Fukital ODs

DMS · 10-06-2018, 05:24 PM

Don’t wanna write a verse for me huh? Okay, now you’ll see the consequences.

Dragon, the flames a-lighted, don’t step to the cave of giants
Unless you happen to be David and you came to slay Goliath.
Thinking you passed unnoticed when in reality you damned n hopeless
So screw ya rap of poet’s when I come with Abaddon’s locust,
If you’re hopin’ for core support
You’ll be torn open with the 4 horse men’s swords
“ I’m Dragon, my vocab and subject matters pitiful.
I face the behemoth and leviathan in an battle ritual.
Every verse sounds the same because they basically are.
I battled a demon once and it gave me a scar.”

I’m lighting in a bottle, you’re barely trapping some sparks.
For my amusement, I’ll have this animal farmed.
This pig rules the world, I’ll put your pride attached with a cart,
I’ll have you bakin’ in the pan with some spice,
Have you graspin’ for life then I go ham in your arse.

Cereal · 10-08-2018, 04:09 PM

aite good start, def needs more to it but concept is def there

10-06-2018, 05:24 PM	#1
DMS DMS—Diddled My Stick Join Date: May 2018 Posts: 1,104 Rep Power: 0	Fukital ODs Don’t wanna write a verse for me huh? Okay, now you’ll see the consequences. Dragon, the flames a-lighted, don’t step to the cave of giants Unless you happen to be David and you came to slay Goliath. Thinking you passed unnoticed when in reality you damned n hopeless So screw ya rap of poet’s when I come with Abaddon’s locust, If you’re hopin’ for core support You’ll be torn open with the 4 horse men’s swords “ I’m Dragon, my vocab and subject matters pitiful. I face the behemoth and leviathan in an battle ritual. Every verse sounds the same because they basically are. I battled a demon once and it gave me a scar.” I’m lighting in a bottle, you’re barely trapping some sparks. For my amusement, I’ll have this animal farmed. This pig rules the world, I’ll put your pride attached with a cart, I’ll have you bakin’ in the pan with some spice, Have you graspin’ for life then I go ham in your arse. Last edited by DMS; 10-09-2018 at 11:28 PM.

10-08-2018, 04:09 PM	#2
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 820 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312296	aite good start, def needs more to it but concept is def there