03-18-2019, 10:40 AM | #1 |
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Week 1: Destroyer vs Dynamicz Dyna WINS
Week One
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03-21-2019, 07:31 AM | #2 |
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maaaan. you’s a bitch to me & its always been evident
only one saying Nambia real threat, is our dumb fucking president |
03-21-2019, 01:37 PM | #3 |
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I can't relate... styles get out of date they start to hate
Contradict the gun in this bar - side shots leave ya hypocritical state
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03-21-2019, 06:24 PM | #4 |
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Close one cuz both go hard Destroyer a lil bit more creative I'll give it to Destroyer
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03-22-2019, 05:40 AM | #5 |
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i didnt like the 'Nam' use tbh with it being the middle of his name but still has Des here
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03-22-2019, 02:34 PM | #6 |
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Nam lolol... the bar was cool Des but Idk about the nameplay. The bar, in general, is cool but the n/p was bad. I thought Dyn bar was well constructed and had a bit more sting for a 1-2 punch. Des kinda just said Dyn isn't a threat while Dyn went for the jugular
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03-22-2019, 02:49 PM | #7 |
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Des had a dope concept and everything was good until the ending of the second line, “our dumb fucking president” wasn’t the best. DynamiCz had a nice bar all around with solid wordplay and gets this one by a decent margin.
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03-24-2019, 08:37 AM | #8 |
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I thought both had merit. I appreciated does using his middle part of name for a name flip to keep a name flip on dy Actually fresh. Bar was fine but it wasn't anything huge
Body had a really clever gun bar and the wordplay was creative but I still not sure how I feel about it working both ways. But definitely the more impactful. Votes dyn |
03-24-2019, 08:42 AM | #9 |
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03-24-2019, 09:30 AM | #10 |
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I’ll get right on that, @Flow
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03-24-2019, 09:51 AM | #11 |
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Des bar was cool but calling him nam don’t work. Dyns bar was dope...
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03-24-2019, 10:31 AM | #12 |
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i wanna give it to des bc his was smoother but using the middle part of dyna’s name just didn’t hit for me
edit: dyn was cool, hypocritical felt like it was missing an “in” for it to be flawless tho v Dyn
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03-24-2019, 10:59 AM | #13 |
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Vote Dyn
i liked both bars, i think using Nam as the np just takes a little away from it for me |
03-24-2019, 11:17 AM | #14 |
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Des I like the concept. Probably resonates with me cus the president dumb af lol. Anyway I like the precise wording. On the other side, I’m not feeling the Nam flip. Is one syllable in the middle of his name - no one would call him that. Second, the wording is clean for the Nam be a real threat meaning, but the wordplay not clean for the Nambia meaning (it would be missing a syllable - so like Nambia is a real...whatever it’s hard to explain). Anyways like the bar overall but that’s the critique with it.
Dy, I liked your concept as wel. Contradict this gun was was good tie in. I like be Hypocritical wordplay as well but it got a very similar issue as Des’s bar in that it works good fine for one meaning but wording is choppy for the other. So the hypocritical/contradict meaning is fine, but the hip a critical is like missing a syllable or you coulda used “leave your hip in a...” and it would work fine. Overall, two good concepts, but wording ain’t the cleanest. I think the wordplay in both had the same issue but Des had another glaring issue with his bar being a Nam flip. I liked both bars but I think Dy edged it. Mvgt dynamicz |
03-24-2019, 02:40 PM | #15 |
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Well that turned around quickly.
7 2 Dyna wins |
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