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10-14-2016, 07:22 PM | #1 |
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Battle Arena Tournament - 2tripple0 vs Strikta - OPEN FOR VOTES
Verse 1
Gotta be on da safe side, that's why I dump chrome quick & exercise caution.. usin da yellow tape at ya murder scene to jump rope w/ U prolly a pedo too so of course it's all worth noting Kids play in ur basement.. & not downstairs performing Don Quixote Dog ya blowing, & ull always be some weak lame trick In this Arena I ain't stuttering when I say ud always be a BA bitch On da wall's sticky pad inspirational words & some quotes So when u get nailed to it & bleed out ya death ends on an encouraging note Weak pussy... in da end my message is no love Keep getting put down & stepped on til u resemble a throw rug Verse 2 Right fuck whoever your are kill u in 2 lines call u a bar They wanted a cigar and rolled it but it canoe'd and started to fall apart Guess u aint ready anyways and this only the first round Im gonna bury u tho anyways just like he way i had to put my homie in the ground.. Look bro coming at trip aint easy i stay in a cypher for days Youll never connect with me fucker it feel like you missing a lighter to blaze But for real keep it tight keep searching the site for a dope line Im running out of excuses guees noone gonna give this cat credit aint noone have no time If you think i cant take the heat its why im hot drop drama til you go into trauma You be a mystery to the site anyways like whatever happened to llama... |
10-14-2016, 07:50 PM | #2 |
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Verse one and that opener it is what it is. Second verse was too drawn out and all over the place IMO. Verse one comfortably
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10-14-2016, 07:51 PM | #3 |
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Vote verse one...cuz it was way better.
Need I say more?
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10-15-2016, 01:27 AM | #4 |
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opener an encouraging notes were nice by verse one, verse 2 opener was a almost
i got verse 1 winning this |
10-18-2016, 12:00 AM | #5 |
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Verse 1 has this clutched after the first few lines.
I couldnt really focus on the second verse because Im laughing my ass off. give me about 20 minutes and Ill come read that... but Verse 1 has this either way
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10-18-2016, 10:14 AM | #6 |
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I was fucking wit that murder scene joint, fire.
Vote verse 1 |
11-13-2016, 09:20 PM | #7 |
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Vote- Verse 1
lines connected better compare to verse two |
12-06-2016, 06:44 PM | #8 |
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v/verse 1 - that be a ba bitch is getting slept on hard for me. opener was fire tho.
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