12-23-2018, 01:40 PM | #1 |
Everything's Connected
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Vice Versa
"Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it." - Ernest Hemingway
...... Few discover the true colors of this illusive puzzle... Nothing groundbreaking but the foundation's roots are subtle I heard you grew up "underground" and are proof of struggle So I blew the tunnel and used a shovel to remove the rubble Hate to burst ya bubble, whatever you do I double How are you a hustler but don't move a muscle? When push comes to shove I'll use my pull It's true, today beautiful to debut in full... Came through dressed to the nines, I do a number on you Y'all troubleshoot cuz you're too scared to try something new Like a cartoon you put under the gun once it's drew Everything I do is a must view like an undusted room Get it? Nah, you will never get a clue Like a corrupt detective who had all the evidence removed So a defense could never use it, call it hide and seek Don't spit a rhyme per week, give your shit time to breathe Even finding a solid lead can seem hollow to me Like Apollo Creed's reach when Ivan Drago competes Drop most with a combo by simply rapping these lines Now they waving two-and-fro like hippies flashing peace signs Find unbridaled success cuz I'm groomed and got Likes You gun shy like an umpire who refused to call strikes Get the lay of the land, I'd say your property's pay dirt You sure God is your saviour? That's neurotic behaviour Check my temp if the fever stops, this attempt is seen as off I'm guessing the Beat'll drop like Lennon when he was shot By a strange man with no gameplan who barely tried running Catcher n' the rye held up like a Jerry Seinfeld mugging (couldn't resist) That tells you one thing; being heavy handed reveals clout But just like mobile homes, it's a bit out of your wheelhouse Saw the talent pool, ouch, you seem to hope you still felt Cuz you behind-the-8-ball like sneaking coke to jail cells You want to dance with the devil but don't plan to yell As far as fans can tell there's no chants in hell Mine spread like wildfire while your raps are in doubt To match my output you first need a match to put out Now let's snap chat like Thanos before claiming victims I don't eat your dust I seep in lungs of your aliases Beg to differ on social media, the safe way to nitpick Take what they dish out but I Maytag you in it Now they dressed all in black like Johnny Cash at a laundry mat So washed up that he'd probably ask for his dollar back I'll drop you flat as an octave sung by an awful hack Like Jason with a faulty axe when he dons the mask Put you in a Boston crab and then pop your back Like a toddler's reaction when their absent Father's back Combine a lowly psychopath with a high bridge collapse I'm both a hybrid of that AND I bridge the gap Meaning I'm middle of the road but too lyrical to boast You have a body of water but who is steering the boat? Go pedal to the metal, constant pressure drove the concept I'd have a treasure trove of knowledge if I never posted all this Whatever the topic is, just watch I'll full throttle it Like Chris Watts strongest grip locked on his kid's esophagus Perposterous as ergonomics is, a sophomore slump ignores it But 'dey lightweights like when the clocks go forward I mean daylight waits like when the clocks go forward Sometimes you have to run it back before you walk toward it Shallow morons, you numbskulls ain't even headstrong While I'm more like a diving board, the one y'all deep-end on And I mean, y'all might be the biggest fans I've seen Ben E King's song is the only way you'll get Stan'd by me Man these posts are fancy clothes and a damn freak show My family knows I'm like a cameo from Stan Lee's clone Revamp my style, out for blood like the night is my home I'm so stoked the fire rose and ignited the prose Was better than most a decade ago, it's worth reminding I lost a step yet amaze myself in the end like The Shining Success comes from patience, my reality is something private So it's like shutter island everytime I shut my eyelids If Mother Nature ages then Father time benefits Bitch my nemesis once her chest Sega bit like Genesis Gave her 9 inches instead, now I'm itchin in bed Coulda crushed the thorax, shoulda just went for the head I guess she been listening to AWOL NATION lately If you get a disease, blame it on your eighty D's, baby Rekindle success, but who lit the spark in the rain? I'm a moth to the flame but the culprit remains You're what I call pretty lame, you spread thin as shrapnel Left dead as a taradacdyl with a severed backbone I bet Jurassic to death of these prehistoric delusions But mind control proves your time has soared through it When rap-turns against you most just hide in seclusion To my amusement that means you dyin'-a-sore loser I'm the cult of personality to a suicidal crowd Your vile style couldn't fill a stupid vile, clown This is roulette, one in the chamber is fired now You'll never stay in my circle long as I'm a round I found the bonds I create are like bonsai in a crate I'm obviously out of place in this box of piled waste Paper gangsters, what did I pen all this for? If I emptied a clip-bored you wouldn't get my support I'm the elephant in the room, the unicorn you ignore But press a dent that's formed and a precedent is born Can't weather the storm, lightning strikes and thunder struck It's dumb luck but I run amok 'til something stuck Made those star bucks, you like "damn that's a lot eh" I say "yeah that's a latte", you left standing there all day Like the fuck he just say? Some misinterpret the message There's two sides to every story with one emergency exit That's the perfect death wish, last can't compete with first My set up lines are your punchlines... SPOILER ALERT I'll start from the ground up like coffee beans in the dirt I bet you can read this in reverse, let's see if it works... "Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure, only death can stop it." - Ernest Hemingway ..... I bet you can read this in reverse, let's see if it works... I'll start from the ground up like coffee beans in the dirt My set up lines are your punchlines... SPOILER ALERT That's the perfect death wish, last can't compete with first There's two sides to every story with one emergency exit Like the fuck he just say? Some misinterpret the message I say "yeah that's a lot eh", you left standing there all day Made those star bucks, you like "damn that's a latte" It's dumb luck but I run amok 'til something stuck Can't weather the storm, lightning strikes and thunder struck But press a dent that's formed and a precedent is born I'm the elephant in the room, the unicorn you ignore If I emptied a clip-bored you wouldn't get my support Paper gangsters, what did I pen all this for? I'm obviously out of place in this box of piled waste I found the bonds I create are like bonsai in a crate You'll never stay in my circle long as I'm a round This is roulette, one in the chamber is fired now Your vile style couldn't fill a stupid vile, clown I'm the cult of personality to a suicidal crowd To my amusement that means you dyin'-a-sore loser When rap-turns against you most just hide in seclusion But mind control proves your time has soared through it I bet Jurassic to death of these prehistoric delusions Left dead as a taradacdyl with a severed backbone You're what I call pretty lame, you spread thin as shrapnel I'm a moth to the flame but the culprit remains Rekindle success, but who lit the spark in the rain? If you get a disease, blame it on your eighty D's, baby I guess she been listening to AWOL NATION lately Coulda crushed the thorax, shoulda just went for the head Gave her 9 inches instead, now I'm itchin in bed Bitch my nemesis once her chest Sega bit like Genesis If Mother Nature ages then Father time benefits So it's like shutter island everytime I shut my eyelids Success comes from patience, my reality is something private I lost a step yet amaze myself in the end like The Shining Was better than most a decade ago, it's worth reminding I'm so stoked the fire rose and ignited the prose Revamp my style, out for blood like the night is my home Ben E King's song is the only way you'll get Stan'd by me And I mean, y'all might be the biggest fans I've seen My family knows I'm like a cameo from Stan Lee's clone Man these posts are fancy clothes and a damn freak show While I'm more like a diving board, the one y'all deep-end on Shallow morons, you numbskulls ain't even headstrong Sometimes you have to run it back before you walk toward it I mean daylight waits like when the clocks go forward But 'dey lightweights like when the clocks go forward Perposterous as ergonomics is, a sophomore slump ignores it Like Chris Watts strongest grip locked on his kid's esophagus Whatever the topic is, just watch I'll full throttle it I'd have a treasure trove of knowledge if I never posted all this Go pedal to the metal, constant pressure drove the concept You have a body of water but who is steering the boat? Meaning I'm middle of the road but too lyrical to boast I'm both a hybrid of that AND I bridge the gap Combine a lowly psychopath with a high bridge collapse Like a toddler's reaction when their absent Father's back Put you in a Boston crab and then pop your back Like Jason with a faulty axe when he dons the mask I'll drop you flat as an octave sung by an awful hack So washed up that he'd probably ask for his dollar back Now they dressed all in black like Johnny Cash at a laundry mat Take what they dish out but I Maytag you in it Beg to differ on social media, the safe way to nitpick I don't eat your dust I seep in lungs of your aliases Now let's snap chat like Thanos before claiming victims To match my output you first need a match to put out Mine spread like wildfire while your raps are in doubt As far as fans can tell there's no chants in hell You want to dance with the devil but don't plan to yell Cuz you behind-the-8-ball like sneaking coke to jail cells Saw the talent pool, ouch, you seem to hope you still felt But just like mobile homes, it's a bit out of your wheelhouse That tells you one thing; being heavy handed reveals clout Catcher n' the rye held up like a Jerry Seinfeld mugging By a strange man with no gameplan who barely tried running I'm guessing the Beat'll drop like Lennon when he was shot Check my temp if the fever stops, this attempt is seen as off You sure God is your saviour? That's neurotic behaviour Get the lay of the land, I'd say your property's pay dirt You gun shy like an umpire who refused to call strikes Find unbridaled success cuz I'm groomed and got Likes Now they waving two-and-fro like hippies flashing peace signs Drop most with a combo by simply rapping these lines Like Apollo Creed's reach when Ivan Drago competes Even finding a solid lead can seem hollow to me Don't spit a rhyme per week, give your shit time to breathe So a defense could never use it, call it hide and seek Like a corrupt detective who had all the evidence removed Get it? Nah, you will never get a clue Everything I do is a must view like an undusted room Like a cartoon you put under the gun once it's drew Y'all troubleshoot cuz you're too scared to try something new Came through dressed to the nines, I do a number on you It's true, today beautiful to debut in full... When push comes to shove I'll use my pull How are you a hustler but don't move a muscle? Hate to burst ya bubble, whatever you do I double So I blew the tunnel and used a shovel to remove the rubble I heard you grew up "underground" and are proof of struggle Nothing groundbreaking but the foundation's roots are subtle Few discover the true colors of this illusive puzzle... |
12-23-2018, 10:40 PM | #2 |
consults Lloyd
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Cool.
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12-24-2018, 07:33 AM | #3 |
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There's no way I'm readin' all that in one sittin' fam lol, I'll be back...
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12-24-2018, 02:04 PM | #4 |
rhyme capsule.
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i'll read this.
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12-27-2018, 11:52 PM | #5 |
White Earl
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Fire. Reminds me of a self verse.
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01-06-2019, 08:23 PM | #6 |
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Universe has got barrrz
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01-06-2019, 09:33 PM | #7 |
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E-l-u-s-i-v-e
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01-09-2019, 11:43 AM | #8 |
Shrewd as evearthed
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MY DUDE CRAZY WITH IT
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