09-11-2018, 11:56 PM | #1 |
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Round 1: 7. Flow (9-10) vs 10. Amen (5-3) - AMEN WINS
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09-16-2018, 10:32 AM | #3 |
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Wife bar it is...
This sad sap brings his bitch a six pack and some snacks as she's watchin the match Shit...shes been the big dick for so long when it comes to 'pegging' it's you that's wearing the Strap |
09-16-2018, 10:38 AM | #4 |
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This scrub's not sick, so save it or I'll put your face to the pavement & stomp it,
Pls Stop kid, this shot to the temple'll have your blood clottin' like Jamaican Ebonics. |
09-16-2018, 05:56 PM | #5 |
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This sad sap brings his bitch a six pack and some snacks as she's watchin the match
Shit...shes been the big dick for so long when it comes to 'pegging' it's you that's wearing the Strap This was coo here on the funny side to me...direct and had me rolling. Think the wording could have been touched up, but overall funny shit ---------------- This scrub's not sick, so save it or I'll put your face to the pavement & stomp it, Pls Stop kid, this shot to the temple'll have your blood clottin' like Jamaican Ebonics This was dope here! The blood clot/Jamaican ebonics concept was nice as well. Props This battle was nice here, more on the preference side with this. I like comedy bars, but damn that blood clot line was fresh to me and it hit. I have to go with Amen on this one. Good shit tho to both! V-Amen
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09-17-2018, 01:06 PM | #6 |
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Didn’t like either
I was gonna vote amen til I realized blood spilling is the exact apposite of it clotting Not sure if he knows how guns work Flow was eh. Had to google pegging and I wish I didn’t This battle was lack luster V flow
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09-17-2018, 01:13 PM | #7 |
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Flow, I think this was a tough angle to use. I think for you to use a Amen wife bar it woulda had to be either REALLY funny or REALLY harsh for it to have impact. You took the funny route, and it was kinda funny but didn’t feel fresh or funnier than any other amens wife bar. Also if pegging had a double meaning it prob woulda went a bit harder. I’ve read this a lot and can’t figure out if it is.
Amen had a pretty good punch. I think the blood clot/Jamaican flip was pretty nice. It’s simple but I’ve never heard it before surprisingly. I think you definitely could have set up the punch better. It didn’t really relate to the punch and you didn’t have anything to transition from the two different ideas in your set up and punch. Regardless I think the concept was fresh enough to get the win. Mvgt Amen |
09-17-2018, 05:50 PM | #8 |
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Amen up 5-1
Need more votes @Cashius @Blue Bayou @Destroyer @BodySnatcher @Plot @Viper @Killing Spree @bleak @DMS @Chyeahhh!!! @Twodrop @Witty Last edited by Jabari Black; 09-17-2018 at 11:17 PM. |
09-17-2018, 07:58 PM | #9 |
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Ive got amen. Wasn’t crazy about either concept but flows wording was a little messy for me. Amen just had the better written bar with everything else being pretty much equal.
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09-17-2018, 10:10 PM | #10 |
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Really dont wanna vote on this battle as I cant see a clear winner
But Im giving it to Amen, Ive seen the Jamacian/clot flip before but it was years ago. I guess I just wasnt feeing Flow this battle, I appreciate the comedy/hes the bitch angle but I guess I just didnt like where it went. ...tough battle to pick imo. V-Amen |
09-17-2018, 10:28 PM | #11 |
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amen had a betr hit
V/amen |
09-17-2018, 11:45 PM | #12 |
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Don't ever vote on my stuff again. I'd say the same had this been a vote for me. This is just terrible.
I'm happy to give Amen the win at this point @Jabari Black @Amen good showing brother- unexpected you came so creative but I most definitely appreciated the read. GL moving forward |
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