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Old 06-10-2018, 07:59 PM   #1
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Old 06-10-2018, 08:18 PM   #2
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smooth. very nice multis. you still got it Witty
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Old 06-10-2018, 08:19 PM   #3
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Old 06-11-2018, 07:27 AM   #4
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I’ve been enjoying your recent drops. It’s a cool style.
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Old 06-11-2018, 03:32 PM   #6
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"Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go"

this wassssss smooooth especially after the nonstop multis bfore. well played, Fox.
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Old 06-12-2018, 11:57 PM   #7
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Old 06-13-2018, 04:54 PM   #8
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Yeah enjoyed this very nice man good drop...
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Old 06-14-2018, 04:54 PM   #9
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Old 06-14-2018, 10:05 PM   #10
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You can do better. This was ok witty, love you
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Old 06-15-2018, 05:41 AM   #11
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Ope. Nice work witty old boy. Do it more
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Old 06-15-2018, 06:46 PM   #12
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Dang I aspire to be like this lol
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Gotta love how I structure shit the same way yet get hated on...

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Anyhoo, this was tight...kept shit short & sweet.

Content was nice man, had this real suck me into shit vibe with it...I liked it.

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Old 06-29-2018, 06:21 PM   #14
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Old 06-30-2018, 03:16 AM   #15
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^^What he said...
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Archaea brought across by asteroid belts accompanied by acid base acetate,
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Old 07-14-2018, 10:39 PM   #17
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Old 07-15-2018, 04:19 PM   #18
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I was reading some old verses and came across 'acid base acetate' in zygote's alpha beta. Not a big deal, you either saw it and it was planted subconsciously in your mind, or it's a coincidence.

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Old 09-19-2018, 04:32 PM   #19
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Decent but I've read better from you Witty.
More focused on rhyming instead of saying anything cohesive.
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Old 09-21-2018, 02:23 AM   #20
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You know me if you’ve seen how I write— sometimes I get so caught up on rhymes and it takes me away. I been gettin back into it recently. Like they said, I’ve seen you write better shit but that doesn’t make this bad by any means. The beginning was my favorite cuz you not only had multis, but you threw some imagery and more description in the opening lines moreso than the end. But I always enjoy reading your shit
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