Week 10: John Dillinger (0-1) vs. bleak (5-4) - JD WINS

For Battling · 08-20-2018, 06:18 PM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@John Dillinger @bleak

John Dillinger · 08-20-2018, 07:29 PM

check, gl

John Dillinger · 08-21-2018, 04:37 PM

snatched your girl from your crib, she was tired of this slob‘s nest
the only time she yells Oblique is by telling me what to massage next

bleak · 08-22-2018, 12:10 AM

got the coneshticof + Towelies swarming w/ the scope, fam.
I'll have John's heart cancelled if race is an issue like Roseanne

Viper · 08-22-2018, 07:19 PM

both of these was dope, john I like the wordplay and connections in ur bar. bleak urs was good too but I cud done more wit the concept

V/john

For Battling · 08-24-2018, 10:06 AM

8-1 John Dillinger

Needs more votes.

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DynamiCz · 08-24-2018, 10:11 AM

snatched your girl from your crib, she was tired of this slob‘s nest
the only time she yells Oblique is by telling me what to massage next

This was nice here no doubt, wording was coo imo as well. Execution wasn't hard damaging but it did damage. Good shit John!

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got the coneshticof + Towelies swarming w/ the scope, fam.
I'll have John's heart cancelled if race is an issue like Roseanne

Lmao @bleak coming over to the darkside! Good shit here tho bleak and last line was crisp into a good execution as well. Def a damaging hit for me here!

Big props to both here, John getting in his groove and im loving his style already. Bleak has his ups and downs, but this week he cleaned it up and came for war! Overall I got bleak here barely just cause to me his punch had a little bit more impact behind it. Good shit to both tho!

V-Bleak

Blue Bayou · 08-24-2018, 11:04 AM

cool battle here, I think both bars are pretty nice

JD - Nice wordplay tat I haven't seen done on him tbh... good LoL factor on the nameplay and I think the way you finished the punch of 'telling me what to massage next' was a good tie in and way to go about it

Bleak - also a cool nameplay with an effective current event tie in.. the 'heart' part feels a little tossed in imo but fair enough & the race tie in worked well

Honestly this will prob come down to personal preference for voters as both were soid nameplays, I like John Dillinger's a bit better so he gets my vote

Big Bolo · 08-24-2018, 01:08 PM

Yo this was a dope ass battle for sure, jd came out swinging with that punch and I literally lold when I read it. Enjoyed it a lot. Then bleak came with a bar that I did have to Google to fully understand it but thought it was really cool after I understood it fully. So I guess for me it's going to come down to which one hit harder and had a bigger wow factor and imo I think that's JD, this was a hard decision for sure...

Twodrop · 08-24-2018, 02:15 PM

Both were good, thought Jd stung a little more.

v/ jd

Flow · 08-25-2018, 06:51 AM

Lol. Bleak cool but Dillinger had a lolz nameflips here. I mean we all seen the the girl saying O shit before but this was alot more fleshed out and creative then those from 5 years ago.

Vote jd

Cashius · 08-25-2018, 01:58 PM

I liked both. Felt John’s was a little smoother. I can appreciate trying to tie in the concept as much as possible, but this week bleak’s bar was a bit choppy for me. I had to google which kind of broke it up for me too. John’s was direct and impactful. Felt he could’ve worked a better angle in than just the massage part but was feeling his bar a bit more.

Vote-John

Jabari Black · 08-25-2018, 02:02 PM

Solid battle here. JD had a solid line. Pretty funny. The name flip was pretty slick. Only critique is the “only time she yell (insert name” lines arent too unique but you did it well. Slick line.

Bleak your bar was good as well imo. Concept was dope, I think execution let you down a bit. ‘John’s Heart’ is pretty good imo. Prob went over heads a bit but it works both ways. Rae is an issue would have been a cool tie in, but it doesn’t really tie in to anything. Overall I think you had the better idea but JD had the better execution.

This ones a lot closer than the votes imo but I gotta go with JD

MVGT JD

Sn: Bleak ive googles like your past 3 bars so that I can vote fairly. Idc if you google or not, but don’t be an asshole about it lol. Good work though my nigga.

Witty · 08-25-2018, 08:00 PM

Yeah JB got it. Both were quite good...I am pleasantly surprised at how much bleak has came along during his hiatus. I liked his shit, but JB was very clever.

For Battling · 08-25-2018, 08:10 PM

John Dillinger Wins 8-1

08-20-2018, 06:18 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Week 10: John Dillinger (0-1) vs. bleak (5-4) - JD WINS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY VOTING ENDS SUNDAY NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT @John Dillinger @bleak

08-21-2018, 04:37 PM	#3
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 886 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281356	snatched your girl from your crib, she was tired of this slob‘s nest the only time she yells Oblique is by telling me what to massage next Last edited by John Dillinger; 08-21-2018 at 04:43 PM. Reason: took a word out

08-24-2018, 10:06 AM	#6
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	8-1 John Dillinger Needs more votes. @Ghost1 @Amen @DynamiCz @Plot @Jabari Black @BodySnatcher @DMS @Killing Spree @Destroyer @Chyeahhh!!! @Cashius @Big Bolo @Dynomight @Flow @Blue Bayou @Twodrop @MMLP @Ryno @Unfukwitable Last edited by For Battling; 08-25-2018 at 08:04 PM.

08-24-2018, 10:11 AM	#7
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829178	snatched your girl from your crib, she was tired of this slob‘s nest the only time she yells Oblique is by telling me what to massage next This was nice here no doubt, wording was coo imo as well. Execution wasn't hard damaging but it did damage. Good shit John! -------------- got the coneshticof + Towelies swarming w/ the scope, fam. I'll have John's heart cancelled if race is an issue like Roseanne Lmao @bleak coming over to the darkside! Good shit here tho bleak and last line was crisp into a good execution as well. Def a damaging hit for me here! Big props to both here, John getting in his groove and im loving his style already. Bleak has his ups and downs, but this week he cleaned it up and came for war! Overall I got bleak here barely just cause to me his punch had a little bit more impact behind it. Good shit to both tho! V-Bleak __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

08-24-2018, 11:04 AM	#8
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	cool battle here, I think both bars are pretty nice JD - Nice wordplay tat I haven't seen done on him tbh... good LoL factor on the nameplay and I think the way you finished the punch of 'telling me what to massage next' was a good tie in and way to go about it Bleak - also a cool nameplay with an effective current event tie in.. the 'heart' part feels a little tossed in imo but fair enough & the race tie in worked well Honestly this will prob come down to personal preference for voters as both were soid nameplays, I like John Dillinger's a bit better so he gets my vote __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

08-20-2018, 07:29 PM	#2
John Dillinger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 886 Battle Record: 8-7 Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast Champed -Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 10281356	check, gl

08-22-2018, 07:19 PM	#5
Viper Member Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 74 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 271435	both of these was dope, john I like the wordplay and connections in ur bar. bleak urs was good too but I cud done more wit the concept V/john

08-24-2018, 01:08 PM	#9
Big Bolo B on the look out Join Date: Aug 2018 Location: Not being seen Posts: 785 Rep Power: 0	Yo this was a dope ass battle for sure, jd came out swinging with that punch and I literally lold when I read it. Enjoyed it a lot. Then bleak came with a bar that I did have to Google to fully understand it but thought it was really cool after I understood it fully. So I guess for me it's going to come down to which one hit harder and had a bigger wow factor and imo I think that's JD, this was a hard decision for sure...

08-24-2018, 02:15 PM	#10
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Both were good, thought Jd stung a little more. v/ jd

08-25-2018, 01:58 PM	#12
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257520	I liked both. Felt John’s was a little smoother. I can appreciate trying to tie in the concept as much as possible, but this week bleak’s bar was a bit choppy for me. I had to google which kind of broke it up for me too. John’s was direct and impactful. Felt he could’ve worked a better angle in than just the massage part but was feeling his bar a bit more. Vote-John

08-25-2018, 02:02 PM	#13
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	Solid battle here. JD had a solid line. Pretty funny. The name flip was pretty slick. Only critique is the “only time she yell (insert name” lines arent too unique but you did it well. Slick line. Bleak your bar was good as well imo. Concept was dope, I think execution let you down a bit. ‘John’s Heart’ is pretty good imo. Prob went over heads a bit but it works both ways. Rae is an issue would have been a cool tie in, but it doesn’t really tie in to anything. Overall I think you had the better idea but JD had the better execution. This ones a lot closer than the votes imo but I gotta go with JD MVGT JD Sn: Bleak ive googles like your past 3 bars so that I can vote fairly. Idc if you google or not, but don’t be an asshole about it lol. Good work though my nigga.

08-25-2018, 08:00 PM	#14
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	Yeah JB got it. Both were quite good...I am pleasantly surprised at how much bleak has came along during his hiatus. I liked his shit, but JB was very clever. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-25-2018, 08:10 PM	#15
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	John Dillinger Wins 8-1