ayo...so....went out the other nite.... - Page 2

Eviscerate · 02-04-2014, 03:42 PM

now that's a wall of text.

Orc · 02-04-2014, 03:57 PM

3-0. wont watch

Ghost1 · 02-04-2014, 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ...the Munster

10/10? no sir

I give this story a B- for the parts that were capped out

Were those the only parts u read? Lol.

I admit this was a bit longwinded.....still trying to hone my craft here guys.

namix · 02-04-2014, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

Were those the only parts u read? Lol.

I admit this was a bit longwinded.....still trying to hone my craft here guys.

they are judging the story teller, not the story.

you never claimed to be a storyteller yo, you have good stories.

three separate ellipses in a title, as well as the words "ayo...", "so...", and "went out the other nite...", in my humble opinion, give you a get out of jail** card for being judged on storytelling length ;p

im long winded as fuck, clearly, so just defending you in a long winded fashion

Certain · 02-04-2014, 04:59 PM

You should write these in rhymes. This would have made for an excellent topical league verse.

02-04-2014, 05:31 PM

Lmao @ This

So you blacked out. Did your ass hurt when you woke up?

Ghost1 · 02-04-2014, 06:05 PM

That wasnt funny?

An word to namix.....id say greeds post illustrated ur point pretty well

I love to write......this site has shown me i can do that without rhyming and get as much satisfaction from it....if not more.....tho not great for text....it makes me happy.

namix · 02-04-2014, 06:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

That wasnt funny?

An word to namix.....id say greeds post illustrated ur point pretty well

I love to write......this site has shown me i can do that without rhyming and get as much satisfaction from it....if not more.....tho not great for text....it makes me happy.

well lets keep that on the DL lol

i do think you are one of the few dudes that makes sense to stand on a table and say something at a party though, and that's saying a lot...

as an side though, diode and i both know what you're doing... and you should stop for the betterment of text lol

Ghost1 · 02-04-2014, 06:24 PM

Im but a simple man, friend. Nothing more.

Just Write · 02-04-2014, 06:27 PM

Yo bags could you summarize that long as fuck post my dude

namix · 02-04-2014, 06:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

Im but a simple man, friend. Nothing more.

oh bro, i was just joking... we share the same interests lol

CtrlF4 · 02-04-2014, 06:39 PM

On the phone this shit looks extra long...i can't read this...somebody sum it up

Certain · 02-04-2014, 06:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Certain

I read it all.

Cliff's notes: Bags asked to see his friend's penis while they were at a gay bar.

CtrlF4 · 02-04-2014, 07:16 PM

Um tf

Dope girl · 02-04-2014, 07:24 PM

We are working on wedding between this year & next year.

Anyway, ah/

CtrlF4 · 02-05-2014, 12:35 AM

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Originally Posted by QueenHoney

We are working on wedding between this year & next year.

Anyway, ah/

You getting married and putting out twerk videos?

02-04-2014, 03:42 PM	#21
Eviscerate stokely carmichael of rap Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 145 Rep Power: 3155071	now that's a wall of text. __________________ i used to do that here..

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Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	Yo bags could you summarize that long as fuck post my dude __________________

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02-04-2014, 05:31 PM	#26
Sicc Guest Posts: n/a	Lmao @ This So you blacked out. Did your ass hurt when you woke up?

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CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351059	On the phone this shit looks extra long...i can't read this...somebody sum it up

02-04-2014, 07:16 PM	#34
CtrlF4 ....Hakuna Matata.... Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 11-11 Rep Power: 3351059	Um tf

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Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,705 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	We are working on wedding between this year & next year. Anyway, ah/