07-22-2018, 07:46 PM | #1 |
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Witty vs brokenhal0 - WITTY WINS
The Summer Classic ‘18 The Premier Text Battling Tournament @Witty @brokenhal0 Rules Due Dates:
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07-23-2018, 12:12 PM | #2 |
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Hi.
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07-24-2018, 12:02 AM | #3 |
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07-25-2018, 02:24 AM | #4 |
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how can I take this serious and fucking battle you
you're the type of rapper dude who calls the cops when someone harasses you your gimmick? I see right through it another sly fox living the lime life head so far up his own ass darkness becomes hindsight im wise right?! witty in my own way.?! your girls tittys squirt OJ when I lick them skitzo vision break in your house piss in your kitchen this tradition you lack the inner vision ill slap you out this dimension Last edited by brokenhal0; 07-25-2018 at 06:27 PM. |
07-26-2018, 08:19 AM | #5 |
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Yo I'll fight you wherever, whenever...
One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not Quick key, typed this shit straight out...I got one more thing to say now, then I'm gone This diode's thread...one hit from a pipe to your throat'll leave you laid out on your lawn
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07-26-2018, 12:41 PM | #6 |
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Broken I like that you had an unconventional rhyme scheme.
Witty the launch bar was nice. Rest was standard and did just enough for win. Witty
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07-26-2018, 01:11 PM | #7 |
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LOL Brokenhal0 far out his comfort zone here but I did kinda like darkness as hindsight for some reason
Witty got him though with a medley of current event and board relevant bars Way too creative for young BH here
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07-26-2018, 01:40 PM | #8 |
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Witty had some good stuff in here, well enough to take the W. I want to help BH and feed his verse but i know it's just a troll so w/e. Darkness become hindsight was funny
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07-26-2018, 03:35 PM | #9 |
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another sly fox living the lime life
head so far up his own ass darkness becomes hindsight ^lol that's actually pretty decent imo vs. U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not cool verse... opener flip was chuckle worthy as well but still a bit of an older/overdone concept... Witty got this. |
07-26-2018, 04:25 PM | #10 |
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Yeah that Hindsite line made me chuckle a bit, it was good lol
Other than that halo didn’t have anything else. Felt more like a swag and flow piece really, no pressure niches at all tbh, witty Seemed to mimic halos approach but he sprinkled in a few nice Jabs to take this easily Witty |
07-26-2018, 04:49 PM | #11 |
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Hindsight was nice to me, only bar that stood out like that, verse flowed cool just really no direct jabs or punches towards your partner
------- One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples Swing concept been done a lot, cool tho U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy Lmao funny as hell this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere Light, wording a bit stretched on the second bar, overall miss me for me Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not Coo here again Quick key, typed this shit straight out...I got one more thing to say now, then I'm gone This diode's thread...one hit from a pipe to your throat'll leave you laid out on your lawn Ehh closer, decent at best Witty brought just enough to this battle to take the win. Props to both here! V-Witty
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Witty One blow to the temple, you'll buckle, get bent with the knuckles Cuz I'm always down to swing like adventurous couples decent s&f U fell off...now ur wording sucks and schemes are choppy rookie Should be friends with Muff cuz u getting sloppy, pussy lol this pistol a launchpad...lemme explain to u battle queers Cuz I'll put it under ur chin, count to 10...and send ur brains to the stratosphere corny Nah fuck guns...I use tools, don't get as much as a kick off of a Glock So if I'm Raizen that hammer, u getting smashed whether ur kids watching or not coo Quick key, typed this shit straight out...I got one more thing to say now, then I'm gone This diode's thread...one hit from a pipe to your throat'll leave you laid out on your lawn nah, weak disc. punch 2 gd punches 1 jab 2 misses v/witty if the bar count even matches...
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