Dominate vs Beyond - DOMINATE WINS

[Orc]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY, votes are due SUNDAY
• [I]Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are at the mercy of your opponent

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:

• Must vote on 4 battles and POST your links in YOUR THREAD
• You will LOSE if you don't post all 4 voting links.
  You will not like the punishment, so just vote.

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
  you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Dominate @Beyond

[Dominate]

Dope. G/l brother

[Beyond]

You too my mans

[Dominate]

Going 16... almost done but the Australian version of the Super Bowl is about to start & there will be festivities after so I'll prolly be a little late. I can post 12 if u don't wanna wait. 16'd be better tho

[Beyond]

16 is coo

Post whenever, no idea what time it is over there lol

[Dominate]

Verse sent. I ended up going 20... hope that's cool. If not I told Orc what to cut

[Beyond]

20 sent

g'luck

[StarFaggot]

@Beyond send me ur verse. Orc's comp is down. I'll post both and will be on all day.

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Beyond

You will ONLY meet the ‘right’ girl if you go out and find her. Sitting on your fat ass all day playing text battler wont get you your ‘soul mate’

Most ironic statement ever. Every retort from this dork’s clumsy
Forget black, - that’s the pot calling the kettle a coon ass nigger porch monkey
I gotta rofl @ this guy’s gall. He lives alone & keeps behind walls
The day James Bond w/ another human is the same day we’d see the Sky Fall
I’m Gearing for a win. U’ll drop some wack shit, get beat, then mope & mourn
Ur style needs a change of pace, & u need to come up to speed w/ social norms
I’ll send my good squad at this Punjab. He can’t even figure out an average diss
Bey wrap rags around his head but can’t wrap his head around how to rag on kids
That’s some faggot shit - only girl he talking with is his mama
If he got a Dhal on the side it’s accompanying his chicken Masala
Talm bout he’s an alpha who’d Procreate? That’s such a front in discussion
No-one considers Baking … this virgin will NEVER put a bun in the oven
U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours
& one punch will send you flying. A nerd ain’t hurtin’ Dom in fights
I’ll have u touching the face of God like how you’d learn what Ron looks like
In real life ur depressed so u Obsess when u turn to texting B
You got a one-track mind - it plays ‘everybody hurts’ incessantly
4 links is Orc’s condition to allow me to retain all the votes
U got a condition too. I hope it deteriorates rapidly & leaves u blind & unable to post

[Beyond]

I'm all about prenups. Ain't no bitch gon creep my crib.
I never Gamble with the Cunt while u'd lose ur spot to em like Rican did.
Fuck Oz faggot. I'll track u down by hunting at centerview.
I kill for Sport. I'll suffocate u in ur own carpet so that Rugby the end of u.
He's lame people. No muscle mass so he remains feeble.
He's not James equel cuz even his BBC lovin girl don't think Shane diesel.
I'm so dope it's funny. U always been #2 textin u minion.
I'm so sick I'm dyinggg. & I'd only defer to u if I wanted a Second Opinion.
This is a great match up, but ur gettin damaged u creep.
By Law they'll be thinkin u got Blue Out worse than that battle this week.
Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.
I wouldn't record this beating cuz u'll be rotting & dead.
In fact, I'd Caution Tape….…would be wrapped round ur body instead.
I'll shatter ur body before ur dyin words are captured.
Bones won't just be Breaking Bad, they'll be the Heisenberg of fractures.
U got burnt in the Classic. U were walkin out last guy.
Ur just an Aussie that tried to be the Victor & I ain't talkin bout Masaii.
I hit it for hours & then spray my kids on the bitch's gums.
While your kids are so premature they come out lookin like Strikta's son.

[Neighbor]

Originally Posted by Dominate

Most ironic statement ever. Every retort from this dork’s clumsy
Forget black, - that’s the pot calling the kettle a coon ass nigger porch monkey
I gotta rofl @ this guy’s gall. He lives alone & keeps behind walls
The day James Bond w/ another human is the same day we’d see the Sky Fall
I’ll send my good squad at this Punjab. He can’t even figure out an average diss
Bey wrap rags around his head but can’t wrap his head around how to rag on kids
Talm bout he’s an alpha who’d Procreate? That’s such a front in discussion
No-one considers Baking … this virgin will NEVER put a bun in the oven
U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours
& one punch will send you flying. A nerd ain’t hurtin’ Dom in fights
I’ll have u touching the face of God like how you’d learn what Ron looks like
In real life ur depressed so u Obsess when u turn to texting B
You got a one-track mind - it plays ‘everybody hurts’ incessantly

Originally Posted by Beyond

I'm all about prenups. Ain't no bitch gon creep my crib.
I never Gamble with the Cunt while u'd lose ur spot to em like Rican did.
Fuck Oz faggot. I'll track u down by hunting at centerview.
I kill for Sport. I'll suffocate u in ur own carpet so that Rugby the end of u.
He's lame people. No muscle mass so he remains feeble.
He's not James equel cuz even his BBC lovin girl don't think Shane diesel.
Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.
I'll shatter ur body before ur dyin words are captured.
Bones won't just be Breaking Bad, they'll be the Heisenberg of fractures.
U got burnt in the Classic. U were walkin out last guy.
Ur just an Aussie that tried to be the Victor & I ain't talkin bout Masaii.
I hit it for hours & then spray my kids on the bitch's gums.
While your kids are so premature they come out lookin like Strikta's son.

Wow, BOTW for sure. I was really looking forward to this one & you two didn't disappoint.

I was a little picky w/ the quotes, cuz neither of you really had any huge misses. The punch I highlighted from Dom was hilarious & creative since Bey's seen (lol) literally hundreds of eye lines, so when one gets quoted, you know it has to be fresh & harsh as fuck. Beyond's last bar was possibly the meanest I've ever read, but I still had to give it shine for the sheer disrespect & relevance. Overall, you both came real solid.. I think Dom had the personal edge w/ more direct connections, while Bey was more creative, albeit a little obscure, w/ his lines.. It's hard for me to call cuz I think Dominate really got at young James here, but Bey's punches were real innovative while still being relevant

I read thru it a couple more times, & I gotta roll w/ Dom here for just having better execution & slightly stronger misses. That's really the deciding factor for me.. could go either way

Great battle & props to both of you, you're both beasts & in my Top 5

v/ Dominate

[KwaL!ty]

I’m Gearing for a win. U’ll drop some wack shit, get beat, then mope & mourn
Ur style needs a change of pace, & u need to come up to speed w/ social norms
Talm bout he’s an alpha who’d Procreate? That’s such a front in discussion
No-one considers Baking … this virgin will NEVER put a bun in the oven
U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours
& one punch will send you flying. A nerd ain’t hurtin’ Dom in fights
I’ll have u touching the face of God like how you’d learn what Ron looks like
In real life ur depressed so u Obsess when u turn to texting B
You got a one-track mind - it plays ‘everybody hurts’ incessantly



vs



I'm all about prenups. Ain't no bitch gon creep my crib.
I never Gamble with the Cunt while u'd lose ur spot to em like Rican did.
Fuck Oz faggot. I'll track u down by hunting at centerview.
I kill for Sport. I'll suffocate u in ur own carpet so that Rugby the end of u.
This is a great match up, but ur gettin damaged u creep.
By Law they'll be thinkin u got Blue Out worse than that battle this week.
Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.
I'll shatter ur body before ur dyin words are captured.
Bones won't just be Breaking Bad, they'll be the Heisenberg of fractures
I hit it for hours & then spray my kids on the bitch's gums.
While your kids are so premature they come out lookin like Strikta's son.


Vote- beyond hella close battle tho.

[R!canTheoryz]

I’m Gearing for a win. U’ll drop some wack shit, get beat, then mope & mourn
Ur style needs a change of pace, & u need to come up to speed w/ social norms
Talm bout he’s an alpha who’d Procreate? That’s such a front in discussion
No-one considers Baking … this virgin will NEVER put a bun in the oven
U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours
dope hit here wordplay & punch connection nice hit
In real life ur depressed so u Obsess when u turn to texting B
You got a one-track mind - it plays ‘everybody hurts’ incessantly



vs



I'm all about prenups. Ain't no bitch gon creep my crib.
I never Gamble with the Cunt while u'd lose ur spot to em like Rican did.
Good reference. Nice punch
Fuck Oz faggot. I'll track u down by hunting at centerview.
I kill for Sport. I'll suffocate u in ur own carpet so that Rugby the end of u.
This is a great match up, but ur gettin damaged u creep.
By Law they'll be thinkin u got Blue Out worse than that battle this week.
Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.
dope Nameplay ^
I'll shatter ur body before ur dyin words are captured.
Bones won't just be Breaking Bad, they'll be the Heisenberg of fractures
I hit it for hours & then spray my kids on the bitch's gums.
While your kids are so premature they come out lookin like Strikta's son.
Wow Dope Harsh Punch Here

Overall Vote - this was a dope ass battle & could go either way they both came extremely on point this week Beyonds verse was dope wordplay and execution on point dominate was clever with his set ups & execution also This is def BOTW. After reading three times imma go with beyond slightly I felt like he was slightly more polished n witty here dominate I almost quoted the face of god line the bar went Completely over my head idk I might of missed something lol. But dope battle props on both But My vote goes to: Beyond

[Unfukwitable]

I’ll send my good squad at this Punjab. He can’t even figure out an average diss
Bey wrap rags around his head but can’t wrap his head around how to rag on kids

U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours

vs.

Fuck Oz faggot. I'll track u down by hunting at centerview.
I kill for Sport. I'll suffocate u in ur own carpet so that Rugby the end of u.

Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.

I felt one battle had the dopest line of the battle but the other had slightly better lines overall v/ Beyond

[Allen Knight]

I gotta rofl @ this guy’s gall. He lives alone & keeps behind walls
The day James Bond w/ another human is the same day we’d see the Sky Fall
I’ll send my good squad at this Punjab. He can’t even figure out an average diss
Bey wrap rags around his head but can’t wrap his head around how to rag on kids
Talm bout he’s an alpha who’d Procreate? That’s such a front in discussion
No-one considers Baking … this virgin will NEVER put a bun in the oven
U got limited optical powers, & far as women ur prospects have soured
Dawg your idea of a ‘make out’ session is squinting at objects for hours
& one punch will send you flying. A nerd ain’t hurtin’ Dom in fights
I’ll have u touching the face of God like how you’d learn what Ron looks like

vs

He's lame people. No muscle mass so he remains feeble.
He's not James equel cuz even his BBC lovin girl don't think Shane diesel.
Nice tag team u fag queen. Ur my favorite rap qroupie.
It's sad how u Con Aer into carrying u worse than Cage in that movie.
I'll shatter ur body before ur dyin words are captured.
Bones won't just be Breaking Bad, they'll be the Heisenberg of fractures.
U got burnt in the Classic. U were walkin out last guy.
Ur just an Aussie that tried to be the Victor & I ain't talkin bout Masaii.
I hit it for hours & then spray my kids on the bitch's gums.
While your kids are so premature they come out lookin like Strikta's son.


v/dom, shiiit this battle was fire, both dropped dope, had to reread 2x mad close tbh i think dom, had acouple more heavy hitters here, even quotes but doms was a little stronger. bey strikta line was harsh as fuck lol damn doms make out session was sick ha, dope read yah'll props on this.

[ill nik-A]

Bey IMO got this

[Trag.]

pretty good battled for a wk 2


liked Doms make out sessions line, I had a concept like that before but this one was worded nice and relevant.

Bey had the strikta line and i liked a few others conair, gamble, heisenberg

good battle, but i have bey.. little more original, imo

[Destroyer]

I got opener, make out session, face of god, REM
vs
rugby, caution tape, con aer

I dunno, I got dom edging this with some funny creative shit
bey's verse read like a mad libs verse, fill in the blank shit
it just didn't excite me, I've seen way better from James

v/dom

[Cashius]

Sky fall, Dhal, baking, make out, one track mind

Vs.

Rugby, premature

I thought Dom had verse of the week. There wasn't much I didn't like. Wasn't a huge fan of the rag line, tho. I didn't think Bey had any huge misses, but there wasn't much that really stood out. I think it was lackluster compared to what he normally does. Still would've beat most other verses but Dom was too strong here.

Dom.

[Sintro]

I got bey. Both had 4 punches I thought were dope but IMO doms James Bond/sky fall was worded pretty weak n a few others wording seamed rushed so they weren't effective either. Bey was more solid. Vote beyond