10-09-2020, 01:45 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 2: Ajax 0-0 VS Slecht 0-0 AJAX WINS VIA NS/ OPEN FOR FEED
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10-10-2020, 11:45 PM | #2 |
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10-12-2020, 02:01 PM | #3 |
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Checking in.
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10-13-2020, 11:39 PM | #4 |
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Extension. I'll post later tonight, but it won't be before midnight.
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10-14-2020, 12:51 AM | #5 |
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Slecht?
WTF. That sounds just so lame… I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name. With you, they lowered the bar… You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are. You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance. You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses. For me, losing’s an impossible task; Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks. Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins… Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!” This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic.. While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics. It’s obvious you lack Sound poise… My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise. Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system. I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm… Goodnight.
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10-14-2020, 01:06 PM | #6 |
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Nice verse.
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10-14-2020, 03:48 PM | #7 |
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Welcome back @Ajax
Nice verse. Especially liked Moonlight as MC, Multiverses and best you w/ generics. Solid throughout and everything worded nicely.
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10-14-2020, 05:46 PM | #8 |
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Dope verse. I thought the ending was fire.
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10-14-2020, 10:39 PM | #9 |
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Jesus. Welcome back, dude.
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10-14-2020, 11:40 PM | #10 |
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Wording and punctuation is too smooth. Couple ideas that have Ben done before but it doesn’t matter because you put them together nicely. Closer was swag and the oxygen mask shit is top 10 easy this week.
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10-15-2020, 05:52 AM | #11 |
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I enjoy the delivery and the rhyming you come with. Swag can carry a verse a long way and you’re a master at executing it to maximise the effect. Multi-verse line was insane imo. Resonate/sound poise/background noise - executed perfectly. Dope line. Nice verse all round.
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10-15-2020, 03:33 PM | #13 |
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WTF. That sounds just so lame…
I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name. lol With you, they lowered the bar… You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are. makes sense You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance. You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses. okk For me, losing’s an impossible task; Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks. damn Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins… Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!” ehh This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic.. While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics. statementish? It’s obvious you lack Sound poise… My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise. cool Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system. I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm… okk coool v/ ajax |
10-15-2020, 05:43 PM | #14 |
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[QUOTE=Ajax;788968]Slecht?
WTF. That sounds just so lame… I’m pronounced champion when I sign up. Kid can’t even pronounce his own name. Best bar about his weird name I've seen With you, they lowered the bar… You’ll get beat with generics tonight. Sorry.. I legit don’t know who you are. statement You’ll still lose in an instant — They’ll hear the booms in the distance. You moonlight as an MC… We ALL see lunar eclipses. okay, more swagger than a punch right up until thr end though so I wasn't all about it For me, losing’s an impossible task; Your fam’ll be ‘passing out flyers’ like plane-crashing passengers without oxygen masks. punch is fine but the setup seems to only exist to rhyme Beating me’s a bigger fluke than Blue Whale fins… Try to be fly; Hit a true tail spin.. with your lady yelling “YOU CAN’T WIN!” yeah that's rhyming This.. innocent Dude is lost in a panic.. While.. physicists choose my multi-verses as definitive proof of quantum mechanics. lmao @ multi verses after the last bar It’s obvious you lack Sound poise… My verses resonate deeply with people; your’s are just background noise. connections there, it's cool Best to act the victim. One word from me - Crash the system. I won’t vote this season once and will still top the league algorithm… dope Al Gore rhythm bar Statementy yeah I feel you. I hate writing for people I don't know. Some cool ideas in there |
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