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Old 10-08-2018, 08:14 PM   #1
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NWL:Season I: Week IV



Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30

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SWAG N FLOW: YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!

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Old 10-08-2018, 11:46 PM   #2
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Old 10-11-2018, 02:48 PM   #3
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A Spartan with a Martian flow, parking with an arc in the arctic pole causing my rims watch & car to glow.
Regarded as GOAT while I garnish thrones, armored with a retarded flow that could turn toxic mold to pots of gold.
My Heisenberg tactics slick, high tech guns hang out the back of whips.
The galactic pacifist passionate & tactics sick.
mask equipped, Masochist. a mass effect from massive hits outta bamboo spliffs by accident,
Watch the man move swift.. unanimous, u can’t touch this, stats on the abacus, immaculate strategist..
hopped out the closet door.. proper like I’m roger moore,
thousands on the counter floor, pockets worth a 1000 more.
Exotic whores from Argentina, Wifing Latina Queen’s from the Philippines named Angelina.
Fine & Dine with the Royal Highness of
Egypt & godly spirits from times of Eden. Lenox on a higher legion than swine & heathens,
god said im the prophet & the prophecy lies beneath him.
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Old 10-13-2018, 05:05 AM   #4
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I am an evil demon scheming to leave him bewildered in pieces
Considered deceased cus my breathing is so cold that it freezes
Even as a fetus i was immune to diseases, escaped and took hold of my freedom
Toddlers play with adhesive whilst I put world domination plans into a thesis

But you wanna fuck with this kid?
Yo,

The lines that Im spittin are linen lined with the wit sewn into the rhythm
No sense in his writtens, I'm a conceptual snake about to devour this kitten
My hitting aint nice, Ill end your life then go up a notch
N watch as I put the Rocks to your Spirit like I'm serving up Scotch
Steal the K from Kurrupt, so you know it's about to 'urrupt'
Spray the chopper round after round til the Dog Pound sounds like some pups
Gordon Ramsay of rhymes, I got the Beats chopped into Thyme
I put the Mac to the cheese and then steal the Dough from the pie
The rapture is nigh, I'm the almighty out performin drive bys
Your body such light work yours floats up when I light up the sky
Cus shiiiit I'm the realest, fearless when i target the best
With a bark worse then Barc barking and a bite worse then Creds
Your terrible, beat you In a silent battle never ever wasting a breath
Even an artist draws me grabbing the treble clef an preceding to beat you to death
So what's left, but provide me with my rightful title..
Shits not a final but I'm a spiteful titan that won on arrival
I have no rivals shit this face tat wanna be gat wielding kids already an idol
I wrote this on notepad headed 'winning recital' yours prolly was filed under Untitled
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Old 10-14-2018, 09:27 PM   #5
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A Spartan with a Martian flow, parking with an arc in the arctic pole causing my rims watch & car to glow.
Regarded as GOAT while I garnish thrones, armored with a retarded flow that could turn toxic mold to pots of gold.
This was dopeness
My Heisenberg tactics slick, high tech guns hang out the back of whips.
The galactic pacifist passionate & tactics sick.
mask equipped, Masochist. a mass effect from massive hits outta bamboo spliffs by accident,
Watch the man move swift.. unanimous, u can’t touch this, stats on the abacus, immaculate strategist..
Tight
hopped out the closet door.. proper like I’m roger moore,
thousands on the counter floor, pockets worth a 1000 more.
If u didn't use thousands twice here it woulda been better but still a cool bar
Exotic whores from Argentina, Wifing Latina Queen’s from the Philippines named Angelina.
Fine & Dine with the Royal Highness of
Egypt & godly spirits from times of Eden. Lenox on a higher legion than swine & heathens,
god said im the prophet & the prophecy lies beneath him.

Dope way to finish it. Lenny got bars fr.
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I am an evil demon scheming to leave him bewildered in pieces
Considered deceased cus my breathing is so cold that it freezes
Even as a fetus i was immune to diseases, escaped and took hold of my freedom
Toddlers play with adhesive whilst I put world domination plans into a thesis

Dope

But you wanna fuck with this kid?
Yo,

The lines that Im spittin are linen lined with the wit sewn into the rhythm
No sense in his writtens, I'm a conceptual snake about to devour this kitten
I digg this
My hitting aint nice, Ill end your life then go up a notch
N watch as I put the Rocks to your Spirit like I'm serving up Scotch
Eh not feeling as much for a S&F battle
Steal the K from Kurrupt, so you know it's about to 'urrupt'
Spray the chopper round after round til the Dog Pound sounds like some pups
Cool, cool
Gordon Ramsay of rhymes, I got the Beats chopped into Thyme
I put the Mac to the cheese and then steal the Dough from the pie
Lol cool
The rapture is nigh, I'm the almighty out performin drive bys
Your body such light work yours floats up when I light up the sky
This was cool. Kinda punch-y but i dig the swag
Cus shiiiit I'm the realest, fearless when i target the best
With a bark worse then Barc barking and a bite worse then Creds
Lol
Your terrible, beat you In a silent battle never ever wasting a breath
Even an artist draws me grabbing the treble clef an preceding to beat you to death
Not feeling as much
So what's left, but provide me with my rightful title..
Shits not a final but I'm a spiteful titan that won on arrival
Decent
I have no rivals shit this face tat wanna be gat wielding kids already an idol
I wrote this on notepad headed 'winning recital' yours prolly was filed under Untitled
Nahh
I'm kinda leaning more towards Lenny here.

Flow u had some cool bars but I felt like u dissed him a lil more than u should've

I thought Lenny came with some dope swag and flow here.

Some of the S&F from Flow was a lil too simple to take this
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Old 10-14-2018, 11:20 PM   #6
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Lenox: The first bar was dope. The internal rhyming and just the way it came out is the scheme that I use personally. So I related to that. Your second bar was ok. I didn't like the fact you used "tactics sick and tactics slick". Tactics twice was a turn off. Other than that this is my type of fucking rhyme. The way the syllables flowed and how it wasn't off the grid so to speak and it related to the topic flow/swag I think you killed this to be honest. The flow and the swag was on point. I actually really liked this this verse. Dope drop.

Flow: Opening couple bars were good but the execution was a bit off. Tiny shit like adding a letter and losing a letter. The thyme/ pie bar was pretty good. After that I liked your creativeness but the flow tended to be a bit choppy. You had a good idea when it came to the swag part but I felt you took it more as a battle type thing. I think it might have hurt your flow a bit as well.. Still a decent verse tho.

MVGT: Lenox...His verse was just more crisp when it came to flow and swag. Flow showed up but I feel after his first bar it kinda slowed down. but I feel Lenox got him on this..nice battle tho props to both
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Old 10-15-2018, 07:17 PM   #7
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Lenox had something along the lines of what I fuck with, just fitting a bunch of rhymes into a brick of shit talking. Flow had more of a battle verse type two line attack lines with a few extra rhymes. The accent doesn't help either for me in a SnF battle, some of the slants made me go back to read.

Len had a couple cool lines here and a decent vibe throughout nothing felt out of place. I liked this piece I feel like you could do good if this became a bigger thing. SnF battles are some of my favorite

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