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Old 12-23-2018, 01:40 PM   #1
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"Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it." - Ernest Hemingway

......

Few discover the true colors of this illusive puzzle...
Nothing groundbreaking but the foundation's roots are subtle
I heard you grew up "underground" and are proof of struggle
So I blew the tunnel and used a shovel to remove the rubble
Hate to burst ya bubble, whatever you do I double
How are you a hustler but don't move a muscle?
When push comes to shove I'll use my pull
It's true, today beautiful to debut in full...
Came through dressed to the nines, I do a number on you
Y'all troubleshoot cuz you're too scared to try something new
Like a cartoon you put under the gun once it's drew
Everything I do is a must view like an undusted room
Get it? Nah, you will never get a clue
Like a corrupt detective who had all the evidence removed
So a defense could never use it, call it hide and seek
Don't spit a rhyme per week, give your shit time to breathe
Even finding a solid lead can seem hollow to me
Like Apollo Creed's reach when Ivan Drago competes
Drop most with a combo by simply rapping these lines
Now they waving two-and-fro like hippies flashing peace signs
Find unbridaled success cuz I'm groomed and got Likes
You gun shy like an umpire who refused to call strikes
Get the lay of the land, I'd say your property's pay dirt
You sure God is your saviour? That's neurotic behaviour
Check my temp if the fever stops, this attempt is seen as off
I'm guessing the Beat'll drop like Lennon when he was shot
By a strange man with no gameplan who barely tried running
Catcher n' the rye held up like a Jerry Seinfeld mugging (couldn't resist)
That tells you one thing; being heavy handed reveals clout
But just like mobile homes, it's a bit out of your wheelhouse
Saw the talent pool, ouch, you seem to hope you still felt
Cuz you behind-the-8-ball like sneaking coke to jail cells
You want to dance with the devil but don't plan to yell
As far as fans can tell there's no chants in hell
Mine spread like wildfire while your raps are in doubt
To match my output you first need a match to put out
Now let's snap chat like Thanos before claiming victims
I don't eat your dust I seep in lungs of your aliases
Beg to differ on social media, the safe way to nitpick
Take what they dish out but I Maytag you in it
Now they dressed all in black like Johnny Cash at a laundry mat
So washed up that he'd probably ask for his dollar back
I'll drop you flat as an octave sung by an awful hack
Like Jason with a faulty axe when he dons the mask
Put you in a Boston crab and then pop your back
Like a toddler's reaction when their absent Father's back
Combine a lowly psychopath with a high bridge collapse
I'm both a hybrid of that AND I bridge the gap
Meaning I'm middle of the road but too lyrical to boast
You have a body of water but who is steering the boat?
Go pedal to the metal, constant pressure drove the concept
I'd have a treasure trove of knowledge if I never posted all this
Whatever the topic is, just watch I'll full throttle it
Like Chris Watts strongest grip locked on his kid's esophagus
Perposterous as ergonomics is, a sophomore slump ignores it
But 'dey lightweights like when the clocks go forward
I mean daylight waits like when the clocks go forward
Sometimes you have to run it back before you walk toward it
Shallow morons, you numbskulls ain't even headstrong
While I'm more like a diving board, the one y'all deep-end on
And I mean, y'all might be the biggest fans I've seen
Ben E King's song is the only way you'll get Stan'd by me
Man these posts are fancy clothes and a damn freak show
My family knows I'm like a cameo from Stan Lee's clone
Revamp my style, out for blood like the night is my home
I'm so stoked the fire rose and ignited the prose
Was better than most a decade ago, it's worth reminding
I lost a step yet amaze myself in the end like The Shining
Success comes from patience, my reality is something private
So it's like shutter island everytime I shut my eyelids
If Mother Nature ages then Father time benefits
Bitch my nemesis once her chest Sega bit like Genesis
Gave her 9 inches instead, now I'm itchin in bed
Coulda crushed the thorax, shoulda just went for the head
I guess she been listening to AWOL NATION lately
If you get a disease, blame it on your eighty D's, baby
Rekindle success, but who lit the spark in the rain?
I'm a moth to the flame but the culprit remains
You're what I call pretty lame, you spread thin as shrapnel
Left dead as a taradacdyl with a severed backbone
I bet Jurassic to death of these prehistoric delusions
But mind control proves your time has soared through it
When rap-turns against you most just hide in seclusion
To my amusement that means you dyin'-a-sore loser
I'm the cult of personality to a suicidal crowd
Your vile style couldn't fill a stupid vile, clown
This is roulette, one in the chamber is fired now
You'll never stay in my circle long as I'm a round
I found the bonds I create are like bonsai in a crate
I'm obviously out of place in this box of piled waste
Paper gangsters, what did I pen all this for?
If I emptied a clip-bored you wouldn't get my support
I'm the elephant in the room, the unicorn you ignore
But press a dent that's formed and a precedent is born
Can't weather the storm, lightning strikes and thunder struck
It's dumb luck but I run amok 'til something stuck
Made those star bucks, you like "damn that's a lot eh"
I say "yeah that's a latte", you left standing there all day
Like the fuck he just say? Some misinterpret the message
There's two sides to every story with one emergency exit
That's the perfect death wish, last can't compete with first
My set up lines are your punchlines... SPOILER ALERT
I'll start from the ground up like coffee beans in the dirt
I bet you can read this in reverse, let's see if it works...


"Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it." - Ernest Hemingway

.....

I bet you can read this in reverse, let's see if it works...
I'll start from the ground up like coffee beans in the dirt
My set up lines are your punchlines... SPOILER ALERT
That's the perfect death wish, last can't compete with first
There's two sides to every story with one emergency exit
Like the fuck he just say? Some misinterpret the message
I say "yeah that's a lot eh", you left standing there all day
Made those star bucks, you like "damn that's a latte"
It's dumb luck but I run amok 'til something stuck
Can't weather the storm, lightning strikes and thunder struck
But press a dent that's formed and a precedent is born
I'm the elephant in the room, the unicorn you ignore
If I emptied a clip-bored you wouldn't get my support
Paper gangsters, what did I pen all this for?
I'm obviously out of place in this box of piled waste
I found the bonds I create are like bonsai in a crate
You'll never stay in my circle long as I'm a round
This is roulette, one in the chamber is fired now
Your vile style couldn't fill a stupid vile, clown
I'm the cult of personality to a suicidal crowd
To my amusement that means you dyin'-a-sore loser
When rap-turns against you most just hide in seclusion
But mind control proves your time has soared through it
I bet Jurassic to death of these prehistoric delusions
Left dead as a taradacdyl with a severed backbone
You're what I call pretty lame, you spread thin as shrapnel
I'm a moth to the flame but the culprit remains
Rekindle success, but who lit the spark in the rain?
If you get a disease, blame it on your eighty D's, baby
I guess she been listening to AWOL NATION lately
Coulda crushed the thorax, shoulda just went for the head
Gave her 9 inches instead, now I'm itchin in bed
Bitch my nemesis once her chest Sega bit like Genesis
If Mother Nature ages then Father time benefits
So it's like shutter island everytime I shut my eyelids
Success comes from patience, my reality is something private
I lost a step yet amaze myself in the end like The Shining
Was better than most a decade ago, it's worth reminding
I'm so stoked the fire rose and ignited the prose
Revamp my style, out for blood like the night is my home
Ben E King's song is the only way you'll get Stan'd by me
And I mean, y'all might be the biggest fans I've seen
My family knows I'm like a cameo from Stan Lee's clone
Man these posts are fancy clothes and a damn freak show
While I'm more like a diving board, the one y'all deep-end on
Shallow morons, you numbskulls ain't even headstrong
Sometimes you have to run it back before you walk toward it
I mean daylight waits like when the clocks go forward
But 'dey lightweights like when the clocks go forward
Perposterous as ergonomics is, a sophomore slump ignores it
Like Chris Watts strongest grip locked on his kid's esophagus
Whatever the topic is, just watch I'll full throttle it
I'd have a treasure trove of knowledge if I never posted all this
Go pedal to the metal, constant pressure drove the concept
You have a body of water but who is steering the boat?
Meaning I'm middle of the road but too lyrical to boast
I'm both a hybrid of that AND I bridge the gap
Combine a lowly psychopath with a high bridge collapse
Like a toddler's reaction when their absent Father's back
Put you in a Boston crab and then pop your back
Like Jason with a faulty axe when he dons the mask
I'll drop you flat as an octave sung by an awful hack
So washed up that he'd probably ask for his dollar back
Now they dressed all in black like Johnny Cash at a laundry mat
Take what they dish out but I Maytag you in it
Beg to differ on social media, the safe way to nitpick
I don't eat your dust I seep in lungs of your aliases
Now let's snap chat like Thanos before claiming victims
To match my output you first need a match to put out
Mine spread like wildfire while your raps are in doubt
As far as fans can tell there's no chants in hell
You want to dance with the devil but don't plan to yell
Cuz you behind-the-8-ball like sneaking coke to jail cells
Saw the talent pool, ouch, you seem to hope you still felt
But just like mobile homes, it's a bit out of your wheelhouse
That tells you one thing; being heavy handed reveals clout
Catcher n' the rye held up like a Jerry Seinfeld mugging
By a strange man with no gameplan who barely tried running
I'm guessing the Beat'll drop like Lennon when he was shot
Check my temp if the fever stops, this attempt is seen as off
You sure God is your saviour? That's neurotic behaviour
Get the lay of the land, I'd say your property's pay dirt
You gun shy like an umpire who refused to call strikes
Find unbridaled success cuz I'm groomed and got Likes
Now they waving two-and-fro like hippies flashing peace signs
Drop most with a combo by simply rapping these lines
Like Apollo Creed's reach when Ivan Drago competes
Even finding a solid lead can seem hollow to me
Don't spit a rhyme per week, give your shit time to breathe
So a defense could never use it, call it hide and seek
Like a corrupt detective who had all the evidence removed
Get it? Nah, you will never get a clue
Everything I do is a must view like an undusted room
Like a cartoon you put under the gun once it's drew
Y'all troubleshoot cuz you're too scared to try something new
Came through dressed to the nines, I do a number on you
It's true, today beautiful to debut in full...
When push comes to shove I'll use my pull
How are you a hustler but don't move a muscle?
Hate to burst ya bubble, whatever you do I double
So I blew the tunnel and used a shovel to remove the rubble
I heard you grew up "underground" and are proof of struggle
Nothing groundbreaking but the foundation's roots are subtle
Few discover the true colors of this illusive puzzle...
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Old 12-23-2018, 10:40 PM   #2
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Old 12-24-2018, 07:33 AM   #3
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Old 12-24-2018, 02:04 PM   #4
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