04-03-2019, 02:04 PM | #1 |
It Is I, Debut M.C.
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Moment of Lyrics
Carolina Blue the letters italic with a darkened shadow
Kodak moment, capture the flash of my minds travel Slight of Hand, I'm Houdini with pen's, Silence of the Lambs Hannibal Lecter, Behind bars I'm still fuckin' dangerous Fam! Listen! with stretched bars you lose flow, taint breath control, So know your weapons ink is dangerously low, dull, or simply out of ammo Now let's light this candle and Pay Homage to history's battle From ancient god's who grapple, to elder chapels that lie dismantled See I arrange words like scrabble, then set fire to certain scripts Smoke lifts, you can hear the paper crackle as it's remnants begin to drift
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04-03-2019, 02:40 PM | #2 | |
DMS—Diddled My Stick
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04-05-2019, 03:26 AM | #3 |
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whack buster this is lackluster
my feed rhymes i'm annoyed. you've got apostrophes where they shouldn't be and then other places they're missing. capture the flash of my minds travel mind's* I'm Houdini with pen's pens* taint breath control what does taint breath control mean? to elder chapels do you mean old chapels? as it's remnants begin to drift again, this should be its* I'm not really impressed dog. Write something better |
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