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Old 08-21-2020, 11:32 AM   #1
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Old 08-23-2020, 02:18 PM   #2
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Old 08-23-2020, 03:19 PM   #3
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Really like what I have read from you thus far man, on point. I like the poetic structure, the kind of vague double meanings to everything and just the layers of it. It’s pretty impressive and makes for wonderful visuals. Good vocabulary as well

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Old 09-06-2020, 12:32 AM   #4
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Wait, why does this read like someone jacking my style?!
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Old 09-06-2020, 03:10 AM   #5
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