01-25-2016, 05:38 PM | #1 |
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NBL Season 8 Week 4 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Lotto Smirk @Utmost
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01-25-2016, 11:39 PM | #2 |
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01-29-2016, 02:01 PM | #3 |
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Will need an ext
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01-29-2016, 08:26 PM | #4 |
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fine with me.
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01-30-2016, 06:55 PM | #5 |
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Pussy mother fucker acting tough til he sees a gun
One flick and this faggot jumps. Playing hims easy as temple run I got lines prepped for this urs are wack & rushed to suit theres 20 for any head I get and ironically that's how ur slut earns her loot u ain't a g w/ gun tell the truth cumon we know it's shit speak If u ever seen an AK live in battle its only in the spotlight this week u nothing but a dirty thief we see thru u we ain't blind or dumb struggle w/ sharp lines so stealing his laptop wud be ur only hope of finding some u ain't rated at all, everyone hates u, anyone saying he is it's all lies nobody agreeing w/ that ego unless it's that he goes n commits suicide n dies 10 Sorry rushed this |
01-31-2016, 01:53 AM | #6 |
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sry, kinda forgot about this
Put up my dukes n'punch ya roof to pieces - let ya body droop from weakness then u'll be laid out so flat on ya ass.. B.o.B will ask u to help prove his thesis I do it big, every line is ginormous & you? all ya writin is borin My talents center of attention..'his see fit' to pout n' cry in the corner So ima keep it 100 fam - the gun'll blam tearin u asunder man & this'll be the last time u see this pussy Smirk.. alice in wonderland Im bringin the ruckus dork, Win? Lotto uve been such a sport I mean, I'll answer that like how rose dissed kanye.. butt o'course No mystery that Im so fuckin dope - clue u in on who'll be up at the vote I'd consider my self a real gumshoe.. & cant help it if my foots stuck on ur throat outty Last edited by Utmost; 01-31-2016 at 01:55 AM. |
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V/Lotto...he had two lines I liked the 20 and sharp line...utmost had that Bob which I thought was dope...as soon as I read that I just knew it was over but it did seem like utmost rushed..Lotto wasn't all that and utmost really let this slip away..it came down to the two lines and collectively I like lotto better and his misses were better |
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01-31-2016, 01:39 PM | #8 |
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Overall Utmost had concepts w/ potential, but the wording/execution never bought them to fruition. Whereas LOTTO SMIRK kept it clean & mean w/ simple, yet effective punches.
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01-31-2016, 01:50 PM | #9 |
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Lotto had a couple decent hits imo.. w/ temple, and sharp ref..
Both had wording issues.. Utmost B.oB line, a little stretched, might be fave concept, my lotb maybe.. Hissy fit lol. corny but points for making me smirk.. But after that utmost sharply declined w/ misses imo.. Vote Lotto |
01-31-2016, 02:58 PM | #10 |
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Lotto
Temple Run line is dope af. 20 a head line feels old. AK lines feel old too. Sharp feels old too. Awkward wording in the closer. Yooo, I felt your opener was outstanding, but some tired concepts followed it up. Shame, really. Utmost B.o.B. line is aight. Ehhh to the corner line. Alice in Wonderland line is cool. Kanye line is ehh. Gumshoe line is ok. Utmost - this felt like a key-job. Coulda been dope if you gave it a little more effort. Vote -- Smirk. It really came down to Temple Run vs pussy Smirk and I liked Temple run better and Smirk's misses weren't bad, they just felt like retreaded concepts.
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01-31-2016, 05:18 PM | #11 |
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got lotto here
he had 20 and temple run. sharp was ok utmost had B.o.B. and Alice in wonderland would have been nice had both tried hard to see what would have happened either way v/lotto |
01-31-2016, 08:14 PM | #12 |
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pussy mother fucker acting tough til he sees a gun
One flick and this faggot jumps. Playing hims easy as temple run -this is cool, however I seen an app line before like this -- $2.5 I got lines prepped for this urs are wack & rushed to suit theres 20 for any head I get and ironically that's how ur slut earns her loot ---Ok ---$2.5 u ain't a g w/ gun tell the truth cumon we know it's shit speak If u ever seen an AK live in battle its only in the spotlight this week --all right, not bad --$3 u nothing but a dirty thief we see thru u we ain't blind or dumb struggle w/ sharp lines so stealing his laptop wud be ur only hope of finding some ---ok personal -- $3 u ain't rated at all, everyone hates u, anyone saying he is it's all lies nobody agreeing w/ that ego unless it's that he goes n commits suicide n dies --decent -- $2,5 $13.5 put up my dukes n'punch ya roof to pieces - let ya body droop from weakness then u'll be laid out so flat on ya ass.. B.o.B will ask u to help prove his thesis ok cool --- $3 I do it big, every line is ginormous & you? all ya writin is borin My talents center of attention..'his see fit' to pout n' cry in the corner --kinda reach for me -- $2.5 So ima keep it 100 fam - the gun'll blam tearin u asunder man & this'll be the last time u see this pussy Smirk.. alice in wonderland ---lol i like this --- $3 Im bringin the ruckus dork, Win? Lotto uve been such a sport I mean, I'll answer that like how rose dissed kanye.. butt o'course ---decent -- $3 No mystery that Im so fuckin dope - clue u in on who'll be up at the vote I'd consider my self a real gumshoe.. & cant help it if my foots stuck on ur throat ---nah $2 $13.5 tie on the $ here but I'm gonna give this to utmost with the LOTB which was the alice line |
02-01-2016, 06:54 PM | #13 |
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Lotto appealed more to me, I've seen the temple run line before... The $20 was kool and so was the sharp line
Utmost I liked the Alice in wonderland line Lotto wins
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