Week 6: 2tripple0 (0-3) vs. Sween (0-0)-- 2TRIPPLE0 WINS BY NS

Split Eight · 08-21-2015, 11:58 PM

AOWL Season V, Week 6

SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Monday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Tuesday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK
There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Friday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

All competitors must vote on THREE battles and post links/ references in the voting thread.

Read the full rules here!

TOPIC:
STORY PROMPT WEEK:
"I never saw myself becoming a father. And now, when I look in the mirror, I'm not sure what to think..."

Good luck!
@2tripple0 @Sween

2tripple0 · 08-22-2015, 07:35 AM

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2tripple0 · 08-23-2015, 11:58 AM

im writing in my journal about my family
and the fact that they are living in such a loving community
theres nothing but a hurtle between me and my ancestry
my pops is over the bar and handles things carefully like money
its funny cuz my fathers story is deceiving at its first peek
its like thirsty alcoholics no serenity during my early teens
trying to reminisce about the people that care the most
we could have a ceremony the way my pops needs to give it a toast
so Im sending this out to the one who gave me my direction in life
just laying back thinking is it right this time or is it just a rhyme

08-22-2015, 07:35 AM	#2
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	check __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

08-23-2015, 11:58 AM	#3
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	im writing in my journal about my family and the fact that they are living in such a loving community theres nothing but a hurtle between me and my ancestry my pops is over the bar and handles things carefully like money its funny cuz my fathers story is deceiving at its first peek its like thirsty alcoholics no serenity during my early teens trying to reminisce about the people that care the most we could have a ceremony the way my pops needs to give it a toast so Im sending this out to the one who gave me my direction in life just laying back thinking is it right this time or is it just a rhyme __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/