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Old 01-25-2016, 05:38 PM   #1
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Old 01-25-2016, 11:39 PM   #2
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Old 01-29-2016, 02:01 PM   #3
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Old 01-30-2016, 06:55 PM   #5
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Pussy mother fucker acting tough til he sees a gun
One flick and this faggot jumps. Playing hims easy as temple run
I got lines prepped for this urs are wack & rushed to suit
theres 20 for any head I get and ironically that's how ur slut earns her loot
u ain't a g w/ gun tell the truth cumon we know it's shit speak
If u ever seen an AK live in battle its only in the spotlight this week
u nothing but a dirty thief we see thru u we ain't blind or dumb
struggle w/ sharp lines so stealing his laptop wud be ur only hope of finding some
u ain't rated at all, everyone hates u, anyone saying he is it's all lies
nobody agreeing w/ that ego unless it's that he goes n commits suicide n dies

10

Sorry rushed this
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Old 01-31-2016, 01:53 AM   #6
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sry, kinda forgot about this


Put up my dukes n'punch ya roof to pieces - let ya body droop from weakness
then u'll be laid out so flat on ya ass.. B.o.B will ask u to help prove his thesis
I do it big, every line is ginormous & you? all ya writin is borin
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So ima keep it 100 fam - the gun'll blam tearin u asunder man
& this'll be the last time u see this pussy Smirk.. alice in wonderland
Im bringin the ruckus dork, Win? Lotto uve been such a sport
I mean, I'll answer that like how rose dissed kanye.. butt o'course
No mystery that Im so fuckin dope - clue u in on who'll be up at the vote
I'd consider my self a real gumshoe.. & cant help it if my foots stuck on ur throat


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Old 01-31-2016, 08:41 AM   #7
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Pussy mother fucker acting tough til he sees a gun
One flick and this faggot jumps. Playing hims easy as temple run
kinda simple but ok
I got lines prepped for this urs are wack & rushed to suit
theres 20 for any head I get and ironically that's how ur slut earns her loot
cool
u ain't a g w/ gun tell the truth cumon we know it's shit speak
If u ever seen an AK live in battle its only in the spotlight this week
kinda played and wasn't worded harsh
u nothing but a dirty thief we see thru u we ain't blind or dumb
struggle w/ sharp lines so stealing his laptop wud be ur only hope of finding some
cool
u ain't rated at all, everyone hates u, anyone saying he is it's all lies
nobody agreeing w/ that ego unless it's that he goes n commits suicide n dies
ehhh


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sry, kinda forgot about this


Put up my dukes n'punch ya roof to pieces - let ya body droop from weakness
then u'll be laid out so flat on ya ass.. B.o.B will ask u to help prove his thesis
cool
I do it big, every line is ginormous & you? all ya writin is borin
My talents center of attention..'his see fit' to pout n' cry in the corner
ok I guess
So ima keep it 100 fam - the gun'll blam tearin u asunder man
& this'll be the last time u see this pussy Smirk.. alice in wonderland
nah
Im bringin the ruckus dork, Win? Lotto uve been such a sport
I mean, I'll answer that like how rose dissed kanye.. butt o'course
nah
No mystery that Im so fuckin dope - clue u in on who'll be up at the vote
I'd consider my self a real gumshoe.. & cant help it if my foots stuck on ur throat
ehh

V/Lotto...he had two lines I liked the 20 and sharp line...utmost had that Bob which I thought was dope...as soon as I read that I just knew it was over but it did seem like utmost rushed..Lotto wasn't all that and utmost really let this slip away..it came down to the two lines and collectively I like lotto better and his misses were better
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Old 01-31-2016, 01:39 PM   #8
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Overall Utmost had concepts w/ potential, but the wording/execution never bought them to fruition. Whereas LOTTO SMIRK kept it clean & mean w/ simple, yet effective punches.
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Old 01-31-2016, 01:50 PM   #9
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Lotto had a couple decent hits imo.. w/ temple, and sharp ref..
Both had wording issues..
Utmost B.oB line, a little stretched, might be fave concept, my lotb maybe..
Hissy fit lol. corny but points for making me smirk..
But after that utmost sharply declined w/ misses imo..

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Old 01-31-2016, 02:58 PM   #10
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Temple Run line is dope af.
20 a head line feels old.
AK lines feel old too.
Sharp feels old too.
Awkward wording in the closer.

Yooo, I felt your opener was outstanding, but some tired concepts followed it up. Shame, really.

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B.o.B. line is aight.
Ehhh to the corner line.
Alice in Wonderland line is cool.
Kanye line is ehh.
Gumshoe line is ok.

Utmost - this felt like a key-job. Coulda been dope if you gave it a little more effort.

Vote -- Smirk. It really came down to Temple Run vs pussy Smirk and I liked Temple run better and Smirk's misses weren't bad, they just felt like retreaded concepts.
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got lotto here
he had 20 and temple run. sharp was ok
utmost had B.o.B. and Alice in wonderland
would have been nice had both tried hard to see what would have happened

either way

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pussy mother fucker acting tough til he sees a gun
One flick and this faggot jumps. Playing hims easy as temple run
-this is cool, however I seen an app line before like this -- $2.5
I got lines prepped for this urs are wack & rushed to suit
theres 20 for any head I get and ironically that's how ur slut earns her loot
---Ok ---$2.5
u ain't a g w/ gun tell the truth cumon we know it's shit speak
If u ever seen an AK live in battle its only in the spotlight this week
--all right, not bad --$3
u nothing but a dirty thief we see thru u we ain't blind or dumb
struggle w/ sharp lines so stealing his laptop wud be ur only hope of finding some
---ok personal -- $3
u ain't rated at all, everyone hates u, anyone saying he is it's all lies
nobody agreeing w/ that ego unless it's that he goes n commits suicide n dies
--decent -- $2,5

$13.5

put up my dukes n'punch ya roof to pieces - let ya body droop from weakness
then u'll be laid out so flat on ya ass.. B.o.B will ask u to help prove his thesis
ok cool --- $3
I do it big, every line is ginormous & you? all ya writin is borin
My talents center of attention..'his see fit' to pout n' cry in the corner
--kinda reach for me -- $2.5
So ima keep it 100 fam - the gun'll blam tearin u asunder man
& this'll be the last time u see this pussy Smirk.. alice in wonderland
---lol i like this --- $3
Im bringin the ruckus dork, Win? Lotto uve been such a sport
I mean, I'll answer that like how rose dissed kanye.. butt o'course
---decent -- $3
No mystery that Im so fuckin dope - clue u in on who'll be up at the vote
I'd consider my self a real gumshoe.. & cant help it if my foots stuck on ur throat
---nah $2


$13.5


tie on the $ here but I'm gonna give this to utmost with the LOTB which was the alice line
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Old 02-01-2016, 06:54 PM   #13
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Lotto appealed more to me, I've seen the temple run line before... The $20 was kool and so was the sharp line

Utmost I liked the Alice in wonderland line

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