Incredible vs Dynamicz - DYNAMICZ WINS

[Orc]

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@Incredible @DynamiCz

[Incredible]

Check, 10 or 12? @DynamiCz

[DynamiCz]

Check...10 Coo

[Incredible]

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Lmao I was like 15-16 battling when I was back on the Ezboards, Damn time be moving!

This isn't your prime guy, n by the looks of it text wise?
Your more over the hills than a Nick James mustache line!
Ya bitch snorted the whole 8 ball, my homies called her a Snow Bomb
Tried to provide us relief, we just let them hot lines blink, like a Drake telethon!
When the shots go off I'm aiming above the eye, this won't be a tie Dy
Have all of NC checking for my gangsta
like its a Tekashi69 reply
So you coming back from that EZ shit is clear, that's all you do
Fuck sake dude! your concepts date back to when they created YouTube!
I'll squeeze 4:44s and turn your drop to lemon juice
Don't worry kid, ill set it up real slick, make it look like your On The Run II

[DynamiCz]

Thinking you fly, catch him on the runway in plain view, nothin partial
As he land..vest on for safety, sticks flashing when I wave like a aircraft marshall
You a force all of a sudden?..the baka break up the surge...Keri Hilson
Hat & glove, I'm between the base..U see hawks in field like Russell Wilson
Machine like Wall E, scope by his leg, my picks are dis knee..say a word
Or the headshot...the clips direct in Incredible like Brad Bird
I'm heart less, the bullets through his chest leave him heart broken
If the muzzle to loud, I put the suppressor on..it make the gun soft spoken
Not worried, nothing but incredible to hear you the one I'm burying
If something smell fishy, the mullet let you die it....like a pescatarian

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

Incredible was extremely simple, need to work on your rhymes and content, u got a decent structure just need alot of work.

Didn't see nothing stand out in ya verse.

Dynamicz

Thinking you fly, catch him on the runway in plain view, nothin partial
As he land..vest on for safety, sticks flashing when I wave like a aircraft marshall
You a force all of a sudden?..the baka break up the surge...Keri Hilson
Hat & glove, I'm between the base..U see hawks in field like Russell Wilson
Machine like Wall E, scope by his leg, my picks are dis knee..say a word
Or the headshot...the clips direct in Incredible like Brad Bird

All 3 of these were pretty solid, cool verse. Very one sided imo, but both stay up and keep dropping

Mvgt / DynamicZ

[Gaslight]

Incredible was pretty off for me. Punches weren't exceptional and the rhyming was extremely basic at best, and forced at worst. Had a lot of site references that went over my head cuz I don't get the inside jokes.

Dynamicz was way better imo. First bar had multiple references to the punch and was pretty cool. The Disney, wall e, incredibles bars was pretty cool but I don't inherently know who Brad Bird is. I'm guessing he directed the incredibles. I'm able to figure out the bar and respect it but because I don't know this info already, it detracts from the impact. Last 2 lines were ok. Liked the latter better than the former.

Vote: dynamicz

[Barcotic]

Incred
not feelin anything mang, first couple concepts were forced on & the rest came off too simple. no hate, stay at it

Dy
niiice opener, i would have worded the setup differently but still w/e, gd bar

next 2 were ok but had some wording issues
last couple missed

v/dynamicz
pretty obv who u are after reading that verse

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Incredible

This isn't your prime guy, n by the looks of it text wise?
Your more over the hills than a Nick James mustache line!
Lol decent
Ya bitch snorted the whole 8 ball, my homies called her a Snow Bomb
Tried to provide us relief, we just let them hot lines blink, like a Drake telethon!
Naaaa
When the shots go off I'm aiming above the eye, this won't be a tie Dy
Have all of NC checking for my gangsta like its a Tekashi69 reply
Just OK
So you coming back from that EZ shit is clear, that's all you do
Fuck sake dude! your concepts date back to when they created YouTube!
Bland
I'll squeeze 4:44s and turn your drop to lemon juice
Don't worry kid, ill set it up real slick, make it look like your On The Run II

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Thinking you fly, catch him on the runway in plain view, nothin partial
As he land..vest on for safety, sticks flashing when I wave like a aircraft marshall
Good opener
You a force all of a sudden?..the baka break up the surge...Keri Hilson
Hat & glove, I'm between the base..U see hawks in field like Russell Wilson
Weak
Machine like Wall E, scope by his leg, my picks are dis knee..say a word
Or the headshot...the clips direct in Incredible like Brad Bird
DOPE punch, the set up was terrible tho.
I'm heart less, the bullets through his chest leave him heart broken
If the muzzle to loud, I put the suppressor on..it make the gun soft spoken
This is aight
Not worried, nothing but incredible to hear you the one I'm burying
If something smell fishy, the mullet let you die it....like a pescatarian
Corny

VOTE DYNAMICZ he had more to offer in his bars, especially the 'Brad Bird' joint.

[Kill Spree]

Nick James could have been dope if worded harsher/better
Wasn’t feeling the rest of your verse tbh... the tekashi 69 shit was wtf and you had some basic stuff man. Needed more witty punches here


Vs


Aircraft marshal was nice. Brad bird was decent.. set up was all over the place

Overall light battle here... wasn’t feeling much from in and dyn had the opener and half a bar rest was bland. Dyn takes tgis