LR Wk 2: Zeilti Vs Blas - Zelph wins

Kill Spree · 03-25-2019, 10:28 PM

LIGHTNING ROUND

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@zelti @Blas

Blas · 03-26-2019, 04:30 AM

1lip & hideous.. hits up escorts & to fuck ur literally BEGGING the slut
bitches aren't ever saying hazel no WONDER he's never getting his nut

zelti · 03-26-2019, 02:51 PM

Since you love Barcotic so much..

I’ll kill this fag w/ style, apparel tag ur whole body then blam ur idol
After that I’m puttin two 2’s around your waist.. lets plan your dance recital

Sharp · 03-26-2019, 06:42 PM

I like the idea behind hazel but it doesn't work in my accent. I know you're from New England so idk how it sounds in different dialects, but it doesn't work for me. Two 2s is pretty meh, but hazel just sounds like haze'll to me

V/zelph

DynamiCz · 03-26-2019, 06:52 PM

1lip & hideous.. hits up escorts & to fuck ur literally BEGGING the slut
bitches aren't ever saying hazel no WONDER he's never getting his nut

I see where you was going with it, yeah the concept is cool, but the hazel is kinda a reach especially the way i pronounce it

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I’ll kill this fag w/ style, apparel tag ur whole body then blam ur idol
After that I’m puttin two 2’s around your waist.. lets plan your dance recital

This was ok, dance recital concept I seen before, but overall it's cool just takes the impact of the bar down a bit

I got Zelph on this one, props to both

V-Zelph

Real Spit · 03-26-2019, 07:45 PM

Blas.. I feel like some type of "eyes" tie in w/the setup would have really sold this one.. instead it ends up being a slightly offensive poke in the ribs.. i.e. girls don't say "heyyyy Zel" - that's the impression I get from it.. not very hard hitting, and without an additional tie in to sell the hazel part it's not as creative as it could be, but not bad and it does work w/ just the nut tie in. Overall, a good punch that could have been better.

Zelti.. never seen a tutu play and never would have imagined it being used in a battle, props for pulling that off without it being gay as fuck. The "a pair'll" tie in works well, both had some creativity, but your punch was harder than Blas' punch IMO due to the threat of violence, so for that, you get the vote

v/ Zel

Dominate · 03-26-2019, 08:42 PM

Hazel/hey zel is a little stretched with where the emphasis sits, but not so far I can't fuck with it. It's a decent bar.

Two 2s/tutus isn't the freshest or most creative wordplay and neither is a pair'll/apparrell, but the the way those two wordplays fit together here is impressive IMO - apparel with tutus and a pair'll with two 2s. Yup. Pretty good.

V/ Zel

Blue Bayou · 03-26-2019, 08:48 PM

Yeah I pronounce it haze'll but it's not that big a stretch tbh, it works and was pretty funny

I did a tutu bar against two drop last year.. but this was diff and cool.. the played apparel wordplay in the setup wasn't needed, but I like the swag way you went about wording the punch.. first read I thought it was soft but reading again I think it's a cool non chalant way of execution

I think this is quite close, I have Z edging it with the twist on the way he delivered the punch.. props to both

Z edged it

Suthaveli · 03-26-2019, 09:01 PM

The idea of blas bar was dope. I feel the setup messed it up. The ex on the punch wasn't bad at all. The set up is what messed it up.

I like zel tutu line. Whole bar made sense this time. Dope ties.

Mvgt-zelti

Kill Spree · 03-27-2019, 09:09 AM

So... haze’ll is how I pronounce it but it’s a slight stretch still give you creativity points.. I just wasn’t a fan of your punch. It was funny but could have been harsher

Zelphs bar I get two 2’s/tutu play but you say “after I put it around your waist” like your strapping blas up? Dressing him? Then your going to plan his dance?

PM me because this isn’t worded right....

I’ll come back and finish voting. Smh

Blas · 03-27-2019, 09:57 AM

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Kill Spree · 03-27-2019, 09:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blas

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

What’s wrong

Destroyer · 03-27-2019, 10:15 AM

Also have the creature here
Why is this still open tho?
It’s a landslide

Blas · 03-27-2019, 10:34 AM

agreed, close it. his bar was too dope tbh. gg zelph

Kill Spree · 03-27-2019, 11:48 AM

Sorry blas you were robbed

Zelph wins

03-25-2019, 10:28 PM	#1
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,437 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	LR Wk 2: Zeilti Vs Blas - Zelph wins LIGHTNING ROUND BATTLES ARE SET BY 12:00AM EST TUESDAY BARS ARE NOW DUE BY 1:00PM PST TUESDAY MUST VOTE ON EVERY BATTLE (Drop a quick explained vote) BATTLES CLOSE WEDNESDAY 12:00PM EST @zelti @Blas

03-26-2019, 02:51 PM	#3
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	Since you love Barcotic so much.. I’ll kill this fag w/ style, apparel tag ur whole body then blam ur idol After that I’m puttin two 2’s around your waist.. lets plan your dance recital __________________ Words bitches don’t say: 1. Hazel (hey zel) Last edited by zelti; 03-26-2019 at 03:53 PM.

03-26-2019, 06:52 PM	#5
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829177	1lip & hideous.. hits up escorts & to fuck ur literally BEGGING the slut bitches aren't ever saying hazel no WONDER he's never getting his nut I see where you was going with it, yeah the concept is cool, but the hazel is kinda a reach especially the way i pronounce it ------- I’ll kill this fag w/ style, apparel tag ur whole body then blam ur idol After that I’m puttin two 2’s around your waist.. lets plan your dance recital This was ok, dance recital concept I seen before, but overall it's cool just takes the impact of the bar down a bit I got Zelph on this one, props to both V-Zelph __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-26-2019, 08:42 PM	#7
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,309 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Hazel/hey zel is a little stretched with where the emphasis sits, but not so far I can't fuck with it. It's a decent bar. Two 2s/tutus isn't the freshest or most creative wordplay and neither is a pair'll/apparrell, but the the way those two wordplays fit together here is impressive IMO - apparel with tutus and a pair'll with two 2s. Yup. Pretty good. V/ Zel __________________ The Bad Guys

03-26-2019, 08:48 PM	#8
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Yeah I pronounce it haze'll but it's not that big a stretch tbh, it works and was pretty funny I did a tutu bar against two drop last year.. but this was diff and cool.. the played apparel wordplay in the setup wasn't needed, but I like the swag way you went about wording the punch.. first read I thought it was soft but reading again I think it's a cool non chalant way of execution I think this is quite close, I have Z edging it with the twist on the way he delivered the punch.. props to both Z edged it __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip Last edited by Blue Bayou; 03-26-2019 at 09:04 PM.

03-26-2019, 04:30 AM	#2
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	1lip & hideous.. hits up escorts & to fuck ur literally BEGGING the slut bitches aren't ever saying hazel no WONDER he's never getting his nut

03-26-2019, 06:42 PM	#4
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	I like the idea behind hazel but it doesn't work in my accent. I know you're from New England so idk how it sounds in different dialects, but it doesn't work for me. Two 2s is pretty meh, but hazel just sounds like haze'll to me V/zelph

03-26-2019, 07:45 PM	#6
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608129	Blas.. I feel like some type of "eyes" tie in w/the setup would have really sold this one.. instead it ends up being a slightly offensive poke in the ribs.. i.e. girls don't say "heyyyy Zel" - that's the impression I get from it.. not very hard hitting, and without an additional tie in to sell the hazel part it's not as creative as it could be, but not bad and it does work w/ just the nut tie in. Overall, a good punch that could have been better. Zelti.. never seen a tutu play and never would have imagined it being used in a battle, props for pulling that off without it being gay as fuck. The "a pair'll" tie in works well, both had some creativity, but your punch was harder than Blas' punch IMO due to the threat of violence, so for that, you get the vote v/ Zel

03-26-2019, 09:01 PM	#9
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534019	The idea of blas bar was dope. I feel the setup messed it up. The ex on the punch wasn't bad at all. The set up is what messed it up. I like zel tutu line. Whole bar made sense this time. Dope ties. Mvgt-zelti

03-27-2019, 09:09 AM	#10
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,437 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	So... haze’ll is how I pronounce it but it’s a slight stretch still give you creativity points.. I just wasn’t a fan of your punch. It was funny but could have been harsher Zelphs bar I get two 2’s/tutu play but you say “after I put it around your waist” like your strapping blas up? Dressing him? Then your going to plan his dance? PM me because this isn’t worded right.... I’ll come back and finish voting. Smh

03-27-2019, 09:57 AM	#11
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

03-27-2019, 10:34 AM	#14
Blas BesT™ Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 596 Rep Power: 1628180	agreed, close it. his bar was too dope tbh. gg zelph

03-27-2019, 11:48 AM	#15
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,437 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	Sorry blas you were robbed Zelph wins