01-20-2019, 08:49 PM | #1 | |
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BodySnatcher vs Ryno - BODYSNATCHER WINS
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01-21-2019, 08:44 AM | #2 |
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Ayo,
No need to write, gamble ya life, these punches fkn lethal, Once the keys start ur gettin flamed quicker than Deniro in Casino. This the nigga yall brought Ryno? Yeah ok pussy u better keep calm, If he’s head & shoulders above me, i bet a stack it’ll end w/ a power bomb. Duke it out w/ ya bitch snatch, me & my team stay slayin’ her fam, Think Zion Williamson, every week i hit her rim w/ a thunderous slam. Come to my slums, that heroic & brave shit’ll get u bodied up, quick, Every element around is dangerous, but homie this aint a spider man flick. He's nervous w/ hoes, im raising the scope, the tools get violent, Bullets r flyin! Pussy even ya date w/ death’ll end awkward in silence. Last edited by Ryno; 01-21-2019 at 02:46 PM. |
01-21-2019, 02:55 PM | #3 |
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When I dump the pump...Rhino will wonder were his leg went... Cuz I'ma leave more shots 'Around the Horn' than an ESPN segment, Ur a circus-freak. So if I'm 'twisting ur wrist' like an extortionist... Stay calm before this thing on my 'shoulder pop' like a contortionist, Body is strap like a harness, so when I bring out the darkness... A pair of desert eagles will leave vultures feeding off Rhino's carcass, I'ma gangster & gentleman. I'll take ur bitch when I paint lead... Cuz the way I 'grab the handle & open up' it's like chivalry ain't dead, When Rhino charges w/ 'Bolt-Action'...I'll keep the Lever draw... 1 shot & we'll see his insides 'wrap around the pole' like a tetherball. Last edited by BodySnatcher; 01-21-2019 at 02:57 PM. |
01-21-2019, 10:20 PM | #4 |
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Ryno -
Ayo, wack as hell..lol.. No need to write, gamble ya life, these punches fkn lethal, Once the keys start ur gettin flamed quicker than Deniro in Casino. LOL @this punch - nice one at that - pretty cool start; I enjoyed it to say the least.. This the nigga yall brought Ryno? Yeah ok pussy u better keep calm, If he’s head & shoulders above me, i bet a stack it’ll end w/ a power bomb. This was pretty cool, lethal in dosage..was decent.. Duke it out w/ ya bitch snatch, me & my team stay slayin’ her fam, Think Zion Williamson, every week i hit her rim w/ a thunderous slam. I wasn't feeling this one..was weaker than your others.. Come to my slums, that heroic & brave shit’ll get u bodied up, quick, Every element around is dangerous, but homie this aint a spider man flick. Was pretty dope with this one..niice.. He's nervous w/ hoes, im raising the scope, the tools get violent, Bullets r flyin! Pussy even ya date w/ death’ll end awkward in silence. Nice one..could be better..but I see what you're going for..niice.. Bodysnatcher - When I dump the pump...Rhino will wonder were his leg went... Cuz I'ma leave more shots 'Around the Horn' than an ESPN segment, Pretty cool..I can dig it man.. Ur a circus-freak. So if I'm 'twisting ur wrist' like an extortionist... Stay calm before this thing on my 'shoulder pop' like a contortionist, Nice..I'm guessing you mean a machine gun..niice..I could dig this.. Body is strap like a harness, so when I bring out the darkness... A pair of desert eagles will leave vultures feeding off Rhino's carcass, Probably your best bar..I could dig it man..niicee.. I'ma gangster & gentleman. I'll take ur bitch when I paint lead... Cuz the way I 'grab the handle & open up' it's like chivalry ain't dead, Dope bar here..niice one.. When Rhino charges w/ 'Bolt-Action'...I'll keep the Lever draw... 1 shot & we'll see his insides 'wrap around the pole' like a tetherball. I could see this working better..but not too bad to close with.. Overall - Dope battle you two, I enjoyed both verses..but deciding factor is who had the more direct punches..and that's bodysnatcher.. V/ BodySnatcher.. |
01-25-2019, 06:58 PM | #5 |
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No need to write, gamble ya life, these punches fkn lethal,
Once the keys start ur gettin flamed quicker than Deniro in Casino. casino bars are too old and played to give credit to, the flip would have to be super dope or something. Wasn’t feelin this one This the nigga yall brought Ryno? Yeah ok pussy u better keep calm, If he’s head & shoulders above me, i bet a stack it’ll end w/ a power bomb. pretty cool here Duke it out w/ ya bitch snatch, me & my team stay slayin’ her fam, Think Zion Williamson, every week i hit her rim w/ a thunderous slam. alright Come to my slums, that heroic & brave shit’ll get u bodied up, quick, Every element around is dangerous, but homie this aint a spider man flick. nah He's nervous w/ hoes, im raising the scope, the tools get violent, Bullets r flyin! Pussy even ya date w/ death’ll end awkward in silence. wasnt feelin this either man Vs When I dump the pump...Rhino will wonder were his leg went... Cuz I'ma leave more shots 'Around the Horn' than an ESPN segment, alright Ur a circus-freak. So if I'm 'twisting ur wrist' like an extortionist... Stay calm before this thing on my 'shoulder pop' like a contortionist, not feelin Body is strap like a harness, so when I bring out the darkness... A pair of desert eagles will leave vultures feeding off Rhino's carcass, ha, I like this I'ma gangster & gentleman. I'll take ur bitch when I paint lead... Cuz the way I 'grab the handle & open up' it's like chivalry ain't dead, dopeness When Rhino charges w/ 'Bolt-Action'...I'll keep the Lever draw... 1 shot & we'll see his insides 'wrap around the pole' like a tetherball. shoulda been “lever drawn”, this is OK Cool little battle here, both came pretty good but I think Ryno had less impactful lines. Some cool concepts but also 3 misses that I just wasn’t feelin at all, Shame because I know Ryno can write dope and I’ve seen it recently. Body had some heat in there and was more consistent, just one clear miss for me. Vote BodySnatcher |
01-26-2019, 12:33 PM | #6 |
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powerbomb
vs around the horn, vulture really liked that powerbomb line.. what hurt u was the old casino and date with death lines.. but i still almost wanted to give this to you because body’s chivalry aint dead and tetherball lines are straight from url verses i’ve listened to recently.. but if i had to pick my poison he did still have more lines i liked so vote body
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01-26-2019, 01:48 PM | #7 |
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No need to write, gamble ya life, these punches fkn lethal,
Once the keys start ur gettin flamed quicker than Deniro in Casino. Coo opener here! Nothing heavy, but was coo This the nigga yall brought Ryno? Yeah ok pussy u better keep calm, If he’s head & shoulders above me, i bet a stack it’ll end w/ a power bomb. This was Fiyaaa! Like how you worded this and everything Duke it out w/ ya bitch snatch, me & my team stay slayin’ her fam, Think Zion Williamson, every week i hit her rim w/ a thunderous slam. Ehh, this was ok, could have did a lil more Come to my slums, that heroic & brave shit’ll get u bodied up, quick, Every element around is dangerous, but homie this aint a spider man flick. Couldn't to much get with this one He's nervous w/ hoes, im raising the scope, the tools get violent, Bullets r flyin! Pussy even ya date w/ death’ll end awkward in silence. This was a ok closer here, think the wording could have been just slightly better, but light ender here. It was ok ------------ When I dump the pump...Rhino will wonder were his leg went... Cuz I'ma leave more shots 'Around the Horn' than an ESPN segment, I like this here, good open up here! Ur a circus-freak. So if I'm 'twisting ur wrist' like an extortionist... Stay calm before this thing on my 'shoulder pop' like a contortionist, This was ok, not to heavy on the sting, coo tho Body is strap like a harness, so when I bring out the darkness... A pair of desert eagles will leave vultures feeding off Rhino's carcass, Haha, I like how this was worded for some reason. Not heavy, but wasn't light either. Good jab I'ma gangster & gentleman. I'll take ur bitch when I paint lead... Cuz the way I 'grab the handle & open up' it's like chivalry ain't dead, Me personally i heard a chivalry line cause i do watch battle rap heavy, but it was nothin like this one here and it was fiya in my opinion! Dope punch here! When Rhino charges w/ 'Bolt-Action'...I'll keep the Lever draw... 1 shot & we'll see his insides 'wrap around the pole' like a tetherball. This was coo closer here, heard a tetherball concept before, but the wording here was totally different again. Nice finish ----- This here was a cool read, On Ryno part i feel like he came in stinging then faded out a couple bars here and there. His read was coo, but i def know he can come way better. Body had some stings out there in his bars and less misses then Ryno also. Nice shit to both, but i got Body taking this one here. V-Body
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01-26-2019, 03:03 PM | #8 |
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Deniro casino line is good but played. Needed to be done alot better to make up for that sadly. Although I enjoyed it. Powerbomb was your best line, nice bar. Closer was solid an all. fresh.
Body that chivalry line was slick. Probs my LOTB. Eagles was simple and easy but works.contortionist I've done before so lost points there. It's close but body edges on consistency. |
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