02-12-2014, 08:33 PM | #1 |
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SHADOW BOXING rnd1 Swerve vs Tettris - TET WINS
Shadow Boxing
Swerve You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish, You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap, But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app. Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. Tettris Since I’ve been gone… I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance)
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02-12-2014, 08:58 PM | #2 |
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Lol gay ass name. Swerve Faggit^^ You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish, You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. Wording is awkward to me.... concept feels dated....personal is....personal lol You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap, But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app. This was played when mario came out....ask diode....this app is a mario rip off Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. This is ok....kind of a unique play on his name...tho im sure hes seen it to adnauseum(sp) I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. Not funny.... clear ur throat is an ok concept i guess...meh Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. Never heard of a tetrode....guess its military shock therapy? Lol....seems obscure Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. Blegh. I kno....their posts disapeared.... that shits boring tho. Tettris Since I’ve been gone… Like a few months....settle down guy. I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Did he? ..... i think he may have offered....this is so so concept wise tho Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair Ok....dont like powerchair....but concept is good Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin Nice. N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Hunchback lines r played as fuck. This was worded clean tho an he is a lumpy back goon Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon Nah. Swervs got that facial genetics of a porcelain god. Word association is played too. Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) Lame. This is tuff. I read it back a few times..... tett started out strong but then tapered off....i didnt like his last few bars much at all..... swerve was hot an cold.....all in all i had swerve with less misses and the misses he did have didnt miss as bad as some that tett had.... V swerve |
02-12-2014, 09:09 PM | #3 |
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Hi...
You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish, You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. The opener was is played but I like the way u worded it... I honestly have a Strikta post line already so now I have to change it... I used a flappy bird line last week but yours was decent... Not a bad verse... I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon solid verse but I wasn't feeling your closer... personals were on point... I think Tettris was a bit more consistent here... vote- Tettris... Bye...
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02-12-2014, 09:27 PM | #4 |
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Swerve had the opener and the shock therapy but felt some played stuff in there specially the tettris top line
Tett had the 100 which was dope and the hunchback hit as a personal, I felt ur verse was a bit more creative I got Tettris in a close one
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Opener, shock therapy, closer
Vs Opener, step to success, 100 V/ swerve, this was a closer one both had some nice bars an some played to tbh. I think swerves qouted hit harder an his non were a lilt better than tett but Tett Opener was dope. This real close could go either way tbh. Props on the battle yahll.
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02-12-2014, 09:37 PM | #6 |
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Vs 100 and the Hunchback V/Tettris - felt his punches landed more consist. And effectively. Flappy bird pun killed it for me, tbh after reading that concept for the 4th time this week. And just read it like 3 days ago from some medoicre dude on R B, lol. |
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You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. ^those where nice .. the opener was fire .. I don't remember seeing that flip on his name .. and I looked up the sock therapy line .. which made it connect other then that it woulda fell flat .. vs I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) ^that last bar is all I need to say ... Vote Tett welcome back .. |
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good shit swervy swerve
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02-13-2014, 02:27 PM | #10 |
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You as well, Tett.
Stupid RB losers coming up with lines before me. I feel dirty.
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You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. seen it waaay too many times, setup was relevant. You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap, But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app. nice attempt, just mario kinda played it out forever ago Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. decent angle on the nameplay.. tett mighta seen it before but i haven't I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. while the punch had some potential in it, i'm struggling to get over the rhyme, isn't it pronounced a-soph-o-gus also? Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. i see what you tried to do, it's a bit obscure to have any sort of big impact.. but not bad Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. didn't enjoy the rhyme, setup felt a tad forced. punch was too straight forwards i liked that you tried to go fresh with the flappy birds it just didn't pull through, a few highlights in your verse, some really creative parts and it was well written for the most part. enjoyed the read but i have seen better from you vs Since I’ve been gone… I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him nice try at the personal touch on the flip, it's been done a few times though Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair real relevance in the setup, good personal flip on the concept and well worded Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin building up a momentum here, strong personal bar N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump haha, i've seen it once or twice but fresh flip worded well Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon naa, the setup felt forced and the punch was too obvious Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) good closer, setup built the flow and gave the punch more impact, nice shit started slow but had a strong section in the middle and closed it off really well.. kept it personally direct throughout, wording was strong mostly.. still a little rusty on a few lines. but i think it was verse i enjoyed most, more clowning and some real creative angles. v/tett
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02-13-2014, 09:28 PM | #12 |
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Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. vs I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) this battle was dope, all in all tett was more consistent and his quotables also hit harder then swerves. hunchback was lotb imo with shadow boxing right behind it.. his non quotables had more impact as well. swerve had some semi played ish and had a couple bars that just didn't connect as hard as tetts did so for that i'm giving the lean to tettris by +1 in quotables and his non quotes having more impact. again dope battle, was a good read. |
02-14-2014, 12:49 AM | #13 |
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Swerve- opener was good. Top of the game was cool. Esophagus was lol.
Tettris-keep it 100 and hunchback lines were good. Wasn't really feeling the rest. I mean if its not a pic battle and you start going on about the way the guy looks the whole verse I feel like its a little bit of a cheap shot...that being said the crater face line was aight. I feel like swerve came harder here...more punches that hit for me Vote-swerve. Good shit guys. |
02-14-2014, 06:56 AM | #14 |
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You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. [nothing too witty here. straightforward. somewhat harsh i suppose] You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap, But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app. [nah bad bar. shuda said sumtn like i keep tapping & she hits the pipe. idk. im full of shit] Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. [this was a fresh nameplay on someone who's always getting tettris flips. gooood] I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. [nah this was very RBish man. too straightforward] Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. [this was cool. creative] Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. [set up killed it. shuda been slicker. concept is cool just fell a tad flat man] vs I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him [too straightforward. personal wasn't hard enuff for me] Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair [this was slick. slick set up slick punch. slick] Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin [nice. personals win battles.] N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump [seen too many Hunchback lines on him but the flip was cool] Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon [noooo. bad] Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) [nice wording. didn't like the concept tho] gooood battle. nice to see ya both back. i felt like Tet went a little more personal and tied in his set ups really well. it could go either way i just felt Tet's angles a little more. well done to both. vote Tet |
02-14-2014, 09:37 AM | #15 |
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Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. Vs. Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) Close but I got Tett by 1 and an overall better structured and consistent verse, dope shit guys. Vote- tettris |
02-14-2014, 01:01 PM | #16 |
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You battled Hush, Cronus and Lefty, that’s a feat to finish,
You’re practically a hall of famer…with all the verses that beat you in it. I liked this You think your girl love you and you’re the only man that can tap, But on the low she getting more pipe than the flappy birds app. No Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane, Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. Cool I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. kinda simple but still lold tbh Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. Cool Get money on this battle and the cash’ll be gone ‘fore I hit ya, Everything you put up would disappear so fast, you’ll feel like Witty and Strikta. Cool idea but it didn't hit hard imo vs I saw a glimpse into his social life n thought it was grim This insecure bitch tried to buy the site cuz no one ever bought into him Did swerve try to buy the site? I don't know if that's true....if it is, this was cool Plus Winter Warz bombed so heed what I’m bout to share Failure’s the first Step to success…n u need to be fitted for a powerchair lol Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin Nice and also true lol N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Cool wordplay, played concept tho Pimple faced punk. You knew I’d be shining and, dude… I’m throwing shade til your crater face resembles the dark side of the moon ehhh, not feeling it Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) Nice wording, decent punch This was a kinda on/off battle, both had some cool lines and both had lines that just should never have been written. I think both had 2 real quoteables, Swerve's first and the tetrode line were his best imo Tettris had the power chair line and the keeping it 100 line which I think was lotd so I'm gonna give it to him - vote Tettris.
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02-16-2014, 02:40 AM | #18 |
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Thinking he’s got a shot against the champ, the man is insane,
Tettris failed to reach the top so many times, he probably mastered the game. I clear my throat before I make demands, a high roller that’ll kill hostages, You clear your throat by pushing ya tonsils aside while your boyfriend fucks your esophagus. Any hype you EVER had was from dr, that shit doesn’t look fair to me, Fact is Tetrode all the vets for so long it looked like military shock therapy. vs Fuck outta here. Truthfully, u ain’t even worth mentionin Cuz to keep it 100…u couldn’t get a tourney started giving away a Benjamin N what’s up with ur pic? Wonder why I’m clowning u chump? I got a Hunchback in school u were a loser…and never got outta the Slump Comparing wits? Ur a fairy bitch that wants a bromance This is Shadow Boxing (i.e. an albino, scared of his, has absolutely no chance) this was kind of a toss up to be real close in quoteables, misses & hits.. but I'd slightly edge it to.. Swerve |
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