Week 2: BodySnatcher (1-0) vs. Maximus (1-0) - BODYSNATCHER WINS

[Zaddy]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON A MINIMUM OF 4 BATTLES WILL RESULT IN A DEDUCTION OF 2 VOTES IN YOUR BATTLE. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! VOTE ON 4 BATTLES MINIMUM OR YOU PAY THE PRICE. SIMPLE!


COMPLETE RULE THREAD:

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140091


@BodySnatcher @Maximus

[Maximus]

aight..
10, maybe 12.

[BodySnatcher]

12 cool

[Maximus]

@BodySnatcher
so many guns, can't decide which to pick. i'm vacillating in choice
extended or da snub? fuck.. u'll get da Long & Short Of It like i'm straight to the point
we all saw Jabari ethered you, this ass-hole is sloppy
its worst than immolation in Africa, the way Black smoked a Body
active hostility, put a hole in your dome when i blast the artillery
the headshot leaves you with a Mental Opening like you had an epiphany
and i won't stop shooting these glocks until you're dead on the ground
shit is like circadian rhythm how i put Body To Sleep with consecutive rounds
bringing gruesome death to you and your kinfolks, my code is tragedy
literally leave their hearts tied in stitches, it redefines Close-Knit Family
can't even get a bitch, they all say you're grotesquely dressed
swag??? nahhhh, it's only in taxidermy we see Body Fresh To Death

[BodySnatcher]

.

Motion Picture Clip



Fuck ur day off! If u run lip, I’ll let the drum spit BUT my other gun clip,
…is known to act like Craig in Friday & get fired over some dumb shit
Banging on the front door!... U know me!... I don’t keep SHIT low-key!
Pull up to ur crib & start ‘dumpin on the side of the house’ like Smokey
I could grab a hammer & let bolts surge thru son like the purge begun,
I’ll put so many rounds in the air...Dr. Strange could emerge from one
It’s like these bullets have a mind of their own, but I’m supporting that
When I can’t make a decision, I gotta ‘thinking cap’ like the Sorting Hat
This is a suicide mission. Max`ll be hollow & MORE shrapnel will follow
Or I’ll put a Lethal Weapon in his mouth & cyanide capsule get swallow
I got 5 on it!... Pick the location & TRUST I don’t need`a beam to bust
Cuz u can catch these ‘Hands Across America’ just like the theme for US

ya dig.

[Zaddy]

so many guns, can't decide which to pick. i'm vacillating in choice
extended or da snub? fuck.. u'll get da Long & Short Of It like i'm straight to the point
cool opener, I liked it
we all saw Jabari ethered you, this ass-hole is sloppy
its worst than immolation in Africa, the way Black smoked a Body
good again
active hostility, put a hole in your dome when i blast the artillery
the headshot leaves you with a Mental Opening like you had an epiphany
ok maximus lol this was good
and i won't stop shooting these glocks until you're dead on the ground
shit is like circadian rhythm how i put Body To Sleep with consecutive rounds
this ones just decent
bringing gruesome death to you and your kinfolks, my code is tragedy
literally leave their hearts tied in stitches, it redefines Close-Knit Family
fire!
can't even get a bitch, they all say you're grotesquely dressed
swag??? nahhhh, it's only in taxidermy we see Body Fresh To Death
nah not feelin


4 nice
1 Decent
1 Miss


Vs



Fuck ur day off! If u run lip, I’ll let the drum spit BUT my other gun clip,
…is known to act like Craig in Friday & get fired over some dumb shit
alright
Banging on the front door!... U know me!... I don’t keep SHIT low-key!
Pull up to ur crib & start ‘dumpin on the side of the house’ like Smokey
lol cool
I could grab a hammer & let bolts surge thru son like the purge begun,
I’ll put so many rounds in the air...Dr. Strange could emerge from one
alright, coulda been done a bit better
It’s like these bullets have a mind of their own, but I’m supporting that
When I can’t make a decision, I gotta ‘thinking cap’ like the Sorting Hat
nah
This is a suicide mission. Max`ll be hollow & MORE shrapnel will follow
Or I’ll put a Lethal Weapon in his mouth & cyanide capsule get swallow
mmmm not feelin it
I got 5 on it!... Pick the location & TRUST I don’t need`a beam to bust
Cuz u can catch these ‘Hands Across America’ just like the theme for US
nice closer


2 nice
2 ok
2 misses


Yo this was an unexpected showing of a lifetime from maximus. Hands down the best verse I’ve ever read from max and that shit came out of nowhere. He almost had no misses in his verse but the closer wasn’t good at all. LOTB for him imo was close knit family, very creative and different. BodySnatcher also had a good verse but what hurt a bit were the back to back misses. Hands across America was dope, and the whole verse was pretty consistent really. When it comes down to it I have maximus having the slight edge here due to having more creative concepts done brilliantly. Close battle but I have maximus coming up with an upset.


Vote Maximus

[Suthaveli]

so many guns, can't decide which to pick. i'm vacillating in choice
extended or da snub? fuck.. u'll get da Long & Short Of It like i'm straight to the point
active hostility, put a hole in your dome when i blast the artillery
the headshot leaves you with a Mental Opening like you had an epiphany

Vs

Fuck ur day off! If u run lip, I’ll let the drum spit BUT my other gun clip,
…is known to act like Craig in Friday & get fired over some dumb shit
Banging on the front door!... U know me!... I don’t keep SHIT low-key!
Pull up to ur crib & start ‘dumpin on the side of the house’ like Smoke
I could grab a hammer & let bolts surge thru son like the purge begun,
I’ll put so many rounds in the air...Dr. Strange could emerge from one
This is a suicide mission. Max`ll be hollow & MORE shrapnel will follow
Or I’ll put a Lethal Weapon in his mouth & cyanide capsule get swallow


Coo verse max. Opener was hella clever as well as the epiphany bar was sick & clever as well. I almost quoted circadian rhythms but felt better if you incorporated a tie-in in reference to 'around' rather than rounds, although I see the gunplay angle you took towards. In other words, I felt the bar lacked something extra.

I personally like body verse. Idk if I like it was movie themed but the punches were wrote great for the most. Inside a 9 cap'll get swallowed/lethal weapon wp was sick imo. As well as the Friday punches. All I preference & what people can relate to here tho.

Nice battle guys but I got body here

Mvgt- Body

Gd read.

[White LGI]

That dumping on the side of the house bar was fire....the closer was dope as well...body had a lot of solid concepts and I didn't really see any true misses

Max just wasn't it for me...shit like the close knit family and the fresh to death was ehhhh...he had more misses than steph curry last night....I just feel body took it to him..

Vote Body

[josh s]

Dope battle guys. All around enjoyed the read on both sides. Circadian rhythm line was smooth and close nit flip props. Snatch had a couple bangers and a couple misses. I liked every movie flip he had. Versatility maybe lacking for snatch but that’s a lite critique. I don’t have time for further break down but I think body got this with a fire drop. Max keep bringing this level of material shit was also dope

V snatch

[Zaddy]

BODYSNATCHER WINS