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Default Lefty vs. C. Gaffle {Tie}

David Lama
September 30th, 2009, 03:14 PM

DOHpe vs. Clash

Verses due saturday october 10th 2009 11:59PM pacific
Line Limit: Min = 16, Max = 30
(Line Limit can be more if agreed upon by both)
Match whoever drops first
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cant edit after the first vote. Breaking this rule = DQ
Recycling = Automatic DQ
Feeding = Automatic DQ
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1st to 8 Votes wins
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(In case of a close battle. Must be ahead by 2 votes in order to win
Meaning if someone is up 8-7 he still hasn’t won until he’s up by 2.
If the next vote is for him then he wins. If its not then its 8-8 and in
order for someone to win he’d either have to get the next 2 votes or
wait until he’s up by 2 votes. )
check in. G/l

[HR][/HR]Lefty
October 1st, 2009, 07:49 AM

yoopppp

[HR][/HR]C. Gaffle
October 2nd, 2009, 03:31 AM

how many?

[HR][/HR]Lefty
October 2nd, 2009, 07:07 AM

30

[HR][/HR]David Lama
October 11th, 2009, 02:57 AM

Extended till sunday october 11th 2009 11:59PM pacific

[HR][/HR]Lefty
October 11th, 2009, 08:12 AM

The newest in Dohpe, clash is getting mopped at this pace
I’m grade A, CG… AND wearing them to stomp on your face
You pompous disgrace, I’m placed with elites that’ll maul his ass
While C class is the reason Mercedes stock is falling fast
I’d rather call a cab, swagger and flow brought a knee to his ribs
So to see Gaffigan is more of a laugh then the comedian is
Have you bleeding n shit, or I’ll put holmes in a noose
My prose on the loose…
winning No Time To Waste just seemed like your opponents’ excuse
start controlling your troops, wont see this nerd on the frontlines
cuz in his Clash…of the Titans, you write like their version of Sunshine
ya’ll punks grind? Lefty got mobsters afraid, you want the glock or the blade?
get sent to a Tombstone or a sick cast without Costner or Quaid
got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU
Which either means you never lose OR nobody thinks you’re a factor
You bring laughter, it’s the latter…and you need one to reach my chapters
Fucking actor, I’m sorry Lama matched us up, I proved you’re wack as fuck
I’ll keep handing C L’s until whats left is just ASH and dust
So pack your stuff, cuz you’re losing at embarrassing rates
Cale’s the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?
I’ll tear at your face, either with the Cannon or tight fists
If you had the option to fight bitch, we know you’d turn to a flight risk
I don’t mean the body’s response to stress, you’re style’s trash C
So watch Gaf fle before he starts receiving bullets like Gaffney
And lastly, now that I’ve broken down all the letters in your crew
What we’re really left with is simply, I’m just better than you
So whats this veteran do, have you hanging from a tree. An ornament of sorts
Or I can just keep slamming Gaffle until there’s order in the court

[HR][/HR]C. Gaffle
October 12th, 2009, 04:40 AM

welcome Lefty to DOHpe (http://www.netcees.com/forums/showthread.php?t=61853)

ur all HYPE..that thread got u thinkin ur godly now- u sloppy clown
grats on bein a New Edition to Dohpe.... just to end up like Bobby Brown
Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicks…..who love sharing the same syringe
& puss I'll rob u blind- im talkin all ya jewels n shine
then stick you for ya paper...so u dont post them awful lines
u got no place to boast- u aint winnin with that pace or flow
too beat me u'll need time trials...aka be in a race to ur ghosts
& Im disgracin ya hoe..that tricks head game was freakin sweet
keep callin her ur little Angel- cuz she certainly didnt Mindfreak n' me
I'll kill this square- all ya rhymes are fluff..no heart, skill or flare
last time u ever made a grizzly attempt, u were creatin build a bears
stick to open mics too- if its a battle just jet the thread
cuz we thought u were dope at first...now ur Better Left, unsaid
Thats right child, uve been exposed n' now ur at a disadvantage bruh
comin at me with a style of forced multis....thats screamin Iambic pentameter
so bow out u damn buffoon- no doubt I’ll champ this goon
Cuz if its SAFE to say u won...im the vault, laser grids and panic room
Ur the answer to whom, lookin like food when its feast or famine bitch
& if ur the best thing since sliced bread?...I'll eat this compliment sandwich
Talkin like u'll put me on ice- i guess ur one to bluff
thats so much of a COLD FRONT...weathermans sayin stay inside n' bundle up
& Dohpe will bench u after this- so if u got a towel toss it in
then go buy a special pair a scissors, Lefty...so u can cut ya losses kid
dont even gotta go to great lengths to show that im nice
knockin ya hoe for a price,
ur lady was lookin for a TIP...so i gave her buttloads of advice
each Gaf verse is fuckin crazy...but Left aint got the type of lines
while mine get tossed in the loony bin, urs end up in the recycled kind
U neva were a factor to stop me, nobody thought u were tough or cocky
& even if they saw u as a dark horse- they found out Im ur fuckin jockey


eh

[HR][/HR]Orc
October 12th, 2009, 10:17 AM

The newest in Dohpe, clash is getting mopped at this pace
Iím grade A, CGÖ AND wearing them to stomp on your face
[okish.]
You pompous disgrace, Iím placed with elites thatíll maul his ass
While C class is the reason Mercedes stock is falling fast
[decent.]
Iíd rather call a cab, swagger and flow brought a knee to his ribs
So to see Gaffigan is more of a laugh then the comedian is
[pretty sick. stop w/ the np's tho.]
Have you bleeding n shit, or Iíll put holmes in a noose
My prose on the looseÖ
winning No Time To Waste just seemed like your opponentsí excuse
[this was sick.]
start controlling your troops, wont see this nerd on the frontlines
cuz in his ClashÖof the Titans, you write like their version of Sunshine
[didn't like it. bad wording.]
yaíll punks grind? Lefty got mobsters afraid, you want the glock or the blade?
get sent to a Tombstone or a sick cast without Costner or Quaid
[ok.]
got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU
[naa, not good.]
Which either means you never lose OR nobody thinks youíre a factor
You bring laughter, itís the latterÖand you need one to reach my chapters
[same as above.]
Fucking actor, Iím sorry Lama matched us up, I proved youíre wack as fuck
Iíll keep handing C Lís until whats left is just ASH and dust
[same as above. come on..]
So pack your stuff, cuz youíre losing at embarrassing rates
Caleís the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?
[i guess it's ok.]
Iíll tear at your face, either with the Cannon or tight fists
If you had the option to fight bitch, we know youíd turn to a flight risk
[filler.]
I donít mean the bodyís response to stress, youíre styleís trash C
So watch Gaf fle before he starts receiving bullets like Gaffney
[ok at best.]
And lastly, now that Iíve broken down all the letters in your crew
What weíre really left with is simply, Iím just better than you
[wack as hell!]
So whats this veteran do, have you hanging from a tree. An ornament of sorts
Or I can just keep slamming Gaffle until thereís order in the court
[alright.]

my god.. u definitely od'd on nameplays. it's a bad look to write like 30 lines & most of them being nameplays.. i mean some were dope but you had a lot of single letter nameplays. one single letter np is pushing it, haha. but yea u had got some sick shit like the time to waste line - dope personal. u started off dope but gradually fell off.


vs


ur all HYPE..that thread got u thinkin ur godly now- u sloppy clown
grats on bein a New Edition to Dohpe.... just to end up like Bobby Brown
[alri, wording.]
Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicksÖ..who love sharing the same syringe
[ok concept i guess.]
& puss I'll rob u blind- im talkin all ya jewels n shine
then stick you for ya paper...so u dont post them awful lines
[haha.]
u got no place to boast- u aint winnin with that pace or flow
too beat me u'll need time trials...aka be in a race to ur ghosts
[no.. bad.]
& Im disgracin ya hoe..that tricks head game was freakin sweet
keep callin her ur little Angel- cuz she certainly didnt Mindfreak n' me
[pretty dope.]
I'll kill this square- all ya rhymes are fluff..no heart, skill or flare
last time u ever made a grizzly attempt, u were creatin build a bears
[lmao.]
stick to open mics too- if its a battle just jet the thread
cuz we thought u were dope at first...now ur Better Left, unsaid
[wack.]
Thats right child, uve been exposed n' now ur at a disadvantage bruh
comin at me with a style of forced multis....thats screamin Iambic pentameter
[rhyming was off. concept was coo.]
so bow out u damn buffoon- no doubt Iíll champ this goon
Cuz if its SAFE to say u won...im the vault, laser grids and panic room
[played out.]
Ur the answer to whom, lookin like food when its feast or famine bitch
& if ur the best thing since sliced bread?...I'll eat this compliment sandwich
[complimentary u mean? idk about this.]
Talkin like u'll put me on ice- i guess ur one to bluff
thats so much of a COLD FRONT...weathermans sayin stay inside n' bundle up
[pretty dope.]
& Dohpe will bench u after this- so if u got a towel toss it in
then go buy a special pair a scissors, Lefty...so u can cut ya losses kid
[alright, creative i guess.]
dont even gotta go to great lengths to show that im nice
knockin ya hoe for a price,
ur lady was lookin for a TIP...so i gave her buttloads of advice
[played out again.]
each Gaf verse is fuckin crazy...but Left aint got the type of lines
while mine get tossed in the loony bin, urs end up in the recycled kind
[alri flip.]
U neva were a factor to stop me, nobody thought u were tough or cocky
& even if they saw u as a dark horse- they found out Im ur fuckin jockey
[played.]

okayyy. definitely some played shit here.. inconsistent for sure. you mixed your concepts well structurally. some creative lines stood out like the cold front/grizzly ish.


i think gaff tried to come fresher, & didn't just rely on nameplays like lefty did. lefty had better wording but gaff had better concepts and was more creative generally. he was maybe a slight bit more consistent too even tho he had some played bars.

v/ gaff.

[HR][/HR]David Lama
October 12th, 2009, 02:09 PM

For the record orc JUST registered and some of his first posts were votes on the crew battles so umm I hope nobody has a problem with his votes not counting. Orc has 9 posts at the time I'm saying this and 4 of those posts are on these crew battles.

[HR][/HR]Murda Morris
October 14th, 2009, 01:28 PM

The newest in Dohpe, clash is getting mopped at this pace
Iím grade A, CGÖ AND wearing them to stomp on your face
this was decent!

You pompous disgrace, Iím placed with elites thatíll maul his ass
While C class is the reason Mercedes stock is falling fast
meh, okay

Iíd rather call a cab, swagger and flow brought a knee to his ribs
So to see Gaffigan is more of a laugh then the comedian is

sickening!

Have you bleeding n shit, or Iíll put holmes in a noose
My prose on the looseÖ
winning No Time To Waste just seemed like your opponentsí excuse

gangsta breezy, loved it!

start controlling your troops, wont see this nerd on the frontlines
cuz in his ClashÖof the Titans, you write like their version of Sunshine

i was feeling this mucho

yaíll punks grind? Lefty got mobsters afraid, you want the glock or the blade?
get sent to a Tombstone or a sick cast without Costner or Quaid

this was okish!

got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU

meh, filler

Which either means you never lose OR nobody thinks youíre a factor
You bring laughter, itís the latterÖand you need one to reach my chapters
meh, filler


Fucking actor, Iím sorry Lama matched us up, I proved youíre wack as fuck
Iíll keep handing C Lís until whats left is just ASH and dust
this was creative


So pack your stuff, cuz youíre losing at embarrassing rates
Caleís the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?
seems like filler, but okish


Iíll tear at your face, either with the Cannon or tight fists
If you had the option to fight bitch, we know youíd turn to a flight risk
not even really a punch

I donít mean the bodyís response to stress, youíre styleís trash C
So watch Gaf fle before he starts receiving bullets like Gaffney
okay getting a tad bit repetitive with the namepays enuff is enuff lmao


And lastly, now that Iíve broken down all the letters in your crew
What weíre really left with is simply, Iím just better than you
this seems like filler.

So whats this veteran do, have you hanging from a tree. An ornament of sorts
Or I can just keep slamming Gaffle until thereís order in the court
meh, okay. Could've came harder for the closer!


Gaffle
ur all HYPE..that thread got u thinkin ur godly now- u sloppy clown
grats on bein a New Edition to Dohpe.... just to end up like Bobby Brown
wtf, no!

Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicksÖ..who love sharing the same syringe

meh, this was silly and dumb

& puss I'll rob u blind- im talkin all ya jewels n shine
then stick you for ya paper...so u dont post them awful lines
cmon, son?! Aren't you supposted to be nice?

u got no place to boast- u aint winnin with that pace or flow
too beat me u'll need time trials...aka be in a race to ur ghosts

nah, dawg!
& Im disgracin ya hoe..that tricks head game was freakin sweet
keep callin her ur little Angel- cuz she certainly didnt Mindfreak n' me

decent.

I'll kill this square- all ya rhymes are fluff..no heart, skill or flare
last time u ever made a grizzly attempt, u were creatin build a bears

wtf? dawg are you on drugs?!
stick to open mics too- if its a battle just jet the thread
cuz we thought u were dope at first...now ur Better Left, unsaid
this was decent, but it was barely a punch and didn't hit hard at all

Thats right child, uve been exposed n' now ur at a disadvantage bruh
comin at me with a style of forced multis....thats screamin Iambic pentameter
lol, sorta


so bow out u damn buffoon- no doubt Iíll champ this goon
Cuz if its SAFE to say u won...im the vault, laser grids and panic room
this was okay, but these punches are just barely connecting


Ur the answer to whom, lookin like food when its feast or famine bitch
& if ur the best thing since sliced bread?...I'll eat this compliment sandwich
.....nah! you gotta come harder scrap!


Talkin like u'll put me on ice- i guess ur one to bluff
thats so much of a COLD FRONT...weathermans sayin stay inside n' bundle up
nah, this is like as played as saying not even in an orgy could you fuck with me


& Dohpe will bench u after this- so if u got a towel toss it in
then go buy a special pair a scissors, Lefty...so u can cut ya losses kid
lmaoooo, i feel like you recycled your punches from played factory.



dont even gotta go to great lengths to show that im nice
knockin ya hoe for a price,
ur lady was lookin for a TIP...so i gave her buttloads of advice
meh.

each Gaf verse is fuckin crazy...but Left aint got the type of lines
while mine get tossed in the loony bin, urs end up in the recycled kind
this was like so ironic, since the amjority of yoa verse was played


U neva were a factor to stop me, nobody thought u were tough or cocky
& even if they saw u as a dark horse- they found out Im ur fuckin jockey

this was a meh of a closer.

Lefty gets my vote hands down, even though dude O'ded on nameplays a couple of them were fire! And hit super duper (did I just say duper) hard. I honestly don't even think lefty was trying but wtf at lefty's filler being better than gaffles serious attempts at a punch. I wasn't feeling Gaffle's verse from start to finish, lmao at this nicca using a cold front line. WTF did somebody send me back to 2001. LMAO. Yeah, lefty's my nigga but I don't hate vote, never will never have, so fuck you ill nik-a ass nikkas

Vote Lefty

[HR][/HR]Rufus Griffin
October 15th, 2009, 04:24 PM

Lefty
I’d rather call a cab, swagger and flow brought a knee to his ribs
So to see Gaffigan is more of a laugh then the comedian is
got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU
Fucking actor, I’m sorry Lama matched us up, I proved you’re wack as fuck
I’ll keep handing C L’s until whats left is just ASH and dust
So pack your stuff, cuz you’re losing at embarrassing rates
Cale’s the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?
I’ll tear at your face, either with the Cannon or tight fists
If you had the option to fight bitch, we know you’d turn to a flight risk
And lastly, now that I’ve broken down all the letters in your crew
What we’re really left with is simply, I’m just better than you

-grade A/CG line was ok. ASH and dust was dope to me tho. gaffigan was pretty good. charity case hit pretty hard too. some ups and downs here. clash of the titans, tombstone, and gaffney were prolly the lines i most felt you could've done without. not alot of haymakers, but still a pretty nice drop.

C Gaffle
Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicks…..who love sharing the same syringe
& puss I'll rob u blind- im talkin all ya jewels n shine
then stick you for ya paper...so u dont post them awful lines
Thats right child, uve been exposed n' now ur at a disadvantage bruh
comin at me with a style of forced multis....thats screamin Iambic pentameter
so bow out u damn buffoon- no doubt I’ll champ this goon
Cuz if its SAFE to say u won...im the vault, laser grids and panic room

-seen new edition/bobby brown before. mindfreak gave me an lol, but i know i've seen this somewhere... wasn't feelin cold front. can't remember off the top of my head tho. wasn't feelin grizzly/build a bear. dark horse was played... started off pretty hot. fell off at the end. ok drop tho.

vote = Lefty on consistency. Gaffle had more lines I felt could've been completely scratched. cool battle

[HR][/HR]Vent
October 18th, 2009, 05:39 PM

i aint breakin dis down jus droppin a much needed vote

lefty.. i felt ya shit. flow was nice and the ash and dust shit was dope

gaf i dug the stick u fa ya paper shit it was nice imo but fuck bbrown lines an shit fuk no

vote lefty i was jus more entertaind by it

[HR][/HR]Kenny the G
October 23rd, 2009, 01:03 AM

The newest in Dohpe, clash is getting mopped at this pace
I’m grade A, CG… AND wearing them to stomp on your face
You pompous disgrace, I’m placed with elites that’ll maul his ass
While C class is the reason Mercedes stock is falling fast
ya’ll punks grind? Lefty got mobsters afraid, you want the glock or the blade?
get sent to a Tombstone or a sick cast without Costner or Quaid
got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU
So pack your stuff, cuz you’re losing at embarrassing rates
Cale’s the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?
I don’t mean the body’s response to stress, you’re style’s trash C
So watch Gaf fle before he starts receiving bullets like Gaffney


vs


ur all HYPE..that thread got u thinkin ur godly now- u sloppy clown
grats on bein a New Edition to Dohpe.... just to end up like Bobby Brown
Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicks…..who love sharing the same syringe
& puss I'll rob u blind- im talkin all ya jewels n shine
then stick you for ya paper...so u dont post them awful lines
& Im disgracin ya hoe..that tricks head game was freakin sweet
keep callin her ur little Angel- cuz she certainly didnt Mindfreak n' me
I'll kill this square- all ya rhymes are fluff..no heart, skill or flare
last time u ever made a grizzly attempt, u were creatin build a bears
Talkin like u'll put me on ice- i guess ur one to bluff
thats so much of a COLD FRONT...weathermans sayin stay inside n' bundle up
& Dohpe will bench u after this- so if u got a towel toss it in
then go buy a special pair a scissors, Lefty...so u can cut ya losses kid


v/gaffle

[HR][/HR]Realz
November 6th, 2009, 11:47 AM

The newest in Dohpe, clash is getting mopped at this pace
I’m grade A, CG… AND wearing them to stomp on your face
I’d rather call a cab, swagger and flow brought a knee to his ribs
So to see Gaffigan is more of a laugh then the comedian is
start controlling your troops, wont see this nerd on the frontlines
cuz in his Clash…of the Titans, you write like their version of Sunshine
got lots a grenades. I think we know what my pen can do
The best textee you gave an L to? not a single person mentioned YOU
Fucking actor, I’m sorry Lama matched us up, I proved you’re wack as fuck
I’ll keep handing C L’s until whats left is just ASH and dust
So pack your stuff, cuz you’re losing at embarrassing rates
Cale’s the REAL C in clash. you proud to be their charity case?



vs.



ur all HYPE..that thread got u thinkin ur godly now- u sloppy clown
grats on bein a New Edition to Dohpe.... just to end up like Bobby Brown
Fags, poolin ur verses together, still wont help u claim the wins
Dophes fulla NEEDLE dicks…..who love sharing the same syringe
& Im disgracin ya hoe..that tricks head game was freakin sweet
keep callin her ur little Angel- cuz she certainly didnt Mindfreak n' me
stick to open mics too- if its a battle just jet the thread
cuz we thought u were dope at first...now ur Better Left, unsaid
& Dohpe will bench u after this- so if u got a towel toss it in
then go buy a special pair a scissors, Lefty...so u can cut ya losses kid
dont even gotta go to great lengths to show that im nice
knockin ya hoe for a price,
ur lady was lookin for a TIP...so i gave her buttloads of advice




Vote: C. Gaffle


Expo: Dope ass battle. Good read. C. Gaff edged it with a few more quotables.. Left brought it too.. Some concepts a bit overdone from both.. With weak flips to them.. But nevertheless you both had some nice punches.. Smooth wording and clever concepts for the most part.. I liked the attack mentality C. Gaff brought over Lefty.. Felt his punches were a bit more direct and went harder.. But CLOSE ass battle.. Could go either way. C.Gaff gets my vote for being slightly more consistant and his quotables hitting harder. Dope read.

[HR][/HR]Barack Olama
December 5th, 2009, 11:56 AM

Ehhh

Tie

both get a win
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