Twodrop · 05-12-2018, 01:35 PM

I have Exis taking this one by more effectively attacking his opponent.

I liked when Exis said 'He's so no homo, but watch him smoke some A hole'

& when br0ken said that thing about fingering a girl w/ cheetoh fingers, raw.

v/ Exis with the edge.

El Muffin · 05-13-2018, 01:13 AM

v/exis

for i guess attempting to continually diss his opponent

broken's read weird...he talked about fucking chicks with the dirty dick n it burned while the world turned im like yikes man that sounds terrible..then i forget n im like wait why are saying u have a std in the middle of a battle. then something about princess diana..

yeah vote exis for a more direct approach

v.exis

DynamiCz · 05-13-2018, 05:57 PM

V- Goes to Exis

More direct here and more consistant in his verse. Broken verse wasnt the worse, but it wasnt as direct as Exis verse was. I got Exis on this one tho, props to both

Blue Bayou · 05-13-2018, 06:19 PM

Interesting battle here

both stylistically very far from the norm, I dunno I wouldn't say there were any "quotables here" so Exis gets my vote for having harsher angles and a slightly more enjoyable verse

Vote - Exis

Jabari Black · 05-13-2018, 08:47 PM

So both these niggas can rap, it just y’all gotta adapt to the battle style. Lyrically the verses sound good but they sound like an open mic verse more than a battle verse.

Out of the two verses I thought exis had the better flow. Also you had a lot of jabs mixed in so it felt more direct. Broken had the standout line imo - the finger her with cheese doodles was funny to me. Unfortunately, he rest of the verse veered off track and felt more like a stream of consciousness (once again would be fine for open mic) than an attack on an opponent. Overall I think Exis took this.

Mvgt Exis

05-07-2018, 02:43 PM	#1
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	WK 1: brokenhal0 vs. Exis - EXIS WINS!! Rules Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 11th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE @brokenhal0 @Exis

05-12-2018, 11:48 AM	#8
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Broken halo had the bread bar. Which i thought was dope tbh. The rest seemed misguided with no direction and disnt land Exis shit wasnt a whole lot better but his shit seemed more direct. I got exis edging this week slightly with a bit more consistency as far as lands goes. V/exis __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-13-2018, 01:13 AM	#10
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	v/exis for i guess attempting to continually diss his opponent broken's read weird...he talked about fucking chicks with the dirty dick n it burned while the world turned im like yikes man that sounds terrible..then i forget n im like wait why are saying u have a std in the middle of a battle. then something about princess diana.. yeah vote exis for a more direct approach v.exis __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

05-13-2018, 05:57 PM	#11
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	V- Goes to Exis More direct here and more consistant in his verse. Broken verse wasnt the worse, but it wasnt as direct as Exis verse was. I got Exis on this one tho, props to both __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

05-11-2018, 07:34 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Check, wait...what? What is it we rhymin' with?...a pic, topic..?

05-11-2018, 10:21 AM	#3
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,482 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972892	@Exis this is just a straight up diss battle. Doesn't appear that @brokenhal0 is going to show but yeah. ***Also please do not post in other battles unless it is to vote, thanks.

05-11-2018, 09:04 PM	#4
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 492 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	gimme a few i already wrote it

05-12-2018, 12:35 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Ayo, brokenhalO... Pfft this bloke is anal If your bloody dope I'm Adolf I'm so no homo but watch me fuckin' smoke this a hole, The only nigga that really likes your shit is Wise Ways so I'd say go & ride his dick You ain't kind of sick, not even slightly faggot Your just a spineless maggot that really tries to spit sumthin' fiery bitch doin' minor damage What you fuckin' type is average Your style don't do shit except give me, well Netcees a major fuckin' slight advantage Throw in the towel nigga, Deepthroat 'til your mouth be all saliva vanished.

05-12-2018, 02:12 AM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	If Twodrop or 2tripple vote on this the shit don't count...

05-12-2018, 02:40 AM	#7
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 492 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	if brokenhal0s couldnt exis....this would not be earth existential words you spending all your bread on the birds sentenced to dirt exis ill hit your girl up on the chirp eat some cheese doodles then stick my fingers up in her skirt i dont give a fuck if she squirts my style rough i dont give a fuck if she squirms never use a rubber it burns as the world turns you cease to exis your like princess diana a dead man in a dress

05-12-2018, 01:35 PM	#9
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	I have Exis taking this one by more effectively attacking his opponent. I liked when Exis said 'He's so no homo, but watch him smoke some A hole' & when br0ken said that thing about fingering a girl w/ cheetoh fingers, raw. v/ Exis with the edge.

05-13-2018, 06:19 PM	#12
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Interesting battle here both stylistically very far from the norm, I dunno I wouldn't say there were any "quotables here" so Exis gets my vote for having harsher angles and a slightly more enjoyable verse Vote - Exis

05-13-2018, 08:47 PM	#13
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	So both these niggas can rap, it just y’all gotta adapt to the battle style. Lyrically the verses sound good but they sound like an open mic verse more than a battle verse. Out of the two verses I thought exis had the better flow. Also you had a lot of jabs mixed in so it felt more direct. Broken had the standout line imo - the finger her with cheese doodles was funny to me. Unfortunately, he rest of the verse veered off track and felt more like a stream of consciousness (once again would be fine for open mic) than an attack on an opponent. Overall I think Exis took this. Mvgt Exis