08-11-2015, 07:14 PM | #1 |
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14. Unfukwitable vs 11. ill nik-A - NIK WINS
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08-11-2015, 07:17 PM | #2 |
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08-15-2015, 09:45 AM | #5 |
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The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out… isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush
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Unfukwitable's Verse
He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds; the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead. "ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u; Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals. Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements; PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden. Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit; In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib. Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears; I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there! Quote:
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08-15-2015, 03:08 PM | #7 |
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V/ nik ....worded better...unfuk was ok up until the throwing fits reference..that's kinda old...nice to see he got better tho...nice battle too
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I literally went back and forth on this multiple times Nik got creativty but so do Fuk Nik had 1 fire line I loved and 1 I really didnt like everything else was avg or above Fuk had good to ok lines but nothing better than Niks wordplay/discusssion punch because it was a perfectly executed personal. that and the 2 on 2 tag bar really makes a big difference here Unfuk could have went harder with the I beat u before angle I think Nik was more sound here and more creative when I really break it down thoroughly. hardest battle to decide in awhile but I cant fault Nik for dropping bars that I dont stylistically like when they arent bad just different for my taste Unfuk had wps which I also dont love and the double entrendes werent perfect and that hurt him IMO i didnt google the chromite definition and it could of been a difference maker but i aint into researching bars again thats preference I could be in this thread all night so vote Nik @Sharp @cntrlf4 need to get that weak ass vote outa here tho
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08-18-2015, 02:00 PM | #9 |
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Killer draw, discussion, odd
Vs. Chromite (almost), iron maiden, 711 Sorry doin this shit on my phone. Both had some misses, seen wayy better from both. That warm milk thing was ugh, I thought discussion and odd bars was dope. Unfuk had some cool lines, his creativity was nice maybe trying to fit too much in some of them. V/nika
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08-20-2015, 02:17 PM | #11 |
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08-20-2015, 09:41 PM | #12 |
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The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff haha I fuck wit this... smooth ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial cool but nothin crazy to me though you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there old school vibe. dope. u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out… isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round this one's pretty good too. simple play but executed nicely wit the personal u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one hahaha... idk I thought that was heat I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush damn after all the nice bars you had this one was wack man lol not a good close vs. He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds; the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead. tough "ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u; Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals. yo I liked that to be honest but why another Cro- play? I seen the 'cro-shade' you did recently so that took away from this one for me Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements; PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden. ehhh aight... didn't connect that well Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit; In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib. haha yea this funny shit Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears; I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there! I think of nik as THEE jordan guy, so the idea was off to me from the jump... not feelin Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man, Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land. decent angle & concept but needed somethin more in execution... cool though This was a nice read, both came wit some bars... Unfuk started wit the nice barnik'll play thought he did that right. Throwin fits is one you either gon get or breeze by & not realize the play, but I fucked wit that Already said how I felt about Chromite & closer had potential. nik-A really had it together this week though... signature win & discussion were heat. slippery when wet / yellow sign was unorthodox but I thought that was comedy Odd & Brady sketch were both solid too... closer was a big whiff to me but that was the only one good shit fellas... nik-A came wit it here though & I got him takin this one V/ ill nik-A Last edited by Junto; 08-20-2015 at 09:44 PM. |
08-20-2015, 10:17 PM | #13 |
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Sharpies, discussion, 1st round , slippery when wet
Vs Opener, baby mama, closer V/Nik ... Battle could have went either way, I got him edging w/ a quote
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08-21-2015, 07:42 AM | #14 |
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I came in here to vote because I saw them listed at the top of the forum, BUT I can't view Unfuk's sig pic and after reading ill nik-A's opener, I'm guessing it's a reference to that?
I can maybe vote later once home and the pictures viewable but right now I'm gonna have to leave this one. I hit up the other two open. If I'm online later, message me and i've got you. @Hush In the meantime, bumping this to the top for you both. Pz! |
08-21-2015, 07:58 AM | #15 |
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The high u got from…
beatin a legend; surpasses any army of chicks in a party of spliffs robbing me’s ya signature win… since it won’t happen again u stealing sharpies to sniff creative. I liked it. Could of been worded for a harder hit though ur gunplay’s weak; so I’ll deflate ya ego cuz u’ve wronged the style u don’t have a killer draw… more like Brady’s sketch artist was hired for the Boston Bomber’s trial Yeah this was quite cool. Liked it you don’t know how to word ya punches so to try’s unfair my wordplay’s the best or in the discussion… u askin how to do it right in there simple and yet the lotb so far u swear the Suicide Squad has ya back but as it turns out… isn’t it Odd… they tagged with others while u got eliminated with him in the 1st round nice u really a scared pussy; so all that gun talk don’t impress son u show signs of being yellow… & hold on to the walls when u see a slippery when wet one meh I didn't really get this tbf I beat the better version of u without rhyming; so u’ll get crushed if this is sweet revenge for Murda… all I need is a warm glass of milk to kill that Sugar rush [B] hmm im getting the concept but I dunno... its worded well enough for what you were going for but I just don't see how this was ever going to sting etc. Maybe I'm missing it. Seemed more swagger Overall good creativity and some nice hits but dropped off near the end He wants to know why we're called Suicide, til I rip this nigga to shreds; the Irony, after one Barnacle wish that he was Sleeping with the Fishes instead. first line didn't need to be there. Overall I like the creativity but it could of been better "ppl you HATE battling" — he said Cronus instead of Unfuk, so Ima finish u; Yea, Chromite put fear in ya heart, But me & this Iron'll break u down to the minerals. nice this was good Hes infatuated w/ a BA mod, I figured it out from a supply of statements; PSA: This fag really wants to feel Sharp on the inside like an Iron Maiden. Yeah this was solid Last battle I ripped this clown to bits, he was pissed about the shit; In the threads throwing more fits, than a baby momma kickin her nigga out the crib. I dunno about this Why were u In Des' Jordan thread?, they're not shoes a broke nigga in his 30's wears; I got two 3's.. the bunny 8's.. & 7 11's, while u can't even afford a Slurpee there! Yeah ok Where did this vet learn to rhyme?.. damn, to think I use to respect this man, Idk how u finished like that!, but I guess "Cliffhangers" are not meant to land. great close Overall a nice verse but the odd misses wernt as strong or creative as nik-A but then I preferred your lines where they hit. Tough match. Which is always a good thing. I got you both with 4 quotable each. Im going to throw a spanner in the works and vote Unfuk |
08-22-2015, 12:31 AM | #16 |
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I have Nik on this
Faves were the personals.. discussion, odd, slippery Unfuk, thought bar nik'll was cool, iron maiden was solid...but wasn't feelin you as much as Nik. 7 11s had potential but ended it ehh to me wit the slurpee shit.. Nik, hated that sweet shit too lol...but I felt his verse more, came off harder to me. V-nika |
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