05-02-2014, 12:42 PM | #1 | |
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performed last night for the first time in a long while
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05-02-2014, 12:57 PM | #2 |
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This makes me never want to read anything in public, ever. Nothing against you, but all that lyrical dexterity and skill is largely lost on a crowd.
This was really good, Oats. Last edited by dull boy; 05-02-2014 at 01:29 PM. |
05-02-2014, 12:59 PM | #3 |
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What kind of stuff do other people perform there? Ya did good.
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05-02-2014, 01:29 PM | #4 |
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Appreciate it. It's almost entirely spoken word style. A few people play instruments and sing. Nobody else really rhymes.
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05-02-2014, 01:55 PM | #5 |
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Maybe slow down the delivery.
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05-02-2014, 01:57 PM | #6 |
Mad fucking dangerous.
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05-02-2014, 02:26 PM | #7 |
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This was good.
Seems way late in the night though nobody want to decipher
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05-02-2014, 02:28 PM | #8 |
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So dope
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05-02-2014, 02:33 PM | #9 |
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In the past I slowed it down and didn't enjoy the performance of it as much. I always score particularly low with the judges anyway so I'd rather spit in a more fun way.
@Aero shit was 11:00 by the time I got up. I was super tired, along with who was left of the audience.
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05-02-2014, 04:35 PM | #10 |
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Heyyyyy
This was cool. Props Oats with the crowd participation Who goes to work tmrw? WOOOOOOOOO -OBLIVIOUS DRUNK CHIC
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05-03-2014, 01:16 AM | #11 |
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lol I didn't even notice that chick until now
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05-03-2014, 01:22 AM | #12 |
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ah, man. someday i'll do this.
remember reading this thinking you killed it, esp. the first section. you delivered it dope too. poised. we live in a beautiful world. |
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